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av131

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Interesting👍🏼
But unable to make anything out of it😛

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting👍🏼
But unable to make anything out of it😛

Thanks a lot dear!

I just didn't want to open anything now as it might just give away the whole story!

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Eatifi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I just didn't noticed the first four lines at first...

You knew it that I will love them,and your instincts were absolutely true.

Those were amazing Maithu...

Breeze-its the most romantic form of nature as it makes you feel the breath of your beloved

Time-doesn't really matters if even one second spent with your beloved is precious than life itself.

Love -its just divine,the most important thing in the universe

Life-who cares for it anyways or its duration,if you have got to experience it in this very lifetime.

Just let the BREEZE flow by me,so that I can feel you in it to relive the TIME we were together,in which our LOVE blossomed,a second of which is more important than the whole LIFE itself

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Eatifi
I just didn't noticed the first four lines at first...
You knew it that I will love them,and your instincts were absolutely true.

Those were amazing Maithu...
Breeze-its the most romantic form of nature as it makes you feel the breath of your beloved
Time-doesn't really matters if even one second spent with your beloved is precious than life itself.
Love -its just divine,the most important thing in the universe
Life-who cares for it anyways or its duration,if you have got to experience it in this very lifetime.

Just let the BREEZE flow by me,so that I can feel you in it to relive the TIME we were together,in which our LOVE blossomed,a second of which is more important than the whole LIFE itself

OMG

Lovely last line!

You just gave another dimension to those 4 lines buddy!

The mingling of the 4 words is magical!

Glad you loved it dear!

It was just at the moment thought that was transformed here in those 4 lines!

Love you dear!

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hello everyone!

Thanks for participating for selecting the title!

And it's Zarir (Intelligent + Easy to love)

See you all soon!

Take care!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hello!

I thought to post a 2000+ words of 1st part next week but then I will be not uploading it for 2 weeks after that as I will be travelling to India for Diwali, so thought to modify my planning.
So posting 1st part of Zarir with 1000+ words now and for next week I will try to come up with another part before my departure for my long time wished vacations.
It's just a part with introduction of characters and their roles for now.
Happy reading!

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Part 1

"How is she Doctor?" the man in his formals asks the man who just came out of the room.
"She is fine! Need rest and energy. And one more things, she didn't eat for one week or so, make sure after she wakes up she has something." the other man replied as he passed a prescribed paper to the former one "I have gave her vitamin and iron through injections for now. These are the medicines she need to take along with her food."
"Thank you doctor for making it possible at this time of the night."
"My duty Suraj!" and the doctor left from there after shaking hands.

"Shiekkku!"
A man in his earlier 30s came running towards Suraj "Chief"
"Get these medicines and look after the girl." and after giving few more instructions, he went away from there.

As Shieku entered the room to check on the pale girl, lying on the bed, in her not so good dress.
He checked her temperature before leaving from there to follow his chief's order.

Entering his room, Suraj got flashes of this uneventful day as he settled himself on his bed.

***** FLASHBACK *****

- This day is not at all mine! -

Giving full attention to the black dot far away from him on his way to an unknown destination, out of city, tension and depression ruling his driving hands, he made his car shriek as he abruptly stopped seeing a dishevelled girl coming out of the forest, running without the knowledge of her surroundings as the shock was visible on her frozen face seeing the car getting near.
As the car stopped just 2 inches away from her, she fainted effortlessly on the road.

- This is all I needed now! -

Thinking about his day and his fate, he got down from his seat, taking the water bottle he kept on the side, he neared the girl who seemed to be under difficult circumstances as her clothes were thorn here and there and her face covered in mud and blood.

He tried to wake her with and without water but nothing happened as per his wish.

- I hate this day! I failed in my career! I failed in my life! Adding to that, got to see this girl. -

Checking her pulse, he assured himself of her breathing life and lifted her in his arms as he pulled open his car door using his leg.
Settling her on the back seat safely, he went back to his place and started the car.

"Shiekuuu" he called as he entered his mansion which was not far from the spot he met her.
As he moved towards the stairs, he checked her pulse once again.

Seeing the person he called emerging from the kitchen, he continued his actions and talk.
Holding the girl in his hands, he makes his way towards a room while his servant stands rooted to ground seeing a girl in his brother/chief's hands.
"Shieku! Call our family doctor immediately!" and left from there leaving a confused Shieku there.

15 mins later Doctor came to the room where the girl is kept accompanied by Shieku and asked both the men to wait outside for the time he checks her.

*** NOW ***

- Life teaches us a big lesson when we lose something important to us.
Life has taught a big lesson to me.
I can be hard on the outside but the people who knows me, knew what happened.
I'm in the same state as the girl who is there.
She is hurt and I'm too.
She is breathing and living but unaware of her surroundings and I'm too in the same conditions.
Hope she gets well soon and reaches back her family who might be searching for her. -

Thinking for himself, he tried to sleep.

Hours started to pass and the night went darker and darker.
Shieku came back to the room to check on her to see her move in her sleep.
"Maaa" she repeated several times as she twisted and turned and suddenly got up and sat with shock written all over her face.

*** Where am I? Room? ***

She turned all around to check if she recognized the place and spotted a man and started to analyze how he is.

*** Who is he? And this place? Lastly I was running, then saw a car approach me and that's all I remember. Dress? ***

And she immediately checked her dress by removing the quilt over her to see that she is wearing a long skirt and loose tops.

*** Who changed this? What ***

"Chief bought you here in unconscious state!" he said seeing the turmoil going through her face and eyes.
"Chief?" she pronounced to herself.
"You need to take rest. He said he will meet you tomorrow so until then you can be here. I will go and bring you milk." as he was going to turn, she stopped him.
"This dress?"
"Wooo(That) our Madam's dress."
"Ohh!" she exclaimed as he exited the room.

*** So that madam must have changed my dress! But who is this chief? ***

As she tried to move, she felt all her tiredness to take a look at her, so she settled herself comfortably on the bed and closed her eyes as her past ran on her thoughts.

"Hellooo" it's been few seconds since Shieku has returned back to this room with a glass of milk but it was of no use as he found her sleeping "I think she slept." saying this to himself, he went back to his room.

Sun rose with force and woke her up with the rays of hope in his power.

Taking care of not falling, she got down of the bed and approached the door to be welcomed by the same man she encountered yesterday.
"Please take this!" as he handed her a pair of new dress "All the needed items are in the bathroom on your left." showing the door on his right "When you are ready, please come down!" as he turned to leave, he remembered something and turned back towards her "If you need anything, press the red button on the intercom there!" pointing to the white box near the door.
She nodded and he left.

*** Isn't there anyone else than him?
May be in this house, only servants work! ***

Shrugging her shoulders, she went to start her day.

Getting downstairs, she sees the same servant put breakfast on the table and another person with his face hidden behind newspapers.
"Chief!" Shieku mouthed to her as he pointed to the man seated there.

Nearing him, she cleared her throat to get his attention and it worked.
"Please sit!"
She smiled and reluctantly took a place.
He folded the newspapers "How are you feeling now?" and took the magazine from the table.
"Better!" she whispered.
"What's your name?"
"A...Annjali!"
"Hmmm" turning the page of the magazine he is reading "Where are you from? Where should I leave you?"
"I... An orphan!" and her hands started to tremble recalling those unlucky days.

*** Never dreamt of a day when I would stand like this and say those words. ***

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!
Sorry once again for making this part short!
How was it?
You might be having few questions, well I will try to get answers to those questions as soon as possible through upcoming parts.
If you are intrigued to know what is the story and who is this Anjali, well I think this part deserve your LIKE and COMMENT to make me know your thoughts.

Thank you buddies!

Next part: Part 2

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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