CID Mehrya FF (Part 1- Page 3)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Everyone
Though I am left with 3 updates. But, afteayr My one full chapter got deleted then I don't feel like writing anything. Will post all the updates after EXAMS.
But I want to post something New.
Ignore Typos Plzzz
CID...

Prologue
Mehak Sharma- A girl of mid 20s. She belong to rich Family. She wants to be a dedicated officer that can serve India whole-heartedly. Now, She is ACP hvaing transfer from Delhi to Mumbai.

Shaurya Khanna- A Boy of late 20s. He belong to middle-class family. He want to serve India by all means. So, He became CID officeer. Now he is Senior Officer.

Other Officer-
Daya

Abhijeet

Shreya

Purvi

Naksh

Aastha

Forenic Expert
Avni

Tarika
Prologue
Mehak sitting on her study going through the cases that were the reason tht she is going to get transferred from Delhi to Mumbai. There were many unsolved cases in Mumbai that need the attention of Best Leader that is Mehak Sharma. All she was suppose is to lead officers to have a perfect grip on Criminal's neck. She was all set. She had packed her stuffs going through file 15th time add some notes in her dairy where she left space for adding more. When she was satisfied with herself she went to sleep.
Next Day, She took her flight to Mumbai. After some hours she reached there. Her parents had bought a bungalow for her. She went there and got fresh. She looked at the wall clock it shows 11. So, she decided to leave for Bureau.
At Bureau, No one was aware of new ACP. Shaurya was head incharge till ACP's arrival. Mehak came inside the bureau. All were working properly. She was amazed to see that. She greeted evryone with simple Good Morning Everyone. This caught evryone's attention. She said- I'm Mehak new part to Mumbai's CID branch. All introduced themselves. She went to ACP's cabin at had her seat. Shaurya who was coming from somewhere shouted- Hey! u new girl. What r u doing there? Its not your place. Can't u see its ACP's Cabin. How dare u sat there. Mehak came outside calm n he was till shouting at her saying one thing or another. Mehak lost her temper n asked-Who r u to stop me? Shaurya- Senior Officer n Head Incharge of this branch till New ACP arrives. Mehak- So, get this into ur head I'm Mehak Sharma... Before she could continue Shaurya- Toh Naam hi mala japun n again started shouting at her. Mehak- Shut Up just Shut Up. Mehak shouted her lungs out. All were shocked. U Mr. Head Incharge listen I'm ACP Mehak Sharma. ACP. Get that n that's my chair I'll sit there. Any more query. And Yes before shouting Investigate First. Leaving everyone shocked she went inside her cabin.
Will post Part 1 on 6 December.
Do comment n share your views about this story.
Should I continue or Not.
Her Bungalow Looks like

His Bungalow Looks Like

CID bureau Looks like

Mehak's dress

Shaurya's dress

Imagination...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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What a lovely character sketch 😳
Besides I also loved DIVYANKA in this... she's my fav šŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wooow Anu... Beautiful start.. .. Mehrya is too adorable as. Officers šŸ˜›
Character sketch is good .šŸ˜›
Mehrya already locked their horns šŸ˜›šŸ˜†
Interesting šŸ˜›
Do continue soon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome prologue Anu šŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow mehrya as CID officers...that's different nd great Junior...šŸ‘
Congratulations for your new FF Anu...šŸ¤—
Loved the prologue nd the characters too...
Their first meeting was full of tashan...
Hope amidst these investigations nd all their love story would bloom soon...
Plz do continue soon..excited to read further.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow that was so cool choti.šŸ‘
prologue and intro was dhamakedar.šŸ‘šŸ¼
plz continue.😊
will love to read the new story with very different flavor of CID 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Woow this is an nice attempt ...reading MehRya as CID officers wud be new and different ...
The encounter of MehRya was tashanfull...
Let's see how u take the story further ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Have a question to ask
1st case simple pasand kroge yaan phir terrorist wala?????????
Aapki Voting ke according hoga
1. Khoon
2. Bank robbery
3. Terrorist Attack 1 Jan
Voting till midnight 3 decšŸ˜‰
Mujhe bhi likhna hai
Sorry by mistake 2 dec type kr diya
Edited by ddramaqueen - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I would love anything you would pen down sweety but i want to have the suspense as well as thriller.so u can write either one.
Murder mystery would be good option i guess baki u decide what u want to write i will read 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Anu, poora CID team ke saath aur bhi interesting characters you have pulled in here. Mehek
in Mumbai to nail the criminals and send them to their well deserved place, the prison.
Mehek's goes fortthe silent kill and enters her office and gets seated comfortably much to
annoyance of Shaurya who thinks she is trespassing. Nice intro there of the leads Anu.
Congratulations šŸ‘on this new story which already looks interesting, go on and post your
next part, I leave the choice to you. All plots look intriguing and would be a good read.ā­ļø

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