An Unusual Compromise: a Darcy/Elizabeth story | IF-NC_Entry| Ch3-pg.5 - Page 4

Hope she doesn't try too hard to live up to the promise. Whatever he asks will not be good.

Loved the intermixing of narrative style with the technique of indirect speech with the words that typify the main character's thoughts. By using your well-crafted narrative, you set the tone and vocabulary for your particular theme and your own character Elizabeth[ yes saying it because, you created her in your imagery, not an imitated one, that is simply great ], who grabs the attention of the reader to follow events from Elizabeth's viewpoint, which is invoking immense interest to know what will happen in the next chapter. The writing style, the using of right words with a clear perspective has commendably represented and reflected in this story, where the disparity between the middle-class weaknesses and aristocratic society's arrogance and prejudices were clearly visible here.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Hope she doesn't try too hard to live up to the promise. Whatever he asks will not be good.

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Loved the intermixing of narrative style with the technique of indirect speech with the words that typify the main character's thoughts. By using your well-crafted narrative, you set the tone and vocabulary for your particular theme and your own character Elizabeth[ yes saying it because, you created her in your imagery, not an imitated one, that is simply great ], who grabs the attention of the reader to follow events from Elizabeth's viewpoint, which is invoking immense interest to know what will happen in the next chapter. The writing style, the using of right words with a clear perspective has commendably represented and reflected in this story, where the disparity between the middle-class weaknesses and aristocratic society's arrogance and prejudices were clearly visible here.

Great work .🤗

Hi readers! Sorry, but I'm pulling out of the contest due to inability to meet the deadlines. I'm in the process of moving homes and with a small baby at home, it's hard to write the chapters so quickly. I do plan to finish this story, just at a slower rate. I'll post it all at once when I'm done.

trying to see if any update :)