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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow this was such a beautiful and unique story loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
absolutely enjoyed reading this story!!
loved the ending the most!

pls update tangled soon or i'll have to re-read this story 😛 and tangled 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Wow this was such a beautiful and unique story loved it so much.


Thanks so much!
happy to read your comments and that you enjoyed the story :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice story..
quite a different one...
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Posted: 6 years ago
That's sad that he's not alive but as long as they are together, he is very much alive with his Khushi...
That was a very interesting story with a very unexpected ending... many times you made me think that maybe he is alive somewhere or he got murdered by Anjali or Khushi will die too... But this is good...
I read comments and I do agree with them that you should write more... Would love to read... Thanks for sharing it...
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Posted: 6 years ago

RES

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Every once in a while mujhe jhatka lagta hai. I start craving ArHi and then I visit the Forum hoping and praying that mere jaise deewane aur honge who still love ArHi. And I get so glad when I get to read a good story from one such fellow-deewani.

Firstly, I am not a horror person and I believe for the only time in my life I am saying that this was such a cute story...with a ghost as a protagonist!

Their individual personalities, their journey of falling in love, their efforts to know each other better and the desperation to be together... haiye... maar daala

Both lived a loveless life. Both were interested only in their work-life; one to achieve heights of success and the other to just make ends meet. And both didnt even have any real family or support system to fall back on. So similar... so similar... such a perfect match that they had to transcend the realms of mortality to find each other and be together.

Makes me wonder... what their story would have been if Arnav hadn't died. If they had met in real life. Likho na please :P

I really liked your writing style. Concise but comprehensive.

PS: I also loved your the entire Anjali angle was handled

PPS: Arnav will have to watch Khushi grow old and die :( Even though I am sure death in their case will be welcomed by them... it is a helpless state to be in

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Posted: 6 years ago

Sorry for the delay.

I finally unresed above :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

It was simply beautiful. Enjoyed reading it very much.

Their bond was quite unique and fascinating. Loved the ending and how his existence depends on her existence.

Khushi nahi toh arnav nahi. 👏


You are a wonderful writer, please continue again and if you have other arshi stories,do tell us. 😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbug

absolutely enjoyed reading this story!!loved the ending the most!

pls update tangled soon or i'll have to re-read this story 😛 and tangled 😊

Thanks a lot!

I tried to keep the ending realistic-ish despite the premise :)

(I'm on route to updating Tangled :D)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Pdrover

Very unique awesome story

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

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