FF Naseeb.

Introduction: Rani:20 years old village girl lives with her dadi.mother and brother.

Prince Rajvir:22 years old arrogant prince lives with his mother,father and her little sister.

1st chapter:

Rani is packing her bags to go to mumbai for a job.

R: Ma meri train adhe ghante mein hai jaldi saman lekar ao.

Ma:Haan beta abhi lekar ai.(crying)

Rani:Ma app kyu rori hai hum to sirf kuch mahinon keliye jarehe hum jaldi laut ayenge.

Ma: thike beta par jaldi ana.

dadi:are jaldi karo taxi kabse bahar khari hai are jaldi karo.

Rani:haan dadi jaldi karo maa.

When rani and her mother come out of rani's room muna is crying.

Muna:didi app jaldi ajayegi naah? (crying)

Rani:haan muna hum jaldi ajayenge chalo abhi rona bandh karo.

pipippipip (taxi)

Rani:maa ab hum chalte hai .

Maa:thike beta apna khyaal rakhna.(crying)

Rani:thike maa bye.(crying)

Rani sits in the taxi and taxi goes away everybody in the house start's crying.

nice starting..keep continue..
waiting for next part..

Hey, that was very cute!!!!
I loved the Taxi horn.....pipippipip 🤣🤣


Please continue!

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Hey, that was very cute!!!!
I loved the Taxi horn.....pipippipip 🤣🤣


Please continue!

Praggg me tooo🤣

Hey dear very nice part 👏 continue please 😃

Manpreet

thanx for posting your FF
do continue writting.. 😃 😃 😃

tanzhia

Next chapter 2nd chapter.

When Rani reaches Mumbai.

Rani:Kitna bara mahal hai ahhh waah waah.(Thinking)

Servant:Rani jaldi chalo.

Rani:Haan...

The servant takes her to Bhanumati.

Servant:Bhanumatiji yeh hai woh nai naukrani.

Bhanumati:Tumhara naam kya hai???

Rani:Humara naam Rani hai.

Bhanumati:Thike tumhara kamra upar hai jao.

Rani.Ji.

Rani goes up to her room.

Bhanumati:Ab tum bhi jao apna kam karo.

Servant:Ji.

Bhanumati goes to Rani's room.

Bhanumati:Tum saman banane ke bad Kam pe lag jana.Kali meri bhangi tumhe sab kuch samjadhegi.

ok need 3 replies to continue.

all your updates are very short , make it long so that we can comment about the update easily

Hey..............Can you write more in the scene??

And btw, did you get the 3 replies, to write the next part?? 😆

Rani comes down and goes towards Kali.

Kali:To tum ho woh nai naukrani...

Rani:Ji mein hi hu.

Kalo:Chalo ao mere sath.

Rani:Ji.

Kali:Yeh Kapre dhokar sukhadena.

Rani:Ji...

Rani washes the clothes and puts them to dry.

Rani:Kali ji mene woh kam kardiya.

Kali:Kya!!!

Kali:Mamiji mamiji.

Bhanumati:Kya hua itna chila kyu rahi hai.

Kali:Mamiji Rani ne sara kam khatam kardiya.

Bhanumati:To kya hua use dusra kam dedo.

Kali:Mamiji usne sara kam sirf 1 ghante mein kardiya.

Bhanumati:(thinking)Isne itne kam same mein 100 kapre dhoke sukhaliye wah.

Bhanumati:Itni der tumhe apne haat jaldi chalane chaiye.

Rani:Ji.

Bhanumati:Khana khane ka waqt hogaya ab chalo.

Rani:Ji.

8484448 @ could you write next time big part..
waiting for next part..
payal