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Loved it yr

Just relive adni again ...

Well written

Write more ffs on them plzzz

I can never get over this story. Maybe I'll go back to the old one now and read again. And that's because of the way you penned these beautiful characters. Highly fascinating! I hate them and love them but not over them.

Wish to express more, but I guess you would be used to these admirations😳

Hi,

Finally someone who read both versions! I am so excited, I thought I changed many things but obviously I am bit biased because even when I was writing first version, these scenes were there but as it was mostly written as her diary notes, it was difficult to get male leads perspective and then, advay's character is bit different, he was nicer while as you know shlok was much much harsher. Also, after a time I changed the direction of story, in first version male leads parent shifted to delhi while here male lead decided to shift back with his family. Veer is more fun loving as compared to Varad. Karan never came back in this version, so things were much calmer in this one.

When I wrote it I had just one aim in my mind that no one will tell me that they cried after reading the story and I think I managed that, there were much lighter scenes and some people found them funny. So, I am happy. Thanks for your admiration 😳