Ardeep OS:~~Badle Ki Aag~~Story 5 (Page-7)

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DeadShot

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Posted: 8 years ago

This story takes place right before when Deep lends up in the jail..Aarohi went to the jail to meet Deep and this following conversation took place between them..

A constable tells Aarohi, ' Madam you can meet him now!..Aarohi stands in front of the jail's cell in which Deep was being held...

Deep- *with a nervous voice he said, "Aarohi;!

Aarohi - *Victorious Smile...On her face..

Deep - Aarohi Tumne yeh thik nahi kiya.!.*Deep holds Cell's bars

Aarohi - And what about you? Apne Andar Jhank K dekho Kitni Gandagi Bhari padi Hai Tum mein..

Deep- *stares Aarohi for some seconds and then asked her a question,"Kya Dhoka Dene wale ko Dhoka Milna Chahiye?

Aarohi- *She too even stared him, And then asked him suddenly "Nikku aur Bhabhi kaha Hai?

Deep- *Without answering her question he continued with his question,"Aarohi meine tumko Dhoka Diya tha Kya mujhe bhi Dhoka Milna Chaiye?

Aarohi- The promises you have made Deep, You didn't full fill those promises you betrayed me with Tara..

Deep- Yes I have betrayed you! *Deep looks away,

Aarohi- DEEP! Mujhe tumhari ab Koi Baat nahi soon ni..Agar tum Yahi chahte Ho ki mein

apne Bhabhi aur Nikku Ko khud dhundu to phir thik hai..*Aarohi was about to leave..

Deep- *Requesting with a teary eyes to Aarohi," Aarohi...AArohi...Rukjao Aarohi..*Aarohi was pretending to leave..

Aarohi- Just answer my question Deep, Where will i can find Bhabhi and Nikku?

Deep- *Looking down, And then," Nikku aur Bhabhi Yahi Mumbai mein Hai!

Aarohi- *With a surprised look, " Mumbai? tell me Deep where

in mumbai? *Deep not answering her question she yelled at him, "Deep?

Deep- *Looking at her face with a tear slide down on his cheek, " Kya tum Jaan na nahi Chahogi woh mumbai mein kyon thein?

Aarohi- *Looking away, " You don't seem to remember but i remembered what you'd told me Deep

I know that you had captured them to later use as a bait if i ever comes again in your life..

Deep- *stares at her and then, suddenly told "Tara ki wajah se, Meine Tara ko bachane k liye kya kuch nahi kiya..

Jo mera pyaar tha usse bhi upar meri wafadari thi..

Aarohi- I've seen your loyalty, Deep you've betrayed me that's your loyalty?

Deep- Nikku aur Bhabhi ko mein nahi khona chahta tha..b'coz they're the proof of my loyalty

towards you Aarohi..i've have kept them hidden so no one can harm them..i knew how much

you love them..When your brother aniket died i knew how much you were broken...

Aarohi-*With an anger face, "Deep don't you dare take my brother's name from your filthy

tounge..Yeh baatein sun ne nahi aayi hoon mein yaha.."I am here for My Bhabhi and Nikku..

Deep- Tumhein jo kehna hai tum mujhe keh sakti ho...Mein apni Saza k liye humesa taiyar hoon..You want to know

Where is Nikku and Bhabhi...So listen..Nikku aur Bhabhi ko meine humare farm house pe chupaa

k rakha tha sabki nazar se door..jaha unhe koi dhoond na sake..Aarohi mein...

Mein tumse koi maafi ki umeed nahi karta hoon...par itna zaroor batana chahta hoon..ki..

Mein sirf tumse tumse pyaar karta hoon...

Aarohi-*With a little evil smile, "Thank you Deep...

Deep-*With a little confused state, "Aarohi yeh kya keh rahi ho..?

Aarohi- Bhabhi aur Nikku ab marenge..!! Aakhir Bhaiya Bhi unhe miss kar rahe honge na?

Deep-*with a frightend look, "Yeh kya keh rahi ho tum Aarohi aise baatein kyon kar rahi ho?

Aarohi- Aarohi nahi Tara Deep, Mein Tara hoon..Aarohi ne mera sab kuch mujh se chhin liya

*she looks at Deep with a little teary eyes, "Tumhein Bhi...Ab mein kaise usse Zinda chhod

sakti hoon...*Tara Smiles..

Deep-*His lips got numb and dry, he was in a state that he could speak nothing..

Tara- *Leaving him, "she leaves him..

Deep- *breaking his dead state, "TARA...Ruko...Tara...*He tries to stop her but he could not..

(Deep talking with himself yeh meine kya kar diya? Tara meri Aarohi ko..) *He remembers

some bloody moments of Tara when she killed everyone..

Mujhe Aarohi ko bachana hoga...

In this story it shows us how Tara who knew everything about Deep as she was always looking for Deep's loyalty this loyalty got questioned when Aarohi entered in Deep's life..

And Deep who knew everything about "INSAAN KI PARAKH" couldn't identify whether she was Aarohi or Tara..

Edited by DeadShot - 7 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow deadshot awsume os love it..and pics u used of promo lovely 😳like the twist that she was tara and deep couldnt identify her and told the location of nikku and bhabi..u will continue it ?

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DeadShot

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sabreen_06
Wow deadshot awsume os love it..and pics u used of promo lovely 😳like the twist that she was tara and deep couldnt identify her and told the location of nikku and bhabi..u will continue it ?

Thank you dear😃 Yes i will continue it..

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sabreen_06

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadShot

Thank you dear😃 Yes i will continue it..

Ok will wait for new update

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Suchi01

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow lovely Os

Amazing 😊

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Crimson9

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing.

And the twist..👍🏼

Waiting for the next update. Do continue soon.😊

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Shalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very nice writing dead shot pls continue it soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

nice update hope cvs read this forum 😃

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DeadShot

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Posted: 8 years ago

Story 2- Bikhre Hui Yadein...

The episode where Kalyani was captured by Deep and Viraat, In that episode when Kalyani

was being intorogated by Viraat she said some things like "This house,property,fame everything

belongs to her "even Dilip or Vikram" is also her husband. Even after snacthing everything from her

Roma couldn't give birth to a "Vigorous Son".

And we have seen what Roma had said "This property,Money everything is yours but can you bring back my husband to normal state just like he was before? can you? on what basis you describe him as your "Suhaag"?A characterless women like you, or any other women will tell their suhaag is Dilip Singh then will he become their husband? Aisa hota hai Saccha pyaar? Humla karva diya apaheez banadiya, Jab pata chala ki woh mujhse pyaar karta tha shaadi karna Chahta tha..

After this, the other day in the morning she had a dream And the following dream sequence took place in her mind when she was sleeping.

*A man was having quarrel with her wife and their neighbors were watching that, she was

pleading to him and crying for not to leave her..

Dilip- *He was having qurrel with Roma, "Roma i am tired of you i just don't want live with you anymore..

Roma-*She was crying and telling him, "Dilip please don't leave me i cannot live without you.

Dilip- *He was very furious at Roma, "Don't you understand? Tum sar dard ban chuki ho mere liye, Mein Tumhara Chera Bhi nahi dekhna Chahta.!

Roma- *Roma was looking at her Daughter, "Aisa mat kaho Dilip Humari Tara ka kya hoga agar tum humein yun chhod k chale Jaoge!!

Dilip- *he smiled a little, "I've married you only for your money and the luxrioes that you had given

me, Now i have everything so i don't need you anymore.

Roma- *she was shocked and the tears were not stopping flowing out of his eyes, "How can you leave me like this? those promises you had taken with me, Your love, everything was a lie?

Dilip- *He felt relif, "Thank God! Tum jaise Pagal Auarat mein kuch to samajdari hain.

Roma- *she was shattered, she felt like a blow came to her and snatched everything

from her, she stood there just like a stone, she could speak nothing..

Dilip- *He takes a deep breath, "Roma..Darling, don't take it personally let me tell

you something, "i was already married to My love Kalyani *He looked at Kalyani.

but we needed some money and guesswhat Kismat ka khel dekho humein tum mili,;

Me and Kalyani planned all this to get money from you.But for our plan i needed to get marry with you,Win your trust and then slowly, "I will take over your property; Hope you don't mind this *He laughed at Roma, "After all you have big generous heart for everyone, You'd done so much things

for the society; Hope you won't mind if i "Took" a little chunk of money from you; Now i am going

leave you if you come after me i will send you in the jail in the case of black mailing.

Roma- *She was watching as Dilip was leaving her, "Dilip...Rukjao dilip...*she cried and shouted for

Dilip to comeback..

Dilip- *Tara was running behind him as he was walking towards Kalyani with a smile.

Tara-*Poor girl was crying as her dad was leaving her, "Papa..Humein chhod k mat Jao, Hum akele ho jayeng..plzzz papa, "i will be a good girl don't leave us..

Dilip- *He was very furious with this as he saw Tara was running behind him, "Iss Ladki ko Dur rakhho mujhse, *He grabbed Tara's hand and pushed her away and she fell on the ground she got injured in her elbow.

Roma- *she shouted Tara as Dilip pushed her, "Tara..;

Dilip-*He grabbed Kalyani's hand, "Let's go Kalyani from here, "I don't want to stay here for a second.

Roma-*She quickly rushed to Tara, "Beta tum theek to ho? *Tara was crying in pain still she talked about her father leaving them, "Mummma humein papa kyun chhod kar Ja rahe hein?, "Mein kabhi koi galti nahi karungi.

Neighbors around them were talking very mouthful things about roma that she is very ill mannered women she married with a guy who was already married. *two of them women were talking "Tumhein pata hai yeh miss Roma Batein to badi badi karti hai aur khud itni besharmo wali harkatein karti hain.."Accha hua woh Insaan bach gaya warna yeh aurat to apni shari hadhein bhul jati.."Kharida hua pati tha to ek na ek din jana hi tha *some women were laughing at this..

Roma- *she was hearing all of this..

Roma-*waked up she looked tensed and she was sweating a lot,

Roma- *After some seconds she thought about Tara and she was calling her, "Tara..? *she waited for Tara's response but...no response came..she got worried and she quickly got up from her bed..

Roma- *She was finding Bindiya and Viraat, "Bindya?? Viraat..*No one was replaying to her so she got furious, "Kaha margaye sabke sab?? *and then suddenly Bindya came, "Kya hua Mummy Ji, Aap itna ghabhrai hui kyon hai?

Roma- You just tell me where is my daughter? *Viraat was changing the gun barrel *roma asked viraat about

Tara..

Roma- *Viraat, "Where is Tara? *Viraat looked at her and told, "How would i know? *Roma was very furious with this answer..

Roma- She is your sister, "What you mean by "How should i know??"You should have known whenever she goes somewhere..*He was still changing the barrel of gun..

Roma- Okay fine i'll find my daughter by myself..

*Tara came and was standing behind Roma..

Viraat- *showing Tara with the gun, "Yeh lo Aap ki beti Aagayi.

Roma- *she quickly rushed to her and hugged her so tightly and in anger, "Kaha Chali gayi thi? "Apni Maa ka khyal nahi hai tumhe?

Tara- *Tara was confused but she asked, "Mumma? What happened?

Roma- *Ssshhh, "Just don't say anything..

Tara- *Realizing that her mother had again that dream, "Mein aapke pass Humesa rahungi..Aap ko

kabbhi chhod k nahi jaungi..

Guys this story was about Roma's past how she used to be a very good women, she was not that great but after all we all humans has some flaws no one is 100% perfect human being. Roma was a

social worker she had done a lot of great work, Her parents died when Roma was in her early age

but she was very optimistic women, She fought her battle with the life. She handled her father's business in a very young age, Achievements,Fame,Money everything was kissing her feet. But she was somewhere feeling the loneliness inside her heart, And then destiny decided to play with her.

Dilip/Vikram entered in her life. Roma felt somewhere that he is the man that can fill her loneliness

both fell in love, And decided to get marry with each other. After getting married they shared a very beautiful life, Roma felt now she is complete, After some time she was blessed with a girl child named 'Tara" their family got complete by this. Once a girl lost her everything by the Fate of Time but now again she got it back, But how long this was going to last? After Tara's birth Dilip changed a lot. He used care for Tara a lot but then later he started to abused her as a child. Dilip sometimes went out of house and comeback after so many months. Dilip was slowly getting irritated with Roma's possessiveness. Then he decided to tell her something..

Deep is so loyal to Roma, Not because he's Roma's puppet or anything like that. He has seen what Roma has been through. that's why he respects Roma a lot.

After this incident Roma changed a lot she became pessimistic women form an Optimistic women.

Dilip's betrayal made her some another human being. She realized Society won't care anything about you even if you do wonders for them. Dilip snatched everything from her, Even then society blamed Roma for that. Why Roma became possessive? only simple answer can be is "She feared of being end up alone". After realizing the ugly side of the society she chose to get back what was hers and for that she used hook & crook. And in the end she got back what was hers. Even now she's not completely changed her good/optimistic side is still there somewhere..and we have seen that some episodes.

Edited by DeadShot - 8 years ago