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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Eagerly waiting for the next part Chitra.


doing it shortly Sona , Just proof reading now one last time 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update, loved it.
Continue soon please.
Thanks for pm.


Thanks Limi, thats very kind of you, will be updating soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago



THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW


https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK


Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago
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THE STORY IS NOW AVAILABLE ON MY WATTPAD ACCOUNT, ON THE LINK BELOW


https://my.w.tt/UiNb/jJ0GHOJujK

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitraGS


Trust me sweetie you dont want someone like Advay or Arnav in real life
It is only that Barun portrays these characters so well that they seem so sexy and appealing. But in real life you want a man who respects you and cares for you.
Yes maybe my Advay kind of a guy is Ok, but the kind of Advay they showed in the show , no dont want that sort of a jerk for sure.
and if you think about Arnav, even in Ek jashn he says he never had time for his wife, So a billionaire who doesnt have time to celebrate his wedding anniversary. 😕
i mean what use is all that money. Do i really want a man who has millions of dollars but no time for me, SIGH NO WAY !!! Absolutely NOT !!!!


Khushi changed Arnav
I think both Arnav Advay have a lot of love in them
Your Advay is mind blowing
I think they both are perfect lovers
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting patiently for the update which I am sure going to be fabulous
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitraGS



Hello my love,

thanks a lot for ur kind words yaar, wow that a long review, i am really chuffed u took out the time to write such a detailed review , Thanks a lot 🤗

Actually yes, i mean Advay is a dark man, and he is someone who has lived in London for a very long time, So it is obvious that he has had a life. Also though out the story till know, i am trying to bring this across that Advay and Dev are at conflict, and Advay is a bully who always tries to subdue Dev. So his past too is a part of that defiance that Advay has for Dev But yet he cannot bring himself to hate her, and on the contrary of anything she is the only woman he has ever loved or the only woman he has ever wanted to marry,
Speaking fo what Chandini expects from Dev, I dont know is the answer to that question. I haven't still got to that part, but trust me chandini will tell me what she expects, once i get to that part. These characters talk to me, and i really love my interactions with the Advay in my HEAD HAHAHA 😆
i sound like a pshycho dont i , but i think that how invested i have become in these two characters.

WRT Rab Ne bana dee, Actually i never gave that a thought. Hmm yeah so true, Surinder wants her to love him for Surinder and not because he is Raj.
But i think the only difference is probably in the fact that she was married to Surinder before she met Raj.
Here she has always been in love with Dev, and is now married to Advay. But yes she is an adult now, so its that adult love that is different to her childhood love for Dev. But again i think in this case its also about love after marriage. The whole idea stems from the fact that there are a lot of women in India who may have loved someone in thier live, but then for what so ever reason they end marrying someone else, but still manage to fall in love with thier husbands.

I guess, i was lucky to have married the man i loved, but TBH i love i had for my husband as his GF is so totally different to the love i have for him as a wife. So i think marriage is a totally different ball game. The bond is so strong and different in marriage, that sometimes you even end up loving ur enemy HAHA 😆
So maybe thats where this story is different. Also in Rab ne, it would have been ethically wrong for the to chose Raj over Surinder, as Surinder is her husband.
I think this story is more like Hum Dil De chuke sanam, hmmm in the lines of that ,as it is a tussle between previous lover and current husband. But even in that move, the husband wins, he has to because that is marriage for you IMO HAHA 😆 A TOTAL MONSTER !!!

i am glad u liked my love making scenes, i soemtiems have to stop myself from adding too many of these, but somehow i feel it goes with the character of Advay, i mean he is dark, and sensuous so it is obvious he comes with an appetite HAHAA 😆



Well i will wait for chandani's answer than.. about rab de, i made that comparison solely on d basis that both personalities belong to one man.. & he refused to divulge that to his woman..

I agree with your marriage point.. mine is arranged but i got 1 yr courtship period.. & v fall in love before marriage.. life after marriage is very different for both arranged & love one.. its altogether a different ball game..

I have just watched one bollywood movie starring madhuri dixit, akshay kumar & saif ali khan.. i thin aarzoo it was.. where heroine choose her lover over husband.. actually husband died while saving lover.. no point guessing movie was a flop.. so yes marriage is d ultimate deal..

R v going to see pooja's husband too?

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Posted: 8 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely but dil maange more. so plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mahin123

lovely but dil maange more. so plz update soon


Just done it , have u already read it ?//

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