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nehaahish

@nehaahish

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Want more romance.

No end

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Manasvi

@abn0709

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Do you want me to wrap up the story with a chapter or 2? Pls don't end soon you can write more n more say 15 -20 more.
Do you wish to read any kind of separation track?..as I have no such plans. Not really a separation but misunderstanding ho Sakti hai..
Any other suggestion?? - you can introduce one more person to creat love trangle which will lead misunderstanding between Mehrya.

One more suggestions..pls add some hot romance yaar..hum Taras rahe hai..mehrya ke romance ke liye...apni romance queen bhi gayab hai..

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kamali870
Don't end DBR so quickly 😭
We want holi special update.
We want to read how these love filled version of Mehrya relationship growing steps to step😳
So many things are still there na, their confessions, date, spending time to knowing each other, permission and support to marry Mehak.

Oh my Kamali... I'm not intending to end it soon.

May be after mehrya marriage... I will wrap it up😊

Holi special update has been delayed coz of my busy schedule since the last two weeks

Wish to update soon..

Thanks a lot for your warm response🤗

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Thabassum19
Hey she dint even confess her feelings yet...and u r planning to end it ?
Not happening shinchan...

Seperation ? Hope it's not for long ...and qud love to read the twist and turns from your writings.. 😃

Thabs di...nope I won't end it 😃😆

I hate separation...but will include if there is any scope.

Twist and turns...am not good at that🤣

Thanks a lot for the suggestion di..🤗

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AD04
Hii Shinu 😛
Please dont end this story so fast ...give ur twists what ever u want. ...lil.separation also i wont mind . .but please plan it gradually what ever u want to plan. ..cz if u want to end story in 2 chapters...so it will feel like it is rushed up. . Their are so many things remaining in their story 😉

Awww...Aarti di.🤗

Really get your points di..😃

Will go with the flow...😃

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: josejen
Why do you want to end this story too fast???
Give us some Mehrya moments.
But still it's your choice...

One request Shinu. Plz write an OS. I want to read one hilarious OS 😉 😆 😆

Ok Jen di... I won't end it so soon😊

Really value your suggestions di..😊

Jen di I have written a hilarious one few days before...guess you haven't read it😆

Will find that thread for sure..😃

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Haseena2020
Hi Shinu pie maybe you may add some little separation or misunderstandings something .
I respect your hardwork and your creativity. Since you hv asked for our opinion do take time and think how you want to mold this story in the upcmg chapters.
Wish you all the best and do continue soon . 😉😉

Thankyou so much Haseenaa di...🤗

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87
Itni jaldi kya hai Bhai? Let the story proceed at its own pace. N plz no separation plans. Instead u can concentrate on how Shaurya would patao Mehek's family for marriage. 😉

Oho..no jaldi JB😆

Our thoughts really do match...👍🏼

Thanks a lot for your response..🤗

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Chandana2010
Oye yeh kya sun rahi hu 😲
no way 😆
abhi tho picture baki hi mere yaar 😆
chupke chuoke milna nA hi
ghoomna hi movie Jana hi kuch hot romance hona hi
oh God meri llistbahuth hi
separation 😭 OK but only few because days jissse vo our pass aajaye 😳

Anu di... I was waiting for your response..😆

Awww..never ending list..😃😆

Will not end it soon...😊