My imagination based on current track part 10 updated

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My new imagination based on precap hope u guyzz will like it...!!!.
Part-1
Rishi is taking care of tanuja and said ab dard nhi hoga tum theek ho jaogi.
T(with teary eyes):Dard hai abhi bhut dard hai
R:Woh dard bhi chla jaega tanuja agr tum man jao toh.Tanuja looks at him and they have an eyelock which is broken by rishi's phone ring and rishi takes the phone and leaves from there as ahana comes with haldi wala dudh and give it to tanuja. Ahana sits beside tanuja.
T:Ahana ek bat phuchu.
Ah:Ha phuchu na tanuja.
T:Bhut dino se phuchna tha muje is bar me par kabhi time hi nhi mila.Ahana smiley kahan h.
Ah:Uski toh shadi ho gayi tanuja.
T:Kiske sath.
A:Tumhe yad h papaji ne ek ladka pasand kiya tha smiley k liye aryan usne sab jan ne k bad bhi shadi ki smiley se.
T:Acha hai par smiley ka bacha.
A:Are tum mili toh ho us se aur tumne aur natz ne uski jan bhi bachai.
T:matlab m kuch smji nhi.
A:are tanya hi toh smiley ki beti hai. (tanuja is shocked) Tumhare jaane k bad rishi ne sabse baat krni chod di sirf smiley se hi baatein karta tha. Sirf rishi ke liye smiley tanya ko rishi k pass chod k chali gyi aur rishi ne bhi tanya ko itna pyar diya ki ab koi kah hi nhi skta ki tanya rishi ki beti nhi. Meanwhile mp enters in the room.
T:Par kyu rishi ki shadi netra se uski marji se ho rhi thi to muje toh jana hi tha yahan se phir rishi kyu aise...
Mp:Nhi tanuja bhai kabhi netra se shadi nhi karna chahte the roka bhi mere kahne pe kiya taki tum apni feelings unhe bta saku.
T:Nahi manpreet agr aisi bat hoti toh netra k sath shadi nhi krta par usne toh kr li na.
Mp:Nhi ye sach nhi h tanuja netra bhai ki patni nhi h bhai ne kabhi uske sath shadi nhi ki. Sagai wali raat jab tumne apni feelings nhi batai toh woh bhut dhuki ho gaye aur itni pee li ki behosh ho gaye aur jab hosh aya tab tak tum ja chuki thi.
Tanuna in shocked state:Behosh tha par vo ...
Mp:Ha bhai behosh the unhe kuch nhi pta tha ki kya ho rha h property papers pe sign netra ne liye the tumse rishi bhai ne nhi.
T:kya papers maine khud sign kiye the manpreet netra k khne par nhi.
Ah:kya par netra ne toh kaha ki usne sign karvaye h tumse rishi ka naam le ke or isliye tum chali gayi gusse .Tanuja is shocked and recollects all moments of that night plus that pune incident and thinks kahin ye sab netra ne toh nhi kiya hume alg karne k liye pta karna padega par uske liye toh muje yahi isi ghr m rukna padega.
Ahana jurks her and said kya hua tanuja tum kya soch rhi ho.
T:Nhi vo muje neend aa rhi.
Ah:Ok so jao. ahaman leaves from.
In hall massi said to ak: is halat m tanuja ko ghr nhi leke ja skte isliye tum yahi ruko hm ghr jate.
Ak:okk.
Mp sees rishi smiling and asked bhai itna kyu has rhe ho sirf aaj raat k liye ruki kl subah hote hi chli jaegi.
Rishi:Chote ab voh kahin nhi jaegi kyuki kl court apna faisla sunaega aur pehle natz phir natz ki mummy is ghr m aaegi.
Mp:are vah bhai kya plannig hai.
Next day in court judge is almost gives her but tanuja stops and said m kuch kahna chti hun.
J:Ok bolo.
T:Is custody case ka koi mtlb hi nhi h kyunki mera aur rishi ka divorce nhi hua h abhi m abhi bhi rishi ki patni hun.
All is shocked and mp said to rishi bhai ye palti kaise mar gyi.
J:Kya mtkb h apka.
T:Mtlb hmara divorce case pending h abhi.
J:Mr rishi kya ye sach h.
R:Ha bilkul sach h hmara divorce hua hi nhi kyuki tanuja ne 6 months comp nhi kiye humne final sign nhi kiye toh.
J:Toh pehle apka divorce procedure pura hoga aur uske liye apko 6 months sath rhna hoga aur agr kisi ne ye faisla nhi mana toh use punishment mil skti and court is adjourned for six months.
Tanshi are happy but ak is sad and leaves from there tanuja watches him and follows him.
T:Abhishek meri bat suno plz
Ak:Tanuja tum aisa kaise kr skti ho.
Tanuja tells him everything about netra even about her first birth as tanu and said m rishi k liye hi bni uske sath hi meri khusi plz abhishek muje meri khusi k sath jeene do.
Ak:sahi khti thi tum tanuja pyar ko jaise tum janti ho aur koi nhi janta m duaa karunga ki tum khush rhe.Meanwhile rishi comes.
Ak:So mr khadoos tum jeet gaye par tanuja ka dhyan rkhna agr uski aankhon m ek bhi aansho aya na toh mujse bura koi nhi hoga saying this ak leaves from there(i end ak's role at happy note)
Rishi hugs tanuja and said thanks for coming back in his life.Except rano all are happy.All leave from there and reaches home.Here natz is waiting for them.tanuja comes to natz and smartly tells her that her mr handsome is actually her father. Natz is happy and hugs rishi by saying papa to him.Tears roll down in his eyes and trio share a hug.

I will update next part in some time.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Achelvi

loved it...plz update soon

Thnx and update in some time
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story pari.Please update soon
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Part-2
Natasha is happy that she has a big family.
T:Natasha i m sorry ki mne tumhe ye sab nhi btaya.
N:Its okk mom muje pta hai aap ne ye sab jaan bhuj k nhi kiya.
T:but i promise ab hum sab sath rahenge thik bilkul vase hi jaise tum chahti thi.i love u natasha
Natz(is happy): i love u too mumma. and kisses tanuja.
R: are ye kya sirf apni mumma se hi pyar krti ho mujse nhi jao m apse bat nhi krta and makes a sad face.
N:are mr handsome oh sorry papa m apae bhi pyar krti hun i love u too but abhi muje alia bhut ki movie dekhni h m chlti hun and she leaves Rano who is not happy with all the things said:tanuja m tuje is ghr m nhi rhne de skti. is ldki k parivar ne jo kiya h na uske liye toh kabhi ise maaf nhi kr skti.
R:mom bs bhut ho gya ab apne agr tanuja ko kuch kaha na toh m tanuja natz aur tanya k sath is ghr ko chod ke chla jaunga.
Mp:Ha mom m aur ahana bhi bhai k sath chale jaenge mom.Beeji and rajji also said same to rano.Rano leaves from there in anger and calls netra to come asap.All bedi family except rano spent a quality time.
Next day all are having breakfast suddenly tanya comes and say hello to evryone and hugs rishi.
Rishi too hugs her but ignores netra rishi smartly tells her about tanuja and natz.As tanya liked tanuja so she is happy and call her mumma and tanuja sees smiley in her and hugs her tightly.
Rano tells everything to netra and netra fumes in anger said tanuja tum mujse mere pati aur beti ko nhi chin skti.
T:Netra maine tumse kabhi tumhara pati nhi china aur na kabhi karungi aisa.Tum hasi khusi rh skti ho apne pati k sath.
N:Ha toh jao mere rishi se dur.
T:Chup chipkali tumhara nhi mera rishi.Rishi mera h sirf mera.Hume koi alg nhi kr skta koi nhi yahan tk maut bhi alg nhi kr skti toh tum kya cheez ho.
Netra(smiles):Saat saal pehle bhi tum itni badi badi baatein krti thi par kya hua mne tumhe kitni aasni se tumhe alg kr diya and narrates everything about that night (which actually tanuja want) Tanuja slaps her hard so that she fall in rano'd feet.Rishi was like someone drop bomb on him he remembers when tanuja said him a cheater and feeks guilty as he does not understand what she say also feels her pain which she was going through.
T:M jan gayi thi netra jo tumne kiya mere sath m sab kuch sah skti thi par rishi ki bewafai nhi.Aur tumne meri usi kamjori ka fyada uthaya.
Rishi:maine tumhe apna dost mana netra par tum toh dosti k naam pe kalank ho aur ab is se pehle m tumhe jan se mar dun tum yahan se chali jao aur zindagi m kabhi apni sakal mat dhikana.
Netra gets afraid of rishi's anger and leaves.
R:Mom m finally aap se kah rha hun agr ab apki wajah se tanuja roi na toh m nhi janta m kya karun.
Rishi and tanuja said sorry to each other for not trusting and promise to be together and hugs each other.Jana ve played as bgm.
Precap:releavation of tanuja being tanu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...dont know when netra truth will come out in serial...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Achelvi

nice update...dont know when netra truth will come out in serial...

Thnx again cvs ko jyada hi pyar h netra pe so i don't think that its come so soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow! All I would say is so lovely piece of imagination. Thank you very much for sharing it. Please update it soon.
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Originally posted by: Anjan_Suntala

Wow! All I would say is so lovely piece of imagination. Thank you very much for sharing it. Please update it soon.


Thnx for appreciating i try to update in few minutes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mere ko both part's buht acha lagy especially wo jo chipkali ko thapar pra na ake dum awesome write sooner another waiting for it
(Cv is brainless sub serials kharab kr diya no creativity )
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love second part also.waiting for one more

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