The Maid Who Stole My Heart (15 Parts Complete)

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Part 1: Uma Meets His Match-
Dark steely eyes looked down at the brown paper file with the black penned numbers on '734'.
His long fingers flicked through the pages, Hotel Delamor, a place well known in the criminal industry.
He sighed, lifting his legs up onto the desk and clicked his hands he led back on his chair.

"So, you'll do it" asked Raj, one hand behind his back with his fingers crossed
Uma raised his hand to skim across his stubble "tell me more about it"
"Hotel Delamor has many links to a trafficking industry, with the maids that work there leading a double life, being maids and well being trafficked, theres a lot more to that place than meets the eye and I need you to go there as a business associate and find out what you can"

"You know I dont do long undercover missions "
"I know, but youre the best man for the job, please Uma"
"Fine, but you owe me for this, really owe me" Uma stood up and continued to mutter under his breath "Pay better be excellent "

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30 maids sat down in a conference room
"So, listen up, we have a very esteemed guest called Uma Toshniwal joining us this evening, he owns 3 businesses in this country alone, he needs the best treatment of his life and special treatment if he wants it to"

Kanak blanched at the not so hidden meaning to his words, she had been a maid in this place for years now, it seemed once you were in, you would never get out, the job had its perks of course; good pay and it was close to all the places you might want to visit.

But, on the other hand there was a lot of grabby customers, rude customers and dangerous ones, but she had to cope with it because she would never leave.
"Kanak, you will be his main maid, best on the job and I dont want any negative comments about you, understood"

She nodded, standing up she followed Ryan to Uma's room and began to clean and prepare, this was gonna take some time.

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Uma checked in at his desk, he took his key card and walked towards the lift, a butler offered to take his bag, but Uma refused and carried on his way.
Finally arriving at his door he slid the card in and opened the door.

Kanak turned anxiously to face him "Hello Mr Toshniwal, I hope you have a great stay here"
Uma wanted this mission over fast, and if he wanted information this maid was the one to have it
"Excuse me, I dont suppose you know anything about the deaths recently"

Kanak's face dropped "The first woman killed was called Ana, the second Beatrice and the third Callie, alphabetical order, bodies were raped, throats were slit and they were all maids at this hotel"
Her eyes were hard as she stared back at him

"Thank you, any idea who could be next"
"Delilah, Deni or Devina"
Uma nodded "And one more question"
"Anything sir"
"Are all the maids here part of the prostitution industry"
Kanak fumed, her eyes narrowed and she scrunched up the towel in her hand

"Are all business men doing dodgy dealings"
Uma's jaw dropped, she had a spark and was offended by his insinuation
"My apologies, I didnt mean to offend you"
"Have a good day sir"

Kanak walked away and moved on to the next room, leaving Uma stood alone.


Hello! So while on holiday I had some inspiration, and as its my birthday tomorrow, I thought why not upload this now!
I hope youre all doing great and do let me know what you think!

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Divyaamurali thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Maya
What a beginning yaar unbelievable kanUm totally different ur showing them in a different perspective curious to read the next part Maya plz update it soon Awesome Maya 👏This uma is going to deal with human trafficking will kanak be trapped into it will uma rescue her. So interesting yaar 😊
Advanced birthday wishes dear
Wish u many many more happy returns of the day darling 🤗May u have a wonderful year ahead filled with abudance of happiness success prosperity and peace. Have a great bday blast sweetheart 👏🥳


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Hai maya.
Loved it.
Superb dear.
every stories of yours, were awesome.
Hats off dear.
Advance birthday to u. Be happy.
I wish all ur dreams come true
Edited by Geethanatarajan - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Hi Maya

What a beginning yaar unbelievable kanUm totally different ur showing them in a different perspective curious to read the next part Maya plz update it soon Awesome Maya 👏This uma is going to deal with human trafficking will kanak be trapped into it will uma rescue her. So interesting yaar 😊
Advanced birthday wishes dear
Wish u many many more happy returns of the day darling 🤗May u have a wonderful year ahead filled with abudance of happiness success prosperity and peace. Have a great bday blast sweetheart 👏🥳


Hi Divyaa! How are you?
Thank you so much, im glad you liked it!
I will update tonight (hopefully)
Thank yoy so so much 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya.

Loved it.
Superb dear.
every stories of yours, were awesome.
Hats off dear.
Advance birthday to u. Be happy.
I wish all ur dreams come true

Hi Geetha, how are you?
Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it, thanks again!
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: GayatriRani

Thank you for posting this beautiful story even in your holidays. Enjoy your holidays and advanced birthday greetings. Please update soon.

Hey, thats no problem! Thank you for commenting!
Thank you, I will try to update tonight!
Thanks again!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

Hi Divyaa! How are you?
Thank you so much, im glad you liked it!
I will update tonight (hopefully)
Thank yoy so so much 🤗

i am fine how are you sweetheart what's ur bday plans 😛dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i am fine how are you sweetheart what's ur bday plans 😛dear
Im glad to hear you're good! Im also good, very cold and tired though! Im having an early celebration with some friends over this weekend!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice to hear that maya one more hot and sensuous story like slow seduction as bday treat for us 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayakhan12

Hi Geetha, how are you?
Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it, thanks again!
🤗

I am good dear.
Enjoy ur birthday.

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