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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Thanks 😊

Hi K and S,

One solution I found to fix this problem is, to type your story in a note pad. If you copy and directly paste the same text in the message body of IF, quotation marks will not disappear. I tried it by editing one of my old posts and it seems to be working.

Cheers...

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Ssanjinika
Okay, I went back and re-read the chapters again, this time keeping your questions in mind 😊
Let me see if I can provide logical answers to your doubts.
Arnav after finishing his degree went abroad to do his masters. Assuming an MS is what he wanted to do, he would have completed it in two years and maybe instead of staying in the US, he returned back to India in time for Payal to enter into her final year of engineering Payal was in her first year when he was in his final year. Beginning of her first year, he saw her. A year later, she would have just been completing her first year(am thinking a year doesn't mean an actual year)
Arnav lived in Delhi when he was studying but it was very likely he would have settled down in the city where he had studied when he returned back to India. And hence bought a beach house in the Mangalore doesn't seem very far-fetched. Actually, even if he had been living
in Delhi, that he would want to purchase a place in a city he loved, doesn't seem very far-fetched though I do think the probability of the first scenario his higher.
About the rescue, from what I understood, reading between the lines in the prologue, the gang seemed to be engrossed in their own pleasure. It didn't seem as though they noticed Khushi in the water or realized that she had been unwillingly rescued.
In any case, I don't think anyone knew Payal had introduced Arnav and Khushi or that Khushi realized that Arnav was Payal's boyfriend.
Oh, I am enjoying discussing things like this!! Missed this!!
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And thank you so much for the compliment! I am super glad you liked it! 🤗

I would love to discuss too! But the time difference won't allow me to continue the discussion in real time with many of you.

K has already thrown a googly at us. So, the story can go in any direction.

Coming back to our discussion

On the day at the beach, Khushi could clearly see Payal and the gang from where she was standing in the water.

Then how can everyone in the gang miss, Arnav running to Khushi to save her, carrying her to the shore, Khushi wiggling in his hands, Khushi shouting at him and asking him to put her down and her final yelling that she was a champion swimmer?

Payal introduced Khushi to Arnav as her sister before he saw Khushi at the night club. So, there is a chance that she made that introduction at the beach.

For unknown reasons Arnav is not too thrilled to be in the company of Payal's friends and her friends can't stand Payal's boy friend. This part definitely makes us think that Arnav is Payal's boy friend.

I will speak about the rest in a later post.

Cheers...

Edited by Savera84 - 7 years ago

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Anna Thomas

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Hi friend,
Welcome .Hope you remember me. You definitely promised me that ,will let me know of your new creations.Yes,long ago.

And happy to hear you again.🤗

Love

Annasabu

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Kshiti has added lot of suspense to the story.

Rishab's anger streak, his attempts to make Khushi accept his marriage proposal, Vishakha not being in touch with Ramya, Rakesh avoiding the gang etc.,

If Arnav was indeed Payal's boy friend and if he really dumped Payal after graduating from college, then he needs to have a very strong reason to return to the country where nothing was left for him (his own words) and to return to the same city, where he so rudely dumped his girl friend two years ago.

On the day before rescuing Khushi at the beach, he vowed to take full control over his future.

That makes me wonder, was Payal telling the truth? Did the gang get the facts right? Can Arnav be so insensitive?

And the million dollar question - where is Arnav now?

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anjs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

interesting story... Payal's friend seem too judgemental... if Payal committed suicide how is that Arnav's fault... good that Khushi had interacted with him before and know he is not that bad or evil...

Rishabh seems like a wrong guy, with the temper issues, guys like him dont take a 'No' from the woman and I hope Khushi stays far away from him...

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Shaivya Clo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

I have loved reading all your stories, but never commented- excited to read another story of yours! welcome back :)

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charlotte74

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Savera84

Hi K and S,
One solution I found to fix this problem is, to type your story in a note pad. If you copy and directly paste the same text in the message body of IF, quotation marks will not disappear. I tried it by editing one of my old posts and it seems to be working.
Cheers...

Hi,

I did try it with Notes on Mac and it hadn't worked. But I will try notepad on a windows machine and give it a shot.

Thanks so much for trying guys. I really appreciate it 😊

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Richelle

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Awesome ff...really love the concept. Loved Arnav n Khushi first meet. Khushi already has a proposal which she is nt redi to accept. Arnav being blamed for Payal's death. Interesting