Falling in love 3 --- NEW update pg 37!!!

I made

Falling in love

and Falling in love 2

I couldn't help it so I made a 3rd one. It's another sweet romance but alittle different. I wouldn't start unless everyone wants me to. So here is the intro!!

:::INTRO:::

It started something like this.........

This is a conversation among 10-12 year olds.

Suhana: When I grow up i will become a supermodel.

Rema: so what?? main superstar banoongi.

Aayan: haha! Main to already hero hoon. Aur tum kya banogi Kanya?

Kanya: main....mMmm I will be a princess.

Suhana: princess aur tum???

Rema: ewww tum to khoobsurat bhi nahi ho.

Suhana: If you want to be a princess you will need a Prince. Aur tumhe kabhi Prince nahi milegi.

Rema: You are so skinny.

Aayan: tum log Kanya ko kyon cher te ho? I like her.

Suhana: You are only one who does!!! [starts laughing]

Kanya starts crying and runs. She bumps into Malika.

M: are beti kya hua?

K: [sobbing and wiping her tears off at the same time] Kuch nahi aunty mujhe ghar jaana hai.

M: Kyon beti. Party abhi tak khatam nahi huyi.

K: Nahi aunty mujhe ghar jaana hain.

M: [wiping her tears off, kisses her forehead] thik hai, Main tumhari mummy papa ko call karti hoon.

He calls her parents but the line is not going through. probably because of the rain.

M: Kanya line nahi jaa rahi hai. Tum thora der intezaar karo. Barish ho rahi hain.

K: [she looks over to suhana and Rema. They will be mean to her again] Aunty mujhe ghar jaana hai. Main akeli hi chale jaoongi.

M: Main jaanti hoon tumhari ghar paas hain beti but tum akele kaise jaogi. Just wait. Main kuch karti hoon. Tumhe Ranbir ghar chodega.

She goes and stands by the door. Looking at the rain.

R: Hi. [holding the umbrella over them]

K: [she looks up] Hi....[he is Aayan's cool 17 yr old chachu. All the girls talk about him!!! she never talked to him before. Ooo Suhana and Rema will be so jealous]

R: Chale??

K: [nodds]

They are are walking outside.

R: tum ro rahi thi?

K: nahi to.

R: jhoot maat bolo. Mom ne kaha tum ro rahi thi.

K: [doesn't say anything]

R: jhoot kehna acchi baat nahi hain. But...tum ro kyon rahi thi?

K: Rema aur Suhana ne kaha main khoobsurat nahi hoon, aur mujhe kabhi bhi Prince nahi milega.

R: Baas?? itni si baat?? Woh log aise hi shararat karti hain. But tum khoobsurat ho...bohut bohut bohut khoobsurat ho. Is liye woh log tumse jalte hain. Aur dekhna ek din tumhe zaroor Prince milega.

K: [she giggles]

R: tum ek kaam karo. Ghar jakar ek diary banalo.

K: kyon?

R: So you can write about all this. jab tum bara ho jaogi aur tumhe apna Prince mil jayega to tum yaad karogi ke Rema aur suhana ne tumhe kiss tarase satati thi. Aur tum haas parogi. Ho sakta tum mujhe bhi yaad karogi.

K: [she looked up and gave him a big smile]

R: lo tumhara ghar aagaya hai madam. Aab jao. Aur suno don't pay attention to the silly things Rema and Suhana says. Tum khoobsurat ho. Unse jyada. Aur tum jab bari ho jaogi naa to unke to khabar ho jayegi.

K [giggles]

R: [smiles] Good night.

K: Good night.

And then he leaves.

That night she wrote her 1st entry.

March 1st, 1999

Today I fell in love

10 years later................and it begins....

OMg plz plz write it i dun even no y ur asking lol

OMG let me tell you i think this is gonna be nice
btw.....i wanna tell you i luv ur ff's 😳
keep it up 😉

VERY interesting...plz continue but don't forget about Falling in Love TWO! 😃 😃

when are you continuing is all i am asking????? it was amazing 👏
👏 👏

it sounds really gud plz cont soon 😳

awwwwww.... soo cute. write it please. for us.

aww soo cute! i loved it..cant wait till they get older! plzz continue soon 😊

aww that's soo kool like where do u get these idea 👏 plz do write soon in this one and ur other 2 as well i love them as well =)

omg Perfangel5655 i can never live up to the fan-fictions that you write... Ekta should totally hire you

Applause for your brillant work!! 👏