Only You (Sidushka/Karpur FF) Ch 7 (Pg 13) UPDATED

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Heyaa All!

This is Niki a.k.a Mistofshadows and it is a pleasure meeting you all. I am going to start a fanfic and the prologue is updated below. Please do leave your views as comments...it would be a real encouragement.

Warning: It does not follow the show.


Prologue


His eyes darkened and his fingers gently touched her cheek. She froze and a trembling rose in her. He inched closer; she felt the danger enveloping her, the blazing longing dulling her senses, clouding her instincts. His hand felt hot against her clammy skin. His hot breath met her lips. He was close now and she could see his dark lashes distinctly.

She stared at him in apparent panic and next second he angled his head down and his lips captured hers. It was a sudden paralysis that hit her as his lips attacked her with a sensuality and confidence that made her incapable of any thought. He released her wrists, instead choosing to grip her waist with one hand and entangling the other in her dark mane bringing her closer to claim more of her. She had never been a short woman, far from being called petite. But with him, she felt small, minuscule, and tiny.

Her hands mindlessly moved to his shoulders and tightly grasped them as she wrapped herself around him, giving him access to every bit of her as he tasted every inch of her mouth, leaving her burning and wanting for more. Her breasts tingled and his arms tightened into a cage she never wanted to escape.

A heated moan left her and all of a sudden, the haze broke. Her breaths came heavily as she leaned against the wall. She wanted to shout, yell at him, hit him and at the same time wanted to draw him closer and never let him go. What was happening to her?

A chuckle brought her back from her thoughts. A smirk danced on his beautiful lips and a roguish glint lit up his eyes.

"I think that is enough for today, right boss?

She definitely wanted to hit him now.



Chapter 1 - Page 2

Chapter 2 - Page 4

Chapter 3 - Page 6

Chapter 4 - Page 7

Chapter 5 - Page 9

Chapter 6 - Page 12

Chapter 7 - Page 13


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Niki!
I've seen you on other forums and your writing is capturing.

This was too sensual for my liking 😆
But nevertheless you should continue and looking forward to more!😳

The ending was the best! Hahahaha😆
Cheers,
Mahi
Edited by ..AjabdeBaisa.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res
Looks great! :D

Will post my review in a short while :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was hot hot hot😳😳😳
Really loved it.
Loved how she couldn't resist Siddhant!!
And the last line😆
Lookimg forward to Anushka and Sidhhant's equation and back story.
Update super soon!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woah! Did not see that coming that was quite sensual😳 😆
You're a good writer 😃

Do continue 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Making out in the office, is it? 😉

Hope to read a refreshing story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: KumbhkarnKiNani

Res

Looks great! :D

Will post my review in a short while :)


Unres!

Firstly, great to meet you Niki :)

This was a very sensual beginning! To be very honest, highly sensual scenes make me a tad uncomfortable. I'm from the opposite end of the spectrum. I gravitate more towards under-stated romance.

Its tough to capture the emotions of romance in writing. On a visual medium like TV, conveying the feel of romance is relatively easier as compared to doing it in writing. In that regard, you have done an excellent job in the prologue. The feel, the chemistry and the sexual overtones in the scene were conveyed very well.

Moreover, I liked the setting. Seems like office romance 😉😳

Loved the last couple of lines! :D

Great way to conclude the prologue!

Inshort, its a good start and looks like a 'different' kind of story.

I'll eagerly await your next update.

With Love
-Lavy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..

Hey Niki!

I've seen you on other forums and your writing is capturing.


This was too sensual for my liking 😆
But nevertheless you should continue and looking forward to more!😳

The ending was the best! Hahahaha😆
Cheers,
Mahi


Other forums?? Was it Maharana Pratap forum going by your name??😛

Yah it's a bit sensual...just the prologue though. There's a long way till that happens in the story, so give it a chance...it's going to be a ride😆

Lastly thanks a lot for being my first reviewer. Means a lot to me.

Cheers!
Niki
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namitsgirl

This was hot hot hot😳😳😳

Really loved it.
Loved how she couldn't resist Siddhant!!
And the last line😆
Lookimg forward to Anushka and Sidhhant's equation and back story.
Update super soon!😳


Thanks a lot for commenting and giving this fanfic a try😊
Anushka is going to face loads of Siddhantesque trouble soon. But things will clear up a bit as soon as I update the first chapter.

I am going to put up the chapter in half an hour...so yah... time's ticking.

Cheers!
Niki
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Harshi__

Woah! Did not see that coming that was quite sensual😳 😆
You're a good writer 😃

Do continue 😊


Thank you very much. I will definitely try to match up to your expectations 😛

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