ShraMan FF: Tum mere zindagi ban gaye

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone!😊
So I've always been a silent reader on Indian Forums and I always had a passion of writing something of my own. I've written a story on wattpad and this is the first time I'll be writing on India Forums. I'm quite excited about it and well let's carry on shall we?😉

Character sketch:

Suman Tiwari: a 23 year old girl who is currently studying Hospitality in London. She has a passion of cooking. Her parents passed away when she was very small and so she was looked after by her uncle and aunt and her Nanu. Her aunt has always got a problem with her, taunting her or something or the other.

Shravan Malhotra: a handsome 25 year old guy who is studying law in London as well. Many girls fall for his looks and intelligence. His mother passed away when he was very small.

Preeti Tiwari: a 22 year old girl who is studying fashion designing also in London. She is Suman's cousin and best friend.

Pushkar Malhotra: a 23 year old guy who is loved by everyone. He is Shravan's cousin and Suman's close friend and the two are as close as siblings. He also studies law in London.

So guys! Here is the character sketch! Really hope you'll enjoy it.!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey, ,welcome to the forum! !
Character sketch looks interesting,,looking forward to read from you ! !
Hope you have a good time here! !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello!
First of all, welcome to the forum!
I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here 🤗
I didn't catch your name but I'm zoya..
Pleased to meet you!

The character sketch is interesting.
Would like to see what you have in store!

Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Hey, ,welcome to the forum! !

Character sketch looks interesting,,looking forward to read from you ! !
Hope you have a good time here! !

Hey! Thank you so much!😳 oh I'm sure I will😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Hello!

First of all, welcome to the forum!
I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here 🤗
I didn't catch your name but I'm zoya..
Pleased to meet you!

The character sketch is interesting.
Would like to see what you have in store!

Cheers!


Hey!😊
Thank you so much zoya! By the way I'm Aafreen!😃
Pleasure meeting you dear!
Thank you for the motivation zoya!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aafiifoorooskar


Hey!😊
Thank you so much zoya! By the way I'm Aafreen!😃
Pleasure meeting you dear!
Thank you for the motivation zoya!😳

The pleasure was mine Aafreen!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey lovely, wonderful and beautiful people!😳
I'm back and since I was way way too excited to write the first part, I couldn't help but write this.😆
By the way thanks a lot to the first three people who liked my first ever post on India Forums! @CarpeDiem_ , @orion23 and @PrincessAskVik! You'll really did make my day!🤗 Anyway enough of my yapping and let's get to the serious work shall we?

Tum mere zindagi ban Gaye: Chapter one


Suman: "Yaar! I so already hate this place! Why the hell did I even agree on coming here!?" She said as she was getting angry. First, that Mamiji of hers taunted her before she left the house, second, she almost missed her flight and third the stupid luggage took time to come. And there's one thing about Sumo and that is, she isn't at all patient.

Suman:" oh thank god!" She said as finally a cab stopped and she gave him the address Preeti gave.
She then got a phone call.
Suman:" Haan Preeti bol."
Preeti:" hello di, did you land safely?"
"Haan baba sab first class hai. I'm in the cab right now I might be coming any time soon."
"Okay that's great news then. See ya!"
"Chal bye." She hanged up.
Sumo'a life has never ever been easy. First her parents passed away when she was only 6, then the everyday taunting and cursing of her mamiji. She would actually prefer not having anyone looking after her if this is how her family is. The only ones she can turn to is her nanu and well Preeti also, but Preeti being her mamiji's daughter can't say much against her mother and mamiji always treats Suman nice in front of her nanu. That's why she decided on studying in London, to give herself some time and space away from home. Hah! Home, how ironic.
Thinking about everything she didn't even realize that she already came home and wow! This place is amazing!
It is a small yet big house which got trees surrounding it and a small beautiful garden in front. She then paid the cab driver and he went off after offloading her luggage from the car. She then pulls her bags and rings the bell.
"Sumo!!" Exclaimed Preeti super excitedly as she pulled sumo in a tight hug and she giggled. The two then share their little dance thing.
"Yaar meri Preetoz! I missed you so so much!" Sumo said after doing their little dance known as the 'TS Dance' which stands for the 'Tiwari Sisters Dance'. Crazy yes! These two are definitely inseparable!
"I hope mumma didn't taunt you or anything." Preeti said getting serious and sumo just looks away.
"Yaar di, why does she always do this to you? This really isnt fair of her to do so." She said and sumo just turns to face Preeti.
"Meri Preeti darling! Forget about all that aur yeh bata, where's pushkar?" She asked Preeti as preeti's cheeks got a little pink at the mention of his name.
"Voh, he went out. By the way, why don't you go and freshen up? I'll show you your room." She said as she rolled down one bag of sumo's and sumo started rolling the other bag.
"Well I'm telling you! We have so much if fun here! It's me, Pushkar, Shravan Bhaiya, shravan's sister, Natasha and his friend, Abhi. And now you came! I'm telling you, this will be the best days of your life!" Said Preeti as the phone rang.
"Don't worry just tell me which room to go to and answer the call."
"Hmm the second room on the right side."
"Oh okay, go now its fine." Suman said as Preeti went to answer the phone.
"Wow! This room is beautiful!" Exclaims Suman to apparently no one in the room.
"Shooh! Let me go and take a shower. Arrey, where's this room's bathroom?" She murmurs to herself after she took out her clothes from the bag.
She then saw a bathroom right opposite the room and went in there to take a shower leaving her clothes in the room.
****

"Ya, okay thank you very much Mr Berry. Okay have a good day." Said Shravan over the phone as he opens the house door and gets in to the house.
"Hello Shravan bhaiya!" Said Preeti.
"Hey. How are you?"
"I'm good just too tired but happy!" She said smiling widely.
"Uh that's good but may I know the reason?"
"Offo bhaiya! Today my sister came, the one from India, sumo?"
"Oh yes! So see you later, I'm going to my room, bye." He said as he was about to walk up the stairs but Preeti called him.
"Bhaiya! If you see sumo anywhere, please tell her I'm going out. Okay bye!" She said as she rushed out.
"Sumo?" Shravan asked himself as a faint smile appeared on his face.
***

"Yaar! Today is just not my day!" Said sumo as she realized she forgot her clothes in the room.
"Okay it was only Preeti around here, so its fine I can just go quickly to the room." She said as she wrapped the towel around her covering her till her knees and she quickly went into the room locking the door.
"Shooh! Thank god!" She said but the Thank god didn't last longer as she heard a guy whistling to some song and she turns around to find a shirtless guy!

"What the hell are you doing in my room?! Get out! Don't you have any manners, don't you know that you not supposed to enter any girl's room without her permission?!" Sumo shouts shravan.
"Excuse me miss! This is my room now please get out!"
"Oh just shut up! I know guys like you. They come to take advantage of any girl they find, lekin sumo naam hai mera. Tum try to Karo, mein tumhara bhurta banake doongi." She said and shravan advanced to her.
"Kya tum chup nahi baith sakti? I told you na, this is my room and if you don't want me to do anything to you, then leave." He said slowly and Suman got a little scared but didn't show it.
"Oh really!? What do you think you'll do huh? Aah!" She screamed as she slipped on the carpet and she fell taking shravan with him and they both landed on his bed with her on top of him. Her towel slowly opened up at the back revealing her upper back and shravan's cold hands were on her back leaving a shiver going through her spine.
After they broke off their reverie, they broke apart and sumo realized her towel became loose so she quickly got hold of it and stomped her foot and took her belongings and went away. She found another empty room and she locked the door, of course after making sure no one's inside. She then wore a floral top which came till her knees and black skinny jeans.


She then kept all her hair to one side and came outside.
"Di, did you manage everything? Let me just show you around your room." Preeti said as she came.
She then showed her the room next to Shravan's as her room and showed her where to keep the clothes and all.

They went downstairs and she saw shravan sitting with everyone else. Shravan notices her as well and he smirked while she glared at him. As soon as she look away she remembered what happened in the room and closed her eyes.
'Gosh sumo! Its all your fault! Now how will I face this guy!?' She thought to herself.

"Guys! Here is the person I was impatiently waiting for! My sumo di!" Exclaims Preeti as she introduced sumo to them.
"And this is Natasha, shravan Bhaiya's younger sister, this is Abhi, Pushkar and Shravan Bhaiya's friend, and well this is pushkar as you know, and well the one who's house this really belongs to is, shravan bhaiya!" She said as she pointed to shravan and Suman got a shock knowing that shravan is the same guy she fought with earlier during the day.
'My day couldn't get any worse!' She thought to herself.
"Nice meeting you Ms Tiwari." Said shravan as he held out his hand for a handshake and she shook hands with him noticing the smirk on his face and she felt like smacking him and wiping off that smirk.
"Nice meeting you too." She said.
After everyone was engrossed in talking shravan moved a bit closer to Suman and this startled her a little.
"Oh so I'm sure you are extremely happy, because you'll get to see such a handsome and hot guy like me." Shravan said with a smirk and she glared at him.
"Wo kya hain na, people like you, apne aap KO boht importance dete unfortunately, to main tumhari baat KO mana nahi karungi." Said Suman smiling extra sweetly as she went to sit next to Preeti.
'Bloody aafat." Murmured shravan to himself.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww man!
Thanks for the dedication!
Trust me, this forum has a lot of good people around!

I liked the update!
Quite enjoyed their first spat!
Sumo is being so sumo and Shravan well...
Mr. Berry is also here!
I liked how he called her an aafat.. I hope that endearment sticks on!

Keep these coming Aafreen!
Cheers!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Aww man!

Thanks for the dedication!
Trust me, this forum has a lot of good people around!

I liked the update!
Quite enjoyed their first spat!
Sumo is being so sumo and Shravan well...
Mr. Berry is also here!
I liked how he called her an aafat.. I hope that endearment sticks on!

Keep these coming Aafreen!
Cheers!

😛


Its truly a pleasure zoya! :)
Thank you
Haha😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the mention...🤗
Interesting starts..!!
Looking forward to read more !!
Aafreen ki Aafreen likhavat!!

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