Shivika SS: Weaving Her Wings To Fly - Chapter 6 | pg 46

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LoveMyself_sri

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Posted: 7 years ago

#161

Wow loved it . Update soon

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#162

i love this

i love MELA

hehe but not Ferris wheel

i am sacred of heights not going up but coming down is shit scary

please do continue

bye sumi

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#163

This was the best update of this ss till now! Yes, I mean it! Everything, I mean E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G was fabulous in this chapter. Even the fullstops were awesome.

Jealous Annika is sho cuteee (unlike billuji, but that doesn't mean that I don't like him getting jealous, I love it ;))

The 6 feet, 2-3 feet thing was cute too.

But the thing, which stole my heart was when Shivaay bends. When Annika was on the verge of crying, Shivaay bends, to match her height, and wipes her tears. Well, to any other person, the act of wiping the tears, would be sweet. But to me, the act of bending, was a lot more than sweet. I don't know perfectly, what it symbolises, maybe care or something, but it felt so good and loved. I loved it!👏

And the Mela thing, just incredible. Every word of it was brilliant. The Ferris wheel, the roller- coaster ride, the cotton-candy, the carousel- everything was delightful. And making a video and the coat and ultra-cute word, just added to my happiness! Can you plz make Om Ru know what happened? And dadi too? I don't know why but I so badly love it when Shivaay is teased! So plzzz! Add it!!

But when Annika felt tired and Shivaay did all those things, that just doubled my happiness, I loved it. Come, I wan give u biggg hug *hugs*. And when Shivaay cleared things between him and ragini, I was dancing (*and now my mother's calling the asylum, save me!!!*)
Do keep delighting us with succh wonderful chapters. And its no wrong to not comment when you are already giving a chapter earlier than expected. Thanks for the pm.
Love you,
Abhi

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#164

Awesome update yar

i just loved the concern and care shivaay has for Annika...he is doing everything to make her happy...

The mela scenes was superb...if omru gets to know wat all shivaay had done they will be surprised and so happy...he can't even see a small tinge of sadness on her now...

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mina

@minamma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#165

Awww

This is so awwworthy chapter

Loved it

The mela scene touched my heart so much

Caring shivaay and kiddish annika...

Cute combo..

Loved it

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Priyaarora570

@Priyaarora570

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Posted: 7 years ago

#166

The update was full of emotions. I really love reading your work . Shivaay is so sweet . Thankyou for the pm and the early update. It really was a surprise .

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Himanshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#167

its amazing.
shivaay thinking of childlike things she is doing, bt also taking her photos, such a adorable he is, n so is anika, having t happy day of her like, i can so imagine cute anika with shivaay coat over her, coz this is t same thing i dn with my brothers n fathers coat.😆
so lovely he is carrying n, possive, such a sweet heart.
wating for nxt part.
n thanks for PM