Season2 OS: After the Match#3: Final Buzzer Epilogue pg 38 9/11

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Chandana2010
Good evening Kelly hru
Hope you enjoyed alot 😛

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Wow it was a beautiful epilogue Kelly
So beautifully written
He was so sad that he forced the marriage so soon because he is going to training camp but she is a perfect wife she undersood his feelings n tells him we are team shourya
Their hot romantic moments very well written she is so bold n hot girl 😛
In his absence he invites her friends to accompany her
N when returns Bach then had gone they understood meheks feelings n went back to India
He admires her when she came to meet him n anotger player said he is so lucky that he git so beautiful wife
Now she joind school as a coach of mixed students when he reach the court he accept that she is a better coach than him no doubt in that
N again they played one on one but who ever wins both gets their prize equally😳
Wow Kelly superb
In between you erase some lines Kya 😛
Thanks for the beautiful ending 😛
Pls continue other stories too 😛

Hey Anu, I am doing well. last day of my vacation before we head on home, and then thankfully the remainder of the weekend is there to enjoy before heading back to work.

I really enjoyed writing this version of Mehrya, and wanted to give them a really good send off, so thought it best showing them enjoying married life and their budding careers. You are right Mehek is definitely not shy in this story, in my mind, such a fierce competitor would be as bold as I've portrayed her, once she got the hang of things😉😆 . At the same time I thought that it made for a wonderful juxtaposition that this modern young woman is such a stickler for tradition as it pertains to her bridal chura and wedding chain. Shaurya on the other hand, is definitely the perfect husband, and together I imagine they will make a wonderful team.

Moving back to my other writings with DTM being the first stop. Will PM when the next chapter is ready to go.

Thanks again for the fb😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: anjali45
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Hope you return soon Anjali😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: bworm
Hope you are safe Kelly, take care.
Loved it. U was wondering what Mehek would do, but you out it together so well.

They are a team and live to challenge each other...And reap the rewards😉

Thanks for the pm

We were fine, especially since the hurricane passed south of us, and the fact that we went abroad anyway😉. We closed up the house to be the safe side and carried on with our planned vacation, which was great.

As to the story, I think what I came up with was the best result for a girl like Mehek. They are living their best lives together, and as you say live to challenge each other, with very satisfactory results it seems😳😆.

Thanks for commenting on this one...it was a fun version of Mehrya to pen😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Thabassum19
Guess I missed the last chapter ...I read both and there comes new chapter as a surprise...
It was beautiful and fun to read...
Loved how Mehak was bickering continiously Shaurya abt the topic Love 😆 she thought he was virgin...
But his answer of making love and sex , irked her more and she started her cute fight antics with him ..but finally managed tto get some rest ...Shaurya was just concerned about her she dint understand that and left him in the morning without any proper words...but thanks to her friend for the right advice , she got to know what Shaurya feels and tried to make up things good between them ...and ended up seeing the guy whom her friends adviced to stay away from ..that night ...good thing about all that song and singer is Shaurya cud'nt bare to see Mehak with Sumone else and went to get his girl ...
Thier dance armist the song and crowd and his proposal ...
Was beautifully written ...I heard the song too it was nice ...
And then come epilogue where Shaurya and Mehak were man and wife...they were completely one and belonged to each other ...like the way how he cared for her and she gave her goal to be with him ...but he made sure she gets a company when he is away from her and made sure he put the girls together as gang...but more to surprise ...Mehak became football coach and shaurya was living his dream ..these two walkiing besides each other with full of love , life ahead..
Great updates ...adorable end...⭐️

Mehek of this story is certainly a handful, but I suspect Shaurya rather likes that about her😳😆. As long as she stays away from any intoxicating beverages she is rather rational, but there is no doubt that drunk Mehek is a lot of fun too,

I'm glad you love the song, I heard it, fell in love, and had to incorporate it as it fit the situation so well. It made for quite the soundtrack to Shaurya overture of love to his lady. He pulled out all the stops to convince her that he loves her intensely.

And so they get married, and are settling quite well together, Shaurya following his dream, and Mehek happening upon her own satisfactory occupation just worked out well, IMO😛

Thanks so much for commenting Thabs, it is really nice to see you back on my threads😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: friendlyghost08
Thanks for this lovely epilogue 🤗
Their hot romance ...shaurya tensed up thinking had he done wrong with her to wed hastily and shifted to another country. .mehek sense his tension without his telling her...then mehek's journey as a coach in a school...the understanding and respect between them...all of that u portrayed in such a beautiful way👏
Totally loved it ...thanks for the pm...plzz update DTM❤️

Thank you so much Lima😛. I really needed a great conclusion for this version of Mehrya. They were too fun to write about.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Thanks for this romantic hot ending
yes it would be nice to read more from you but i understand that life gets in the way

you are most welcome Sharl. Now back to my other writings😛

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Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

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The end ?? I thought you will give us few more series here ...I would not have minded reading final buzzer Z as well 😆

I read last 2 updates and loved reading it ... specially the dance scene and Shaurya making it more special for mahek by adding the vedio clip of their journey..

He proposed and they got married and settled in a new country ...loved reading whole epilogue and the mystery behind the surprise 😆

And the last scene was beautifully written...they are truly made for eachother ...just a perfect couple...match made in court ☺️

Thank you for penning down this story Kelly...hope to read more stories on season 2 😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shamz15
The end ?? I thought you will give us few more series here ...I would not have minded reading final buzzer Z as well 😆
I read last 2 updates and loved reading it ... specially the dance scene and Shaurya making it more special for mahek by adding the vedio clip of their journey..

He proposed and they got married and settled in a new country ...loved reading whole epilogue and the mystery behind the surprise 😆

And the last scene was beautifully written...they are truly made for eachother ...just a perfect couple...match made in court ☺️

Thank you for penning down this story Kelly...hope to read more stories on season 2 😛

I'm glad you got around to finishing reading this OS series Shamz. Who knows maybe one day I will be inspired enough to add on to it. This version of Mehrya were quite different from their original characterizations and I had a great time coming up with different scenarios for them.

Really appreciate the fb😊