Our Journey To The City Of Love - last chapter updated - PG 46 (16/03)

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#361

Arey baap re yahan toh itny saary replies pending hai. .mujhy laga 2 chapters ke hai

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RiAnsh21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#362

Bichara bhai ko mehek aur rajeev dono misunderstand karli ..

Aise hee hona chahiye ..

Why do he always try to scare her ??

Mehek always accuses him..i didnt like it ..

So bhai pushed her into pool and saved her ..

Lovely ..

Aap ne isc ki days yaad karadi sharms di ..

You are the best ..

4 chapters are pending ..

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RiAnsh21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#363

Chapter 4 fb :

She thought he was playing with her so she wants to run away ..thank god he stopped her ..stubborn girl ..yeh stubborn hai tho bhai aur jyada stubborn..he tied her hand with his ..missed the kiss oh no..

The way she put conditions distance one teasing game i loved it. At night he was in her room..

He took care of her even though she is completely fine ..

He praised her cooking skills ..atyadbuth ..

He was there for her during that manager scene ..

He controlled his feelings for her ..

I am eager to know what is he going to do after party..

Thanks for the pm..

Only one pending ..

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RiAnsh21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#364

Chapter 5 fb:

Manager and riya teamed up made a plan.

Mehrya scene was romantic..shaurya worried for competition more than mehek..he had a surprise for her ..

After seeing mehek in bathrobe shaurya's mind gutter gutter hogaya ..

His words are simply romantic..

His forehead kiss 😳 his sweet threating that she cant escape him in evng ..

So riya and manager locked her in cold storage ..she misunderstood him..shaurya saved her and she reached the competition on time ..credit goes to shaurya ..

Finally she won the competition..shaurya had hidden her luggage ..rajeev caught his naughty lie ..

One more left ..

Thanks for the pm sharms di..

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RiAnsh21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#365

Last chapter fb:

Sharms di hot update keliye thanks ☺️

SK tho fast Hai hee here Mehek bhi fast ho gayi..

Their confession and consummation rom rom romantic ..

Again confession Infront of Taj..

Both r going to start their journey of love ..

Thanks for the pm..

Ending bagundi.

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jhankarbeats87

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Posted: 8 years ago

#366

Shaurya proposed Mehek in his unique way, which was quite cute. But don't you think Shamz that the whole consummation thing was a bit rushed? I mean it's one second they are professing their love for one another, and in the next second, they are hopping on the bed.😕 This doesn't at all go with Mehek's character, who's from quite a conservative family. Also you don't have to show people that you trust them via physical love. I would have been happier if there were a few chapters in between, developing their understanding. Itni bhi kya jaldi bhai? Thoda control karo 😆

It was just my thought...n I know we show a lot of illogical things in our stories and all, and this is peanuts compared to what they serve us everyday in the serial 😆

Edited by jhankarbeats87 - 8 years ago

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#367

I love this take on their trip to Agra Shamz. While you kept the bones of the original the twist of Riya and the hotel manager's plan helped push the story to a wonderful conclusion. A totally unexpected consumation thrown in there, but it was well written and as not out of place as you would think. The choice in the end was hers to make not a blatant seduction which SK could have well managed I'm sure😆. Instead, it was a beautiful expression of their love and Mehek's trust in him. Love the petal filled taj mahal proposal and the gif at the end was perfection. SK looks like the cat who got the cream😆.

Thank you for the pms and for this lovely Valentines story

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thabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#368

Boy I left this story too in the middle...and I'm sorry for that ...

Read it now together ...felt like I was reading a novel ...😳

Shaurya who was arrogant and rude towards since Delhi had a change of heart for her in Agra after seeing her sick ?

Wud have been great if we got to see their Shaurya on the show ..the caring and concerned one ...the way how he dint even leave her for a moment and took care of her ...guess the city of love made its impact on shaurya...made him lover boy soon 😆 then Mehak starting to trust him and mingling with him .. Finally Mehak won against all the conspiracy and so many hurdles...it was great decision by Mehak to let Riya be in competition to compete...and after that sweet encounter of MehRya ...then there confession...beautifully written babez...getting better in romantic stories ...must say ...

Loved it ❤️o

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