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Stardust91

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks everyone...will see what I can come up with RE turning this into an FF

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hii first of congratulations for ur new os cum ff

And secondly all the best

Coming to this part it was something which u picked situations from naagin I guess

But must say nice attempt

Bela for her love wanted to leave mahir

And mahir on the other hand was amandant to fight together

Touchy were the bits where kuhu accident happened and how the baby was saved

Do continue and finish the ff

Looking forward for the story so update soon 😃

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Vrishthi04

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice concept

Do cont.

It's awesome to see the revengeful mahir in this ff atleast as its impossible 2 see in the show

Waiting for next part

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Sunshine-1

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Posted: 7 years ago

You have written it so well, must continue this one 😃

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