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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice ... loved the update
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot to all of u for ur comments and likes.It really means a lot.
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Next-5
Rano:Rishi tu muje maaf kr de beta maine bhut kiya h tere sath.
Rishi hugs her and said thanks mom aap ne mere ko smja.
Ran:Par ek problem hai beta
Raj:Rano ab kya problem h tuje
Ra:Are aap bhi na muje hmesha galt hi smjhte h.M toh ye kah rhi thi ki inki shadi hui toh meri mrji shamil nhi aur na koi rasham hui.M bs chati hun ki inki shadi puri rashmo se ho.
MP:Wow mom bhai ki shadi i m very exicted kab hogi batao na.
Ra:M panditji ko bula leti hun
Everyone gets back to their work and rano calls pandit ji.
In bani house
The financial condition of bani and neha are not good.Sandy till now does not know about tanuja's surgery and her marriage with rishi.He just arrived to mumbai and asked about tanuja from neha.Bani thinks something and said crying beta tujse badla lene k liye rishi ne tanuja se zabardasti shadi kr li aur vo log uske sath bhut bura bartav krte.
Sandy is shocked and said nhi m tanuja ko apni galatiyo ki saja nhi bhugtne nhi dunga m abhi jata h rishi se bat karne.
Ba:Putar tu abhi ata pehle to thoda fresh hoja.
Sandy goes inside.
Neha:Mummy aap ne usse juth ko bola agr us saand ko pta chla toh mar dega hume.
B:Chup kr pagal bani hun m bani jo bhi krti hun soch smjh k krti hun isme hmara hi fyada h.
N:Mummy apni gol gol baatein band karo saaf saaf bolo khna kya chahti ho.
B:Tu toh janti rishi tanuja se kitna pyar krta h kuch bhi kr skta h uske.Hm sandy k madad se tanuja ko yahan le aange aur uske badle rishi se uski property maang lenge.
N:Aur rishi tanuja k liye apni sari property hme dega vah mummy kya plan bnaya h apne.
Meanwhile sandy comes and said chalo abhi chlte h.
They goes to bedi house.
In BH pandit ji arrives and said:Dekhiye shadi k liye do mhurat bde hi shub h ek 3 din bad aur dusra 1 mahine bad tu aap batiye apko kab krni h shadi.
Bij:3 din toh bhut km koi tyari hi nhi hogi.
Ri:Nhi biji shadi 3 din bad hi hogi
Bij: Dekh le tanuja putar kitna utavla h ye (tanuja blushes) par beta itni jaldi tyari kaiso hogi.
Mp:Biji hm bedis h hum yo tyari karva denge kal sagai parso mehndi aur sangeet phir haldi and finally shadi.
Ah:Ha biji aap tnsn na lo sab ho jaega.Are ha di ab jab tak shadi nhi ho jati tu biji k room m hi rahegi.
R:Are kyu hmara room h hum usme hi rahegi..
Bi:nhi ye riwaj h ye mere hi room m rahegi shadi hone tak.Rishi and tanuja looks at each other.
Mp:Ae moti th kyu hmesha mere bhai ke pyar ki.dhushman bnti kyu alg kr rhi h unhe.
A:Oye lafantar m tera muh tod dungi.
T:Are ahana kyu bechare mere dewar k piche padi bachpan se iske sath ladti h tu isse ab bhi
R:Are tumne meri sali sahiba ko akela smj liya h kya.M.iske sath hun.And the four starts fighting.
Biji and raji enjoys their fight.
Sandy neha bani arrives BH and screen freezes.
Precap:Tanuja questions bani and neha.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love all the chapters. Good job👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update.Rishi taking ahana side and tanuja taking mp side was so cute.Plz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh so cute tanuja take mp side and rishi ahana was finally sandy remember about tanks tanuja lol that's better story then cv so cold creativity please write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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here is next part
Part-6
Sandy neha and bani arrive at BH and sandy is shocked to see tanuja.
S:Tanu tum zinda ho
T:Chachaji m tanuha hun and she tells everything about her surgeory and her marriage with rishi.
T: Chachaji par aap kahan chle gaye the itne saalo bad aaye ho aap apko meri yad nhi aayi.
S:Nhi tanuja putar aisi bat nhi h m nhi chahta tha ki meri gunaah ki saja tumhe mile isliye tumse dur aur vaise bhi tanu ko maar kar maine jo galti ki h muje uska bhut khair jaane de tuje us gunaah ki m bhugtne nhi dunga tu chl yahan se ab ye log tuje preshan nhi krenge.
T:Preshan nhi chachaji ye sb mujse bhut pyar krte or kyu na kare m inki jaan jo hun.Aur aap bhi kiski baaton m aa gye jante ho na kya kya kiya h bani aur neha hum sbke sath.
Ba:Kya bakwas kr rhi h in bediyo ki wajaah meri bechari bhtiji tanu hume chor kr chli gyi aur tum inka sath de rhi ho.Aaj sabit kr diya praya khoon praya hi hota h.
Ah:Chachi bs kijiye aap agr mere family k bare m kuch bola na toh m.bhul jaungi ki aap meri ...
Ta:Ek minute ahana tu shant hoja.Kis tanu ki bat kr rhi ho aap voh jisse naukaro ki trh kaam krwate the jiski mazboori kya fyada uthaya apne. Are voh toh apne bauji ki wajah se chup thi par apne toh use kamzoor hi smj liya apni is beti ko tanu bna diya sirf paiso k liye.Sirf paiso k liye apne rishi ki jaan daav pe lga di tanu ke pyar tk ko nhi dekha ab apko tanu yad aa rhi h. Aur tum neha tumhe toh rishi ne saaf saaf kha tha ki vo pyar krta h mujse paglo ki pyar krta h phir tumne chachaji ko juth bola ki rishi ne tumhare sath badtmeezi ki jis wajah se chachaji ne itna bda kadam uthaya.Aur aap log
Neha and bani are shocked to hear this and asked tum tanu ke bare m itna kuch kaise janti ho
Rano:Bani tune toh bhut koshish ki mere bete se uski tanu ko alg krne ki koshish ki lekin dekh aaj wahi tanu tanuja bnke wapis aa gyi aur dono khush ek dusre k sath.(neha bani and sandy are shocked)
R:Sandy ko m maaf kar dunga kyunki usne tanuja k liye bhut kuch kiya h par tum dono ne agr apni sakl dekhayi na toh m tumhe jaan se mar dunga get lost.
Ah:Suna nhi jao yahan se
Bani and neha leaves from there sandy goes to tanuja and said
S:muje maaf kar dena tanu
T:Nhi chachaji maine pehle bhi kha h agr apne tanu ki jaan li toh tanuja ko nyi zindagi di h
Everybody forgives him and asked to stay for tanshi marriage and he agreed. Natz and tanz come there and they asked about sandy.
T:Beta ye aapke nanaji aur chachaji ye meri batiyan natasha aur tanya.
Sandy is happy for tanuja.
Natz looks around and asked aboug the preprations
Mp:Beta apke mom and dad ki shadi h.
Na&Ta together ye hum bhut dance krenge.
Tanshi look at them and enjoy their childish things.
Precap:Tanshi miss each other and meets secretly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-7
In night tanuja is approaching towards her room just then biji stopped her and said Tanu kahan jaa rahi ho
Ta:Biji sone apne room m
Bij:tum bhul gayi the mere room m sona h
Ris:are biji ise usi room m neend ati h
Mp:Bhai sab smjte h hum
Bij:mujhe kuch nhi pta chal Tanu abhi k abhi
T:Biji m kya bol rahi thi m tanya aur natz k sath hi so jati hun kyu tanya.
T&N:Ha mumma aap hamare room m chalo
All go their rooms and tanya and natz sleept after playing with tanuja.
But neither Tanuja nor Rishi is able to sleep.
Suddenly Tanuja see a reflection in her room and she is about to shout but Rishi appears.He lifts tanuja and take her to terrace.
Ta:I m.impressed mr husband
Rishi:Tumhe mujhe miss kr thi toh bola kyu nhi
Ta:M kaise bolti tumhe smj nhi aya.
R:Are ladai karne k liye nhi laya m tumhe
T:Toh phir
Ri:Romance karne k liye aur tum ho ki jao m bat nhi karta tumse
Ta:I m sorry plz rishi dekho Na mujhe
Ri:Nhi tum hamesha aise hi karti ho mere sath is bar tumhe punishment milegi
Ta: Punishment itni choti si bat k liye acha theek h bolo kya punishment h
Ri:Tumhe mujhe kiss karna hoga
Ta:Bs itni si bat and she kissed on his cheeks.
Ri:Are husband ho m tumhara aur tum bs galo pe kiss karke chali gayi.
Ta:Oh toh tumhe and they are about to kiss but Ahana and biji comes there and shouts tum dono ko mna kiya tha na.
Tanshi are shocked
Ri:lo aa gaye pyar k dushman
Bij:Tu isliye tujhe bacho k sath sona tha
Ta:Nhi biji Voh bat nhi h Voh toh mujhe nind nhi aa rahi thi isliye m
Bi:Kuch nhi sunna mujhe chal ab toh tu mere hi room m chalegi mere sath chal.
Tanshi look each other but helpless
Biji takes Tanu with her.
Here Rishi is sad
Ah(laughs):Rishi tum na jake so jao
Ri:Ha sona hi padega tum log mere pyar k dushman jo ban gaye ho
Saying this he leaves.Ahana laughs and she also went to her room.
Precap:Rishi tries to meet tanuja but can he able to meet her.
Edited by pari454 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Nice to see story can progress very nicley without hairbrain twists of our cvs.
Thanks Pari
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Loved it...wish we could get such romantic scenes in serial too...

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