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Posted: 8 years ago
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The sky was lit with those infinite luminous dots hugging the full moon ..where the darkness that engulfed me...resided in me was illuminated by her very own existence...She sereneded me like those shimmering stars alighting hope that would brighten my cosmic world...Enraptured by her innocence that flickered my whole being,i drifted towards her...Her smiles enlightened me ,fascinated me that i was completely lost...lost in those wonderous eyes that kept on fondling me...mesmerizing me upto no end...i exhilarated in her pure sight, caressing my beating heart to slow down...the warmth that she radiated in the cold breeze enveloped me like a soothing hug...i felt breathless in her nearness stroking me with that bitter sweet pain of desire invigorating my senses...She beemed with happiness for those twinkling ones right above her dazzled on her face but i was in reverie of that glowing light flickered deep in me...engrossed in my very own expanse of heaven that felt so right...everything with her was so perfect...Overwhelmed with her sweet confessions...i wished for the time to cease n live in this moment with her forever

I felt at peace with those lingering moments i stole glances at her...for she was that star i wanted to behold... to reflect her light into my very own darkness of life...to comfort me with those blankets of deep love for i was covered with thorns of emptiness ...i longed for that arousing emotional timbre of my very first love that resonanted ...echoed in my soul ...consuming me...that i felt complete and sheltered in her eternal love...

Witnessing our undying love...The vast skies the moon n stars...pledged our togetherness for a lifetime..our bond for eternity!



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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb 👏 👍🏼

Originally posted by: mehraan


The sky was lit with those infinite luminous dots hugging the full moon ..where the darkness that engulfed me...resided in me was illuminated by her very own existence...She sereneded me like those shimmering stars alighting hope that would brighten my cosmic world...Enraptured by her innocence that flickered my whole being,i drifted towards her...Her smiles enlightened me ,fascinated me that i was completely lost...lost in those wonderous eyes that kept on fondling me...mesmerizing me upto no end...i exhilarated in her pure sight, caressing my beating heart to slow down...the warmth that she radiated in the cold breeze enveloped me like a soothing hug...i felt breathless in her nearness that stroked me with that bitter sweet pain of desire...She beemed with happiness for those twinkling ones right above her dazzled on her face but i was in reverie of that glowing light flickered deep in me...engrossed in my very own expanse of heaven that felt so right...everything with her was so perfect...Overwhelmed with her sweet confessions...i wished for the moment to cease

I felt at peace with those lingering moments i stole glances at her...for she was that star i wanted to behold... to reflect her light into my very own darkness of life...to comfort me with those blankets of deep love for i was covered with thorns of emptiness ...i longed for that arousing emotional timbre of my very first love that resonanted ...echoed in my soul ...consuming me...that i felt complete and sheltered in her eternal love... The vast skies had witnessed our bonding for a lifetime...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a poetic beautiful post!
It's so lovely to hear you voicing all the unsaid words.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Can't decide whether your writing is more magical or the scene!! True bliss!Both outstanding I guess
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You've become a kavi like Sameer 😆 A really romantic post...you portrayed Sameer's feelings very well...his longing for her. What we saw in his eyes last night, you portrayed them into words...Beautiful post!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful post!! You captured the essence of the scene so well❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain


Such a poetic beautiful post!

It's so lovely to hear you voicing all the unsaid words.


Thanku Dear...😃 i loved how he luked at her...She was busy gazing at the stars n he was busy gazing at his star😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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He was living with the darkness of loneliness till the light of her presence in his life ended this dark long night of his life😃

Innumerable starts in the sky can't break through the darkness of the night but its the moon that brings light and brightness into the world...similarly he may have many friends for him...maybe true friends which I'm quite sure they are...but they can't take the place which Naina has gained for herself...so I would equate her as being the moon in his life who has come to take away all his sorrows away with the brightness of her smile and innocence and a beautiful heart😃

The stars in the sky were the witness of their special friendship which is going to last forever...they are made for each other and would be there for each other throughout their lives😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mehraan still in there dreamland.Cant believe such a beautiful show can be made in TV at present time.I am just hopng that the show continues like this.Amazing how after 70 odd episodes too each episode getting better
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful post... ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏


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