Mehrya OS: Feelings!Last pt Updated 30/12

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: dewcute
I am still stuck in this line,

" Shaurya has a heart of gold".🤣

Mujebhi yakeen nahi huva 😆

I have unresd my cumnt in first page 😉

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Diva200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Very well written, great start so Ms has developed feelings towards Sk but they are not reciprocated, pls continue soon

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Heli84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Mujebhi yakeen nahi huva 😆

I have unresd my cumnt in first page 😉

Aap dono bhi na..Black heart ki upar Gold ka plate laga dia hei..taaki kisi ko pata na chale..specially MS ko 😉

Aur ladki phass Jaye 😆

Yeh aandaar ki baat hei..Shri Di ko bhi nehi pata 🤣

Edited by Heli84 - 8 years ago

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Diva200

@Diva200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Pls continue soon 😛

Edited by Diva200 - 8 years ago

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Manjulaiju
Shrishti its nice. I love this part of show after the ISC days. MS has feelings for SK but SK consider her only as an employee. I felt this as MS POV . Because also must have some feelings towards MS😲
Thanks for the pm
I am not saying continue soon. Take your own time😆

Hey Manju, thank you for reading this...

@bold Thank you..you dont know how much that means to me😉

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Harmankav
Great one do continue soon.

Thank you for reading it dear!😉

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sanjh30
Yay! You are back with an OS! Loved it my dear but why two chapters?
Write more please,you know how much I appreciate your work here na?
Pease continue soon. I think Shaurya here has also feelings for her 😆
Thanks for the os keep writing girl 👏

Hey Sanjh thank you so much yaar...

Actually, i had thought of this as a scene as part of my story but since I dont have the time for writing an SS or FF right now, i thought of writing this as an OS

I guess this will be more than two chapters😉

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Good Start Shri ...but still can't digest the fact that next one will be last
This plot definitely have lot of scope,...as it's different here only MS has feelings for him but Khadoos looks more Khadoos here ...😆😆

Just look at the possibilities of expanding this story..
Pinky promise we won't trouble you for updates ..
Will behave like good kids 😆😆😆

Hey Sham thank you for your comments dear

I m still writing the second part lets see...

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Krishna537
Nice one...So mehek have feelings for him but not shaurya ...would love to read more ❤️
Continue soon 😊

Thank you for your comments Krishna😛

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Thabassum..
Edit ...
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Hmm the prologue was interesting

So mehak fell for this madly...he also has sumthing for her but he doesn't put forward it... But mehak without holding...shows it clearly...
Rajiv is aware of this ...will he play cupid ?
I think Shaurya is retraining himself from her for sum reason...
Well let's see wat the next part ...holds...
Great start lazy bee...let's see how fast the other update cums 😉😆