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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Mystery filled chapter

Is Suraj and Shiku living together in one house

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved the mystery
So the man is suraj, is he saying alone with shiku
Is the girl's name is anjali or she is hiding her identity
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved the start of the story!

Well you get to know in the next part if he is alone or not.

And about that girl, all we know for now is that she is Anjali with what she said.

So you might ask: Where is Chakor?

Well she is in the story dear!

Started to write the next part!

So it will be there before Thursday Afternoon! May be even tomorrow!

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Nice update sis..
Till now we have seen 3 characters..
In tat 2 characters r known persons and 1 s unknown..
This part starts with so much suspenses..eagerly waiting 4 tat suspense to get revealed😛
Luv u sis..tc

Thanks a lot dear!

Well there are few more to come and go in this story and few already gone in the past will be back in the future! ;-)

This story will reveal all the suspenses on the long run contrary to CAY where we got to know everything in one part!

So let's see how it goes!

Thank you once again dear!

Love you too! Take care!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting start,
All is not well in Suraj's life.
It's seems only Suraj and Shikhu live in the house.
Who is Madame and where is she?
Anjali seems to have suffered a lot, what was she running from?
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thank you buddy!

Glad you find it interesting!

Well you will get to know about the living beings of that house soon.

Madame? Well she will be known very soon too ;-)

I too think she has gone through a lot as she was starving!

I will try my best to be back sooner with an update!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Maithu

a different venture

I am liking this especially that of Anjali..

She looks confused yet strong ...

liked Suraj very different.

Waiting for the update

Wow that you are coming to India. Welcome!!

If not poking which part of India?

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting update👍🏼
Waiting for things to unveil !!

Thanks Amu!

Happy that you like it!

Me too waiting to see how it's going to unveil as it's not yet planned.

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: taahir004
Mystery filled chapter

Is Suraj and Shiku living together in one house

Thank you :-)

For now the place is a mansion and yes both are under the same roof!

Who else are there? We will get to know it soon! ;-)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
a different venture

I am liking this especially that of Anjali..

She looks confused yet strong ...

liked Suraj very different.

Waiting for the update

Wow that you are coming to India. Welcome!!

If not poking which part of India?

Thanks a lot dear!

All your encouraging words just make me go forward in writing more and more.

I'm trying a new combo of Suraj and Chakor here.

And when you see the Chakor, hope it goes well.

Will update soon dear!

No pbm! It's not a golden secret LOL

I'm coming to Chennai!

I will be there by Saturday evening!

Eagerly counting days and then it will be hours! Hehehe

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hello!

As said in the previous part, I'm here with the rest of the 1st part I have planned in the name of 2nd part!
I can see that there are a lot of questions raising with the first part.
I will try my best to solve the mysteries one by one with the upcoming parts.
No no it will not be like CAY where you got to know everything in 14th part. :-)

And adding this part as a small gift for VJ's Birthday Celebration!

Enough of my blah blah as I have a lot to say in the end!

Link to the previous part: Part 1

Happy reading!

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Part 2

"Orphannn" he spelled her last word with emotions crossing his eyes which he immediately hid.

- Does life only has bad news in stock? -

"Can I know why you were running out of the forest? In that state?"
Joing both her hands, massaging them "I.. I was Kidn..apped."
"Do you know the people who kidnapped you?" he questioned as he left the magazine on the table.
"HmmmHmmm" she shook her head negatively as she shivered with the single thought of her unfaithful days and nights.

*** I thought life to be laid on golden plates until I got hit by the hurricane which took away everything I had along with the precious people of my life. ***

- If she knew her kidnappers real identity, I could have helped her.
She seems to be uneducated and poor but strong in some way! -

"People who might know you might be looking for you. So where should I" he stopped as he saw a mocking ghost smile cross her lips.
"No one is there to search for me." as sadness lingered her voice with still mocking smile against the life.

- Is she sailing in the same boat as me? -

"So what do you think of doing after having breakfast?" he asked as he saw Shieku approaching in his peripheral vision.
"Nowhere to go. Need to start fresh!" as her eyes started to moist.
"Chief!" the voice came interrupting the emotional sequence which was going to unfold.

- Luckily he came else I don't really know how to handle emotional situation! Thank you Shieku!

Nodding his head, Suraj got up and following his actions, she too got up and followed him as he showed his hand to take a seat.

The breakfast was rapid and calm but once it's finished, they were the both, left alone around the dining table.

"Anjali!"
"Yes!" she lifted her head.
"Any plan for that new start?"
Fidgeting with the dress "I know that it's asking a lot when you have helped me. First of all thank you so much for the care and shelter." he acknowledged her thank you with a nod "Those kidnapper might be searching for me! Annd as I said, I don't have anyone." seeing his eyes "Can I get a work here please? Whatever the work is, I will do! Please." with sincerity showing in her eyes and voice.

"Work?" he sat without his hands on the table.
"Whatever work you give, I'm ready to do it! Please sir! I'm ready to die than being in those kidnappers' hands but life is not a game to play die or live game. I want to live until the day I breathe and I think work is the only way I can live as I don't have anything else to hold on."
"I don't know you to give you place and work? How to trust you?" watching her eyes from near.
"You trusted me to bring me here and treat me. I'm trusting you as I'm here, in front of you and talking. Trust is what makes people to grow and be themselves. That's all I can say. If you don't trust my words now, I will take your leave sir!"

- Maa always said trust is the essence of human beings but the trust I had on my people gave me only lose. Should I trust her or not? -

*** Trust! That word must be mocking at me for trusting everyone around me. That word which brought me here now! That word which might also give a new beginning to me! Trust! A simple word with strong impact. ***

"Shieku will show you a place to stay. You will work under him for now. If I get any negative vibes, sorry to say this, but you will be going away from here for forever."
A small happy smile crossed her lips for getting a shelter and work "Thank you so much sir!"

*** He is really a good person! Everyone doesn't have this helping nature. Maa and Dad, bless him from wherever you are for helping me in this situation. ***

"Chief!" he said as he got up getting back his all formal look.
"Hmmm Chi..ef" she said as she pushed the chair under the table.

"Shieku!" he called as he marched towards the couch to take his briefcase and coat, leaving her to stand there like a statue.
As his servant came running to his Chief, he told all the things which should be taken care off in this mansion before he got into his car.

With all the information he got, he made Anjali settle in a small separate room in the mansion and in the works he shared with her.

Like this one week has passed and nothing big changed.

Suraj has his routine of work from 8:30 to 9.
Shieku, the only person with whom Suraj converses, do all the main chores with now the helping hands of Anjali.
And Anjali got cured well with the healthy foods and medicines she takes regularly.

"Shieku Bhaiya, here is the groceries you asked for." she said as she passed the bag to him.
"I really don't get how come you don't even know to make hot water correctly. What will you do when you get married?" he said shaking his head.
"Let's see when it happens. And in case it happens, you are here to teach me nah(right)!" she smiled.

*** This one week has been better than being in that hell of a life. Bhaiya and Chief are the only people here and I feel safe to be here than in any other place.
Didn't interact a lot with Chief but from what it seems, he is a lonely man who is putting all his time in his work.
A good man with good heart, he is.
This mansion with just 2 people, it's just strange and ***

"Where are you lost Anjali?" Shieku
"Huh?" coming out of her thoughts.
"Thinking about your marriage?" he asked raising his brow as he prepared the dinner.
"HmmmHmmm" she shook her head with a smile as she took the bowls for the dining table.
Putting them in their place, she came back to kitchen to see that Shieku was in the storeroom attached to the kitchen, so went to take plates but stopped in her actions hearing someone. A baby!

*** Baby! Here! But there was no one here before. ***

Coming to the conclusion.
Hearing the cry of the baby, she ran out of the kitchen and made her way towards the room.
With each approaching step, the cry got louder and louder.
Opening the door, she stepped in to see a new lady in her late twenties, with a cute baby on her lap with a baby bottle in her right hand.

The lady there lifted her head and smiled seeing Anjali.
"You must be Anjali?" she asked her.
Anjali nodded her head and entered the room.
"I'm Ragini! Taking care of this Ayan sab(sir) since few months." she said smiling as a lot of questions raised in her head.

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Thank you so so much for reading buddies!
How was it?
Sorry for not revealing anything except few new characters who will travel with us for few more days.
Hope you all liked it!
If you feel it to be interesting, let me know it through COMMENTS and LIKES! And even if you don't like it!😊
Will be back with new parts when I will return from my trip to India!
So see you all then!

Take care!
Bye buddies!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks a lot dear!
All your encouraging words just make me go forward in writing more and more.
I'm trying a new combo of Suraj and Chakor here.
And when you see the Chakor, hope it goes well.

Will update soon dear!

No pbm! It's not a golden secret LOL
I'm coming to Chennai!
I will be there by Saturday evening!
Eagerly counting days and then it will be hours! Hehehe

Wow welcome to namma singara chennai!!!

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