Samaina SS - Patch Up. Pt 2 dt 31 july pg 5

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Samaina SS - Patch Up

It's based on current breakup track when naina got to know her alliance is fixed with that sharan guy and our dashing sameer is in devdas mode.

Today eve (naina house)..
Taiji n sharan mother hugged and congratulate each other for alliance and fed sweets to each other . Chacha chachi ji were not at home. While naina and preeti were standing behind door , no one asked naina wish and her relation with random guy got fixed. Millions of thoughts were going in naina's mind , yes she chose her family for their happiness but that doesn't mean she can marry other guy , she can't even think of any guy other than sameer. Flashbacks of their happy time was roaming in front of her eyes. Unwanted tears came in her beautiful almond eyes without her permission.

Preeti being her greatest support know her misery , determined she made up her mind to re unite her jija ji and her lovely sister . Both went in room.

Preeti (straight forward) - "kya tu ye shadi krna chahti hai? "

Naina looked up , puffed eyes - " preeti.. yu janti hai na me sirf sameer se pyar krti hu..Kisi or shadi me soch bh nh sakti.. "

Preeti - " toh chal mere sath.."

Naina (confused ) - " kahan ? "

Preeti - " jijaji ke ghar .. "

Naina - " par.. "

she tried to stop but preeti angry glare made her quiet. She know she can't love without sameer n she herself wanted to meet him.. so she followed hee angry sister..

In maheshwari house..
Munna pandit as always tried to cheer sameer but no use. He was sulking slowly slowly Mano he don't want live anymore , not wanna be happy anymore.. they were talking and suddenly phone rang. Sameer didn't respond and munna had to pick up the phone.

Munna - hello..

From other side - " hello.. jija ji ? Me preeti bol rh hu.".

Munna (angry) - " jijaji nahi..Me munna bol rha hu..Ab kyu phone kiya hai yahan.."

Preeti - " munna dhyan se suno.." (n she narrated whole incident to him , he was shocked )

Preeti -" me naina ko lekar abi wahan aa rh hu.. "

Munna looked at lifeless sameer -" aa jao.. waise bh koi nahi hai ghar pe.. me bahar wait karta hu.."

He kept the phone down and told pandit everything. They knew it's the right moment.. Aaj nahi to Kabhi nahi..

After 15 min.
Naina n preeti were at maheshwari house gate , pandit n munna went to receive them. Naina was continusly crying..

Pandit - " waise to naina jo tune sameer ke sath kiya hai hum chahte to nahi tu firse usse mile par hume pta hai wo tujse bhot pyar krta hai or tu hi use wapis jeena sikha sakti hai.."

Naina - " firse jeena..matlab ? Kya hua hai.. sameer ko ? "

Munna - " are jabse tu use chodke gyi hai usne jeena hasna khana sb chod diya hai..Hamse tak bat nahi krta..Din b din duniya se durr hota ja rha hai.."

Naina - " mujhe sameer se milna hai.. abhi.."

Pandit - " thk h tu andar ja..Hum bahar hi wait krte hai..Koi aaya to bta denge.. "

Mudit and preeti left outside to keep watch while naina went inside hesitantly..

In room,
With each step of naina sameer heartbeat was increasing.. air was telling him she is here. But he ignored his heart. Door was wide open , naina stopped at door. She saw him sitting lifeless and blamed herself for his conditions.

Her voice get struck in throat , she murmurs - " sameer.. " it was so slow that even she couldn't hear herself but sameer did. He heard her , her heartbeat , her breathing , her trembling voice.. the person who had stoped responding finally respond to her ,her whisper.. he looked up and saw her standing on door.

( Let me tell you naina is wearing blue saree with gold border , it's a simple saree but she looks so beautiful.. hairs were done curly , eyes were adorned with Kohl and lips were shipping because of pink lip gloss , in short she was looking heavenly )

Sameer stands up from his place , he was not able to belive his naina was there that too in saree , crying.. why ? What happen?

Both took slow steps and came face to face.. after whole 1 month and 13 days they were seeing each other. Seeing her weeping continuously sameer eyes also got filled up, he raised his hand to wipe those pearls but he remind everything how naina broke up with him, how she left him for her family..

He turned backside , naina was dumbstruck seeing his reaction..
Sameer (angry and sad) - " ab kyun aai ho yahan ? Muje rota dekhne ? Ye dekhne ki tumhare bina me jee bhi rha hu ya nahi ?"

Naina (crying) -" sameer.. plzz aise mat kaho.. m sorry.."

He turned , facing her - " sorry ? Really naina? Itna aab krne ke bad sorry kafi hai ? "

Naina - " muje pata hai ek sorry kafi nahi par plz muje maaf krdo sameer .. me darr gyi thi or muje laga wahi sahi hai.. par aaj jb tai ji ne dusre ladke ke sath mera rishta jod diya toh muje ehsas hua ki me nahi jee sakti tumhare bina..Kisi or ke sath nata nahi jod sakti.."

Crying , not able to hold herself morw she hugged him.. sameer blood boiled up listening her how could tai ji do that? His naina with other guy..? No never..

He hold her shoulder and roughly pushed her..Naina was shocked with his rude behaviour..

Sameer (cracked voice) - " tumhari shadi.. kisi or se ?!? (Tears started flowing from his eyes) Muje to lga tha tum sirf meri ho naina.. "

Naina (hiccups) - " me sirf tumhari hu sameer..Sirf tumhari.. "

Sameer ( loud) - "jhooth ..ek aur jhooth ..Hmesha ki tarah sirf jhooth.. " (faced back)

Naina (weeping ) - " nahi sameer..Me sach bol eh hu..Tumhari kasam.. "

He turned , sameer - " sach.. (smirking) chlo fir proof kro.. proof kro ki tum sach me mujse pyar krti hu or Zindagi bhar ka wada karo.."

Naina (confused ) - "proof ? Ye tum kya bol rhe ho sameer..Tum to jante ho na ki me.. "

He cut her in middle.. sameer - "muje lgta tha ki me tumhe janta hu..Par ab nahi.. sabit kro ki tum Zindgi bhar mere sath rehna chahti ho or fir kbi mujse door nh jaogi .."

Naina - " par kaise ? "

Sameer - " KISS ME.."



P.s. Hushhh..I planned a OS but bhot thak gyi likhte likhte and it turned out a SS.. soory guys for the wait.. I know aisa kbi nh hoga in serial still just enjoy their patch up sequence.. waiting for feedback..Love u all..
MeenAkshi..😊


Pt 2 - pg 5
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just wow dear amazing superb awesome start can't wait to read further update soon dear
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Why u stop at this moment ...it's so irritating
Or tadpao...but it is so amazing
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Loved the way you started the story ...too good!! eagerly waiting for the next update.
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You all guys are so talented ...We still mourning the breakup and here are such nice stories ...
You wrote beautifully ...And trust me every time I read about them crying or confronting even I start crying...
The cliffhanger KISS ME ...Was so painful yet Great...Waiting for more...Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such an amazing ss and starting till end of the update it was too good you stopped it at that point whyyy .. but it's okay I'm eagerly waiting for next part my babies are finally gonna be together I hope they'll marry
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Update asap
Curious to know if she'll kiss him or not
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Just loved it... nice start... eagerly waiting for the next partšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Ausun ss with a good start waiting for next update. If not in serial at least fandom is bringing them together nice to see it.
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wow awesome update .i am commenting on ur story first time but Thanks for beaauitful story.yaar u stop at very pick point ,please update soon .may be we might get to see this track soon .coz hope never die .too much seperation time can't handle anymore .AWW CVS please come abck on track .

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