The Maid Who Stole My Heart (15 Parts Complete) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya.

It is very interesting.

Hi Geetha, thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: MirMir

MayaKhann You are AMAZING..waiting for the next too

Aw, thank you! So are you! I will update soon ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Maya truly amazing my heart was beating very fast reading the updates dear. Omg nightmarish but very thrilling to read maya. Ur narration makes me to visualize the scenes u have penned rather than just reading. Wonderful yaar. How that culprit will be punished how uma is going to save her too will he again make an entry in our show their life escaping from prison confusing yaar. Plz update it soon this updates are more frightening than our serial 👏But I thought uma is going to get naughty with her this villain entry spoiled the romantic moments. Anyways so light romantic moments ahead waiting to read how much naughty and lovable this uma 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Maya truly amazing my heart was beating very fast reading the updates dear. Omg nightmarish but very thrilling to read maya. Ur narration makes me to visualize the scenes u have penned rather than just reading. Wonderful yaar. How that culprit will be punished how uma is going to save her too will he again make an entry in our show their life escaping from prison confusing yaar. Plz update it soon this updates are more frightening than our serial 👏But I thought uma is going to get naughty with her this villain entry spoiled the romantic moments. Anyways so light romantic moments ahead waiting to read how much naughty and lovable this uma 😉

Hey, thank you Divyaa, your comments always make my day! I will update soon!
Im so glad you like it🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Part 11: A Party Brings It All Back-
It was a week later, Uma and Kanak had given in their statements about Ryan and had decided to take a break from daily life, they didnt want to be far from home so had just stayed at Uma's house.

It was Sasha's birthday party tonight and Kanak was bored, so used to being on her feet all day she wasnt used to Uma constantly telling her to rest, she tried to pull the zip of her dress up for the 5th time and huffed loudly when once again she didnt succeed

Uma stood behind her, pulling the zip up slowly, his cold fingers brushing against her back made her shudder, he leant down pressing a kiss to her shoulder "You look beautiful, I dont know how i'm going to keep my hands off you all night"

Kanak turned to face him, bringing her arms up she rested them around his neck "Who said you had to"
Uma cupped her cheek "Lets go before I get to carried away"
Kanak smiled, "lets"

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Uma pulled off Kanak's coat, handing it to a man he smiled
The man smiled at Kanak "Hi ma'am, I heard all you went through with Ryan and I just want to say you must be so strong"
Kanak smiled and muttered a thank you but had a very weird feeling as the man continued to watch her as she walked into the ballroom

Kanak hugged Sasha "Happy birthday"
Uma nudged her "Dont look a day over 30"
She frowned "Thats because im 25"
"Just ignore him, you look beautiful" said Kanak
"Keep a hold of this one Uma, shes to good for you" said Sasha
Uma looked at Kanak "Oh I know"

Uma tipped his head to the dancefloor and held his hand out "Wanna dance"
She rested her hand in his and winked "I thought you would never ask"
Uma led her to the dancefloor

Swaying slowly to the music, he twisted her out and spun her back in, "Seems you have other hidden talents up your sleeve then"
"Oh theres many more to come yet"
Kanak excused herself, "ill be right back"

After going to the bathroom, she went to wash her hands when she looked into the mirror, alarmed she stepped back and covered her mouth, the words written in blood read "You will pay"
Kanak ran out to get Uma but ran into the man who took her coat earlier

"Looking for someone miss"
"Uh yes, the man I came in with, do you know where he is"
She smiled and ran over to him when the man pointed to the bar
The man looked around before going into the bathroom

"Uma, Uma you have to come with me, theres something on the mirror in the bathroom" Kanak said quickly
Uma put down his glass and followed Kanak

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"But, but it was right here " Kanak tapped on the mirror and rubbed her hand against it, Uma rested his hands on her shoulders and turned her to face him "Its okay, youre still in shock, its just your fear"

She allowed Uma to take her away but kept looking back at the mirror, she knew what she saw but was confused as to why it had dissapeared, was she going crazy

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Ryan stood at the phone, he smiled "So you did as I asked"
"Of course, family have got to stick together hm" the man replied
"Dont let her out of your sight, now im trusting you with this plan, dont let me down"
"I would never"

"Alright Ryan, thats enough, back in your cell" the officer shouted
Ryan cut off and returned to his cell, lying down he smiled, it was just to easy

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Kanak had gone to stand outside for some fresh air, a car pulled up infront of her, gloved hand holding out a present
Kanak took it and opened it

Cockroaches slid out of the box and with a scream she dropped it to the floor
Kanak turned to run back in, but as she reached the doors, Uma grabbed her
"Hey, whats wrong"

Kanak turned to point at the cockroaches but they were gone
The man from earlier held up a bag with them in and shoved them in the bin

"Nothing, nothing I just scared myself"
Uma held her to him, worried about what Kanak was hiding

Sorry its late! I hope youre all doing well!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Part 12: The Letter With A Hint-

Kanak continued to toss and turn in bed, she wondered if it would be acceptable to wake Uma up, sitting up she swiped the sweat from her forehead and went to wash her face, she was so sure she had seen those cockroaches and that message on the window

But Uma hadn't seen it, did that mean someone had got there and taken it away before Uma could see? She wasnt sure but knew after tossing and turning for hours, she needed some sleep.

Walking towards Uma's bedroom she knocked and then pushed the door open "Uma" she said, Uma sat up, rubbing his eyes "Kanak, is everything okay" his voice was rough with sleep and it sent shivers down Kanak's back

"Can I stay with you tonight please"
Uma scooted over and tapped the space next to him, Kanak climbed in and was pulled closer to Uma straight away, she looked up at him and he kissed her hair "im cold" he offered her a fake shiver and rested his face in her hair

Kanak smiled, snuggling closer to him, so their bodies fit together, she pushed her feet onto his legs "Ever heard of socks" he asked, she chuckled softly "I dont like them" Uma rolled his eyes and smiled "pagal" he whispered and in a few short minutes both had fallen asleep

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Uma and Kanak sat to the table, both eating breakfast silently, it was nice to be in eachothers company, no talking necessary, just enjoying eachothers presence, Uma put his hand over Kanak's and smiled

"What do you want to do today"
"Hm, anything"
Uma stood up, picking their plates up and going to clean them "If you're ready we can go for a walk"
Kanak nodded and followed Uma after putting her shoes on

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Uma and Kanak walked around the gardens hand in hand, Uma turned to look at Kanak, she looked up at him and smiled " You know when I was homeless, I would always come here, just sit and watch the different people go by, I didnt think I would ever be able to share this with anyone "

Kanak rested her head against his chest "Now im here, I promise you wont ever be alone, hm, you will always have a home with me"
"When did I get so lucky "
She shrugged "When you met me"
Putting his arm around her, he laughed "Now that is true"

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A hooded figure watched from behind the trees "We shall see about that, I will ruin your life for what you did to my brother, that I promise"
He picked up the note in his hand and wrapped it around the rock and threw it by Kanak and Uma's feet before running away

Kanak picked it up and opened the letter
"For how long do you think you can hide from me?
I am coming for you.
Never mind what Uma has to say, he can't win over me.
Death is on its way for you.

May you spend your last moments in pain.
Eternally grateful for this opportunity to be the one who finishes you with my own hands.

Because.
Ends come quickly.
Call for help if you must, it wont change anything.
And if you look around
U still wont see me.
Still, I know you will try
Even if its of no use

If you try hard enough

Hell, you might find me
Am I someone you have met before?
Very hard question, isnt it
Even Uma the investigator cant crack that one

Anyway
May your God be with you
I
Rarely ever lose
And , this time I promise I will win"

Kanak dropped the letter to the floor and a slow tear made its way down her face




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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Thank you for posting this beautiful story dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: allasal

Thank you for posting this beautiful story dear😳

Hey, no problem! Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
hats off dear. ❤️ waiting for the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Cute name rehannna so you felt like sharing your name good :) story is wonderful as usual liked the way they shared the bed I was worried will it turn to be a love making session but na I liked it. Thank you.

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