Akdha SS Blood relation or love Chapter 4 on page 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Update soon

Glad you enjoy the update 😳

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Will try to do so 😊

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Sorry for the late reply Di

That's alright 😊

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

thanx for pm .

naughty jalal , clever jo...😆

now what next ??

Your welcome😊

Don't know let's see what next 😆

Nevertheless I am glad you enjoy 😳

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Originally posted by: natashathakur

Superb chapter n thnxx for pm

Glad you enjoy😳

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Originally posted by: James12

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It's must be your 6 try on Modern Fiction right

your friend plot or your style to write for me the stories Idea here seems very Cool😉

every story had something different and

that's very Interesting part here good going 👏

so this is about family and there expectation

reputation and persons own expectation and

there own feeling what they will choose or

what will be come for them Impressive very

Impressive 👍🏼

Yes you're right I am glad you enjoy and appreciate the plot and my way to write them thank you

Indeed every story have one other thing to offer with one common thing a lesson and moral but I write for entertainment

I am glad you have interest in this and you're looking forward to it this mean allot thank you

Originally posted by: James12

Part 1

Sibling relation here are well portray

Kinda fond of it👍🏼 myself as having two

devil sissy😉

Anyway it was quite fun to see the little banter

between Jo and her bro Sid 😉

both family are having slight difference of

Religion And Class sound interesting 😉

even the Collaboration of parents in both

family is quite appreciable 👏

lovely starting of story must say

quite impressive looking forward to it😊

😆 every relation have it's own fun if there's love

But sibling and friends relation are always joyous😆

The first chapter I wanted to start with good note 😳so here I try to write about both family which are going to be most important part in this story 😉and I am glad you enjoyed 😳and liked it😃 thanks for comment 🤗

Originally posted by: James12

Part 2

The conversation between Jo and her

Dad seems very interesting and sensible 👍🏼

Jesus Christ Kiddo🤣 this Sweet nick name

of Jo by her dad is very 🤣

But again Parents happiness lie on there kids😊

while Kids can never be happy if they know they

disappoint there parents😔 no matter what they

do that's why they always like to get approval

of them in there every matter😉

As no matter how modern we get we are nothing

without our parents for sure and this can be answer

with more fact by the one who had no parents

Alright so here Ja got Smitten by girl who is

none either then Jo impressive 😉

even his Conversation with his Sister was 😎

Ahaan Smart Jo didn't reveal her name to him

good going nice update 👍🏼

"Yeah it was serious conversation but with hint of wisdom and slight hestitation there is point to see both didn't wanted offend other or evoke insecurity in heart if they take decision of their life on own

Well my dad call me Kiddo as well I to find it funny so I don't mind if it's make you laugh 😆

Must say you penned down exact my thoughts here

Yes here right now they're out of nonsense love so they're smart but later who knows

Anyway thanks for lovely review🤗 I am glad you enjoy the update 😳