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dwriter

@dwriter

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nehaahish
Want more romance.
No end

Hello dear...

Hearty welcome to the forum🤗

Thanks a bunch for your response dear...😛

It won't be ending soon...

Stay tuned😊

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: abn0709

Do you want me to wrap up the story with a chapter or 2? Pls don't end soon you can write more n more say 15 -20 more.
Do you wish to read any kind of separation track?..as I have no such plans. Not really a separation but misunderstanding ho Sakti hai..
Any other suggestion?? - you can introduce one more person to creat love trangle which will lead misunderstanding between Mehrya.
One more suggestions..pls add some hot romance yaar..hum Taras rahe hai..mehrya ke romance ke liye...apni romance queen bhi gayab hai..

Awww .. Manasvi...w😊

Not sure about 15 more chapters as it is a short story..😃

Misunderstanding..not in plan but will think about it..😊i

Love. Triangle...will see😆vo

Oh my.. Manasvi.. I don't know how to write hot romance.😳😆

But will try to write...

Please do pardon me for my flaws then ..a

Thanks for the suggestion. Manasvia🤗

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Awww...am overwhelmed to receive such a heartwarming response from all of you.🤗

DBR..is my first ever full fledged story.

Just thought of penning down a story focusing on the natural feeling of love setup in a reunion background.

The lovely words of appreciation from you all forced me to visualize the scenes better.

Wish to write better and keep up all your expectations..😊

Thanks a ton for this unconditional love and support...🤗❤️

Gratitude😳

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Octothorpe

@Octothorpe

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dwriter

Hey there my sadist dosth... 😆😆
Separation... I hate it.. especially for this story😭😆

What about your story Hash??😲

It's your story. You gotta tell it your way😉

My story😲. I'm working on other story right now. MehRya story is scraped😆

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

It's your story. You gotta tell it your way 😉

My story😲. I'm working on other story right now. MehRya story is scraped😆

Noo😭😭

This isn't fair Hash...

Please continue that story na..

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Octothorpe

@Octothorpe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dwriter

Noo 😭😭
This isn't fair Hash...
Please continue that story na..

I lost the track of it. I don't remember what story I had in mind😆.

Also, I have taken this new story in hand too. 😳

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dwriter

@dwriter

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

I lost the track of it. I don't remember what story I had in mind 😆.
Also, I have taken this new story in hand too. 😳

Hope you get back to the same soon..😊