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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I loved how here they both have got uses to each others presence in their lives


Yes but that happens when two people start to live together, at least here they are in a large mansion, if it was an average sized house or flat then the comfort becomes even more evident as you can't help but have to learn to live with the other person.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitraGS


Yes but that happens when two people start to live together, at least here they are in a large mansion, if it was an average sized house or flat then the comfort becomes even more evident as you can't help but have to learn to live with the other person.


I think apart from the space it is also the mental state
They both are knowing each other
At least Chandni is right now
Advay too will at some stage later
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Posted: 8 years ago


The Courage!! The Comfort !! The Realisation !! Part 2 ADVNI FF



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Shilpa and Murli came back with empty trays, it was time to serve the prasad. Chandini quickly got back to her senses and started to plate the prasad, while Shilpa started to arrange them neatly on the trays.

Chandini smiled at Shilpa. "It was so good to have her by her side" She thought as she heaved a sigh of relief. Shilpa was the only person , she actually knew at Advay's house. Her only friend and confidante, ever since she had moved in with Advay.


"Yeh tanatan, Teek tarah se serve kar" Shilpa ordered Murli.


"Janti ho Chandini jiji, wohh jo doodhwale ki beti hai naa Gulaabo. Yeh tanatan uspey line marta hai "Shilpa scrunched her face with disapproval


"Haan !! Maartey hain hum ussko line" Murli replied with sarcasm "Par iss matar ke dane ko itni mirchi kyun lagi hai, Jara pooch ke batana humka , Chandini didi " He looked at Shilpa murderously.


"Achcha Hamein Mirchi lagi hai, Aur tum jo makki ki tarah bhin bhina tey ho , uss Gulaabo ke irdh girdh , wohh kuch nahi kai kya. Badi aayee Gulabo kahin ki " Shilpa huffed as she put her hands on her hips, trying to make herself look bigger.


"HA HA Ha" Murli Chuckled with sarcasm " EE Dekho Chandini didi, kaa kar rahi hai yeh matar ka dana. Samjhao EE do futiya ko koi, ki kamar pe haath rakh lene se do phootiya se chey futiya nahi ban jaayegi" Murli guffawed with his hands on his stomach.


"Murli hum keh dete hai tumko, humse naa uljho" Shilpa fumed. Murli scrunched his face as though to threaten her.


Chandini couldn't stop herself from laughing, as these two continued to bicker.

"Achcha ab bas karo, tum dojo" She said "Chalo, its getting late. We need to start serving the prasad or Nani will begin to worry." She added with a smile


"Waise jiji, May I tell you one thing " Shilpa asked with a smile "You look beautiful with the Sindoor in your parting"

Chandini blushed as she slowly brushed her fingers against her parting, which Advay had just filled with Sindoor.


The three of them quickly took the trays out, and started to serve the guests. It was a ladies only event and there were about 50 odd women of different ages sat together having a good laugh, all dressed in expensive silks with heavy embroidered zaris, and zardosis. They were all very rich by the looks of it. Chandini looked at them and smiled, she had never felt so intimidated in her life.


Chandini was about to run back into the kitchen, when Nani called out to her to come and meet her friends. Shilpa quickly assured Chandini that she and Murli would serve the others, as Chandini made her way towards Nani.


Nani began introducing her to the ladies.

"Yeh hamare Cheeku ki Patni hai" she beamed with pride.

Chandini bowed her head and kept whispering 'Namaste'. She was nervous, she always felt apprehensive when surrounded by too many people, and today was no different. She could feel her heart thudding against her chest, as panic began to slowly set into her. , Chandini just wanted the introductions to be done with, so that she could get back to the safety of the Kitchen.


But the women kept bombarding her with questions about Allahabad, her family and how she was enjoying her new life in Mumbai, Her face was turning red, and she felt a strange sense of fluttering in the pit of her stomach. She could feel her head begin to spin.


Aadi, out of the blue, came and stood next to her. He put his hands in hers, and smiled sweetly. Chandini felt better with Aadi, by her side, holding her hand.

"Arey , Yeh meri Mami sabse pyaari aur sabse best hai" He beamed.


He then looked at her and said "Mami mujhe prasad toh mila hi nahi, Chalo na kitchen main , mujhe prasad chaayiye" he urged as he tugged at her hand.

Chandini heaved a sigh of relief, as Nani asked her to take Aadi along with her to the kitchen before he starts to throw another tantrum.


Chandini held on to Aadi's hand and quickly made her way to the kitchen. She was still shaking and trembling. She started plating a ladle full of prasad, taking all the time in the world. She just wanted to stay within the safety of the Kitchen for now.


Advay walked in looking concerned. Chandini saw him from the corner of her eye. Just the sight of him calmed her, as her eyes began to well with tears.


Aadi put his hand up to Advay for a Hi5.

"CM I need my chocolate "He demanded. Advay reached to his pocket and gave him a kit kat, without taking his eyes off Chandini. Advay picked aadi in his arms, and kissed him softly "Thank you" He whispered.

Aadi kissed him back, before sliding down and running back into the lounge.

Chandini looked on with surprise.


Advay slowly looked at Chandini. Concern filling his eyes. He started to walk towards Chadnini.


"Advay" Chandini whimpered and ran straight in his arms. She wrapped her arms around his waist and wept with her head against his chest.


Advay was taken aback at her reaction. He wrapped her in his arms and held her tight.

"Tum teek ho" he enquired as he put his hand on her head and stroked her hair gently .


Chandini was still trembling, tears began to stream down her cheeks.


Advay held her closer, "Shush !!! Its okay Chandini". He assured her. "Main hoon baa"


Chandini jolted back to look into his eyes "Aadi ko aapne bheja" she asked him with disbelief.

Advay nodded a 'yes' as he slowly wiped her tears. He wrapped her in his arms and rested his head against hers.


"Maine upar se Dekha tumhe", He whispered. "Your face was turning red and it seemed like you were about to faint... I realised that you were almost on the verge of another attack. Hence why I asked Aadi, to bring you to the kitchen." He said in a warm, soothing voice.


Chandini shut her eyes and tightened her hold around his waist. She slowly began to relax against the slow thudding of his heart. For now she felt safe wrapped in the warmth of his embrace.


"Chandini didi "Shilpa called out to her , as she walked into the kitchen mindlessly, only to find Chandini in Advay's arms.


"Oh Sorry " Shilpa put her head down and blushed, while Chandini tried to step out of Advay's embrace, only to be held closer. She looked at Advay, startled.


"Yes, Shilpa" Advay asked wryly, as he continued to gaze at Chandini tenderly.

"Woh sir, Naniji , Chandini jiji ko bula rahi hai "She replied with her head held down.

"Teek hai, Keh do aa rahi hai" He commanded. Shilpa quickly ran out of the kitchen smiling to herself.


Chandini looked at Advay alarmed.

She gripped on his arm, "Mujhe dar lag raha hai, Advay " She whispered as she shivered in his arms.


He caressed her face with his fingers "Nani bula rahi hai, tumhe jaana chahiye "He advised her.

"Don't worry, I am on top of the stairs, watching you. Ok" He assured her.


He took her hands, and slowly walked her towards the lounge. He waited and watched, till she walked up to Nani, before going around and up the stairs.

Nani continued with the introductions. Chandini smiled and answered the questions the women asked her. Every now and again, she would glanced up to the top of the stairs, only to find Advay smiling at her. For now she felt calm. The thought that he was just a heartbeat away put her mind at ease.


The evening was a hit, Chandini was elated. She had managed to stay calm and impress the guests. Nani was happy. But above all Advay had spent the entire evening standing at the top of the stairs. He hadn't for once taken his eyes off her.


He had never been so good to her, she thought to herself. " What had gotten into him She wondered though.


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Chandini finally retired to her bedroom.

She once again pondered over the possibility of Advay being Dev.

"That's impossible" She assured herself. "Dev would never even hurt a fly, let alone hurt his Chandini. There was no way Advay was Dev. Dev had left her, he had forgotten her". She consoled her heart.

" Maybe it was time that she too put aside Dev's memories and the hope that he would return one day " she thought to herself with a sigh.

She slowly began removing her rings as the memories of the evening began to flash before her.

She brushed her hand against the Sindoor in the parting of her hair as she blushed at the memory of Advay filling it with Sindoor.

"Tum Meri Ho, Sirf meri "His words echoed in her head as realisation set into her. She was his wife now.

"This is it" she murmured to herself "This is my life now " She smiled, as the thought of being Advay's wife made her heart flutter. She closed her eyes. She just wanted to relish this moment for now.



Chandini jolted out of her trance as his fingers grazed against her ear.

Advay was removing her Jhumka taking extreme care not to hurt her. She looked at him in surprise, as he continued working on the screw that kept the Jhumka in place.

He slowly looked into her eyes, took her hand and put the ear ring in the palm of her hand.


He tucked her hair behind her ear. Chandini felt her stomach clench at his touch. Advay was sat too close to her. The heat of his breath against her ear and her nape felt like sparks of fire igniting a flame somewhere deep within her.

As she felt her blood thicken and her heart rapidly thud against her chest, she told herself that this had to stop. Advay was her nemesis after all. He had vowed to destroy her and her family.


"This has to stop" She told herself firmly, but couldn't help but flinch at the touch of his finger against her ear lobe. He slowly grazed his finger, from her ear all the way along her jaw, leaving a trail of fire behind. Chandini could barely breathe. All she do for now was close her eyes, curl her toes and scrunch the sides of her lehenga with her hands.


"Meri Katto Gilehri" He whispered into her ears, as a warm smile spread across his face.


He slowly got up, walked up to the bed and slumped on her side of the bed. Chandini was still reeling in the after math of his touch, before she realised that Advay was lying on the bed, ON HER SIDE OF THE BED. She looked at him in shock and in confusion.


"Kya hua, sona nahi hai kya, Bhagyawan" He asked her with mischief in his voice.


"Aap bed pe soyenge" She asked him as a sense of fear began to set into her.


"Haan" he replied wryly "Main aaj se bed pe soonga, Waise bhi yeh mera bed hai, aur yeh mera bedroom hai, Remember "He added with a certain bluntness.

"Oh and please don't tell me, that you are going to sleep in that heavy lehenga" He pointed towards her heavy embroidered lehenga.


Chandini slowly got up from her stool. Her heart continued to pound against her ribs. She felt limp and weak as she made her way into the bathroom. She began to undress herself with trembling fingers.


"Why is he planning on sleeping on the bed" She frowned to herself.

"What does he intend upon doing" Just the thought of it made her shudder with fear and confusion.


She jumped as She heard a soft knock on the door.


"Chandini" He whispered "Tum bina kapdon ke bahar aane wali ho kya" He chuckled


Chadnini looked around in confusion, as it dawned upon her that she hadn't taken her night clothes with her in the heat of the moment.


"Damm" She groaned, as she scrunched her face in anger. She could tell that he was secretly revelling at the effect her was having on her.


She quickly wore her choli, and started fumbling with the dori at the back, all the while swearing under her breath. She knew she had knotted the doris all over the place, but this was the best her trembling fingers could do.


She stepped out of the bathroom and fumed to find Advay grinning to himself as he leaned against the wall next to the bathroom door.

Chandini shot daggers at him with her eyes. "How dare he? she thought to herself.


She opened the wardrobe, and began fidgeting with her clothes in confusion. She froze to the spot. She felt like someone had knocked the wind out of her lungs, as she felt Advay warm hands burn against the soft skin of her petite waist.

Chadnini stiffened against his touch , as he slowly slid his fingers up her back, till he reached the doris of her Choli.


"Yeh Choli kaise peheni hai tumne" He whispered hoarsely with his lips burning against her ears. He began to untie the doris at the back. Chandini trembled and clenched her lehenga in her hands. She could see his reflection in the mirror, in front of her. The intensity in his eyes was impossible to bear.


She looked at his reflection with shock, as she realised that he was untying her Doris. She jolted and turned around with her back to the mirror, to stop him from continuing with this madness. Fear struck at her heart as she began to tremble at the thought of what Advay intended to do next.


Advay kept glaring at her intensely. His eyes had now turned a darker shade of chocolate. She could feel the heat of the fire burning within him.

He took her in his arms again "Iss lehenge main bilkul Katto Gilehri lag rahi ho tum He whispered coarsely as he admired her backless choli in the full length of the mirror behind her.


She could barely breathe as she felt his warm chest graze against her softness. The smell of his musky aftershave was making her dizzy enough to tip her off the edge of reason. Everything seemed blurred as she began to lose track of her thoughts.

She was flapping, she didn't know what she was doing or intended to do. She could barely breathe as her brain was getting clouded with the strange sensations that rose in the pit of her belly.


Chandini knew something was happening to her that was way beyond her control, just didn't know what this strange sensation was or how she could make it go away.


Advay smiled to himself at the realisation of the effect he was having on her. He pushed her to one side, dug out a dress and handed it to her.

Chandini , still dazzled by what had just transpired between them , took the dress with trembling hands and slowly made her way into the palatial bathroom.


She shut the door behind her, as tears threatened to make their way down her cheeks. She slumped against the polished limestone flooring holding her hand against her thudding heart, and sobbed.

"This was surely his next plot at hurting her " She told herself.


"Since all his methods at torturing her, had failed, now her resorted to destroying whatever little self respect she had left within her" she convinced herself

"Nahi Mr Raizada, Main aap ko jeetne nahi doongi" She promised herself.

"I need to get stronger" She told herself " I cannot let him affect him she vowed to herself."


Chandini got dressed and stepped out, only to find Advay mixing Chandan in her jar of ubtan.

"I just thought it would be easier for you tomorrow " He murmured. He looked calm, peaceful almost.


"Why are you sleeping on the bed "? She demanded


Advay looked at her in surprise, as he raised his brow

"Excuse me" !! He shot back "Thats because its my bed and I had always slept on the bed , till you turned up in my life" He retorted with complete indifference.


"I didn't turn up in your life Mr Ajeeb Singh Raizada, you dragged me into these murky waters, BY FORCE". she choked. "Aap ne zabardasti mujhe shaadi ki, Yaad aaya" she taunted him.


"I don't care, Chandini" Advay snapped back, "I am sleeping on the bed. I don't like the couch. My back hurts anyways. You can sleep where ever you like" He shrugged as he went back to patting the pillow in place, before sliding down on the bed.


Chandini stood there glaring at him. Her eyes welled with tears, as he closed his eyes and pretended to sleep. "How could he act with such indifference" she asked herself.


She looked around and tried to crash on the couch, but it was hard and uncomfortable.


"How had he managed to sleep on it for over a month" she wondered.


After trying to force herself to sleep on the couch for about an hour, she finally gave up and slowly climbed back on top of the bed.


Chandini was always used to sleeping on the right side of the bed, but the Rowdy Professor was not willing to budge. She had never slept on the left side of the bed, and found it extremely uncomfortable. She kept tossing and turning trying to get a wink, but in vain.

She fluffed her pillow and tried sleeping in every possible position.


"Oh so this was his new torture" she exclaimed to herself in sheer exhaustion


Advay turned around and watched her with frustration. He shut his eyes and clenched his jaw, he was irritated by her constant tossing and turning and just wanted her to let him sleep in peace.


"What the hell, Chandini" He growled "Cant you sleep without having to make so much noise?, I have been trying to sleep here for the last hour" He sounded exhausted.


"I cant sleep on this side of the bed" She grumbled.


"I know this is a part of your game" She mocked, as Advay raised his brow in surprise " You Just intend to torture me by not letting me sleep" She huffed with exasperation.


Advay had heard enough. In one swift moment, he pushed her against the bed, and pressed his chest against hers.


"Yes , I do intend upon keeping you up all night... Trust me "He whispered into her ears hoarsely, "Just not tonight" he smirked as he slightly brushed his thumb against lower lip.


Chandini felt like her heart was about to explode.She began to heave, as his chest burned against her soft yet well formed breasts. She could hear his heart thudding roughly against hers. His dark fervent gaze burned into hers. She shuddered under him as she couldn't bear to hold on to the intensity in his eyes. All she could do for now was close her eyes and wait for him to make a move, as she put her trembling arms around his neck.


Advay closed his eyes and clenched his jaw. He was a man of great restraint and today his ability to restrain himself had been put to its ultimate test. With great difficulty he took her in his arms, and tossed her to the right side of the bed, while Chandini howled in shock.


She looked at him in surprise, "What had just happened" she wondered.


Advay had grabbed hold of her waist, and rolled her on to the other side of the bed. Onto the Right side of the bed.


"Happy" he hissed "Now sleep"


"pagal hog aye aap" she yelled.


"Shush" he whispered. "Quiet, Koi sunn lega" he warned her.

"waise I dont have any problem, just that Pooja might badger you with too many questions about all the noises you have been making." He chuckled, as Chandini frowned at him.


Chandini turned around, flicked her hair behind her as it fell against Advay's face. She closed her eyes, tried to calm her pounding heart and forced herself to fall asleep. "I just hope all this ends like a bad dream" she wished


Advay for once, loved the way she flicked her silken hair against his face. He touched her soft tresses as they lay against his stubbled cheek.

"Oh my, they smell so good" he thought to himself. He wrapped them around his arm and drifted off to sleep with a smile on his face.



The early morning Sun shone from between the curtains. The sky was blue, The birds were chirping happily .It seemed like a perfect start to a perfect day.


Chandini slowly fluttered her eyes open. She had rested well, she couldn't remember the last time she had slept this well. She closed her eyes again and smiled to herself , only to open them in shock as she felt his heavy arm around her waist, holding her in place.

Chandini slowly turned her head around to see Advay sleeping with his chest against her back, and his arms around her waist.

So it wasn't a dream , this was really happening. Advay was actually sleeping in her bed.

Chandini started to flap as it dawned upon her that there was a man in her bed, holding her in his arms, and that man was ADVAY.


She began to panic and slowly tried to wriggle out of his hold. Advay stirred out of his sleep, only to watch her with amusement. He tightened his grip around her. Chandini looked at him in shock with eyes as wide as saucers.

"Good Morning, Meri Katto Gilheri" He whispered as he nuzzled his face against her neck. Chandini choked on her breath. "Good lord it starts again She heaved with exhaustion.

"Let me go" She demanded as she squirmed in his arms.


He removed his hands from around her waist and let go off her with a chuckle. She sat up in one quick movement and was about to jump out of the bed. But instead yelped in pain and crashed against his chest. She turned her head to find her hair in a tangled mess around his arm and his shirt. She began tugging at her tresses roughly.


"Wait" He barked, as he slowly began untangling the soft tresses from around his arm.

"Yeh, Aisi kaise ho gaye" She quizzed as she looked him, puzzled.

"Haan, Woh I wrapped them around my arms last night" He smirked


"What" She shot back as she narrowed her eyes. "Yeh mere baal hain, Mr Ajeeb Singh Raizada"


"Yeah, I know, and they are very beautiful" He glanced up and gave her his trademark crooked smile. He couldn't help but rub her soft hair against his cheek once more.


"Stop it" She howled " And Stop with that Tedhi smile of yours "She fumed, as she continued to pull at her tresses.


"Yahan koi mujra ho raha tha, ki mere balon ko gajre ki tarah apne kalai pe lapet liya, Mr Ajeeb Singh Raizada" Chandini continued to tug at her hair, which were now stuck in the buttons of his shirt.


"Hmm, No" He replied grinning to himself "Waisey idea bura nahi hai, Lets try that tonite" He added with a wink. Chandini glared at him with anger seething from her eyes.


Advay went back to releasing her hair from his shirt. Freeing her silky hair from the buttons on his shirt was proving to be one of the most therapeutic things he had ever done.

"Need to do this more often" he chuckled to himself.


Once, he had freed her hair, She pulled herself away from him and was about to scramble out of the bed, only for Advay to grab her by her arm and pull her back onto the bed. Chandini looked at him shocked.

He sat up, crossed his legs and folded his palm as he began chanting the Kar Darshana mantra. Chandini quickly realised that she had totally forgotten her morning ritual in the heat of the confusion. She bit her tongue and followed suit. Once she finished saying her prayer and also praying to the crystal Ganesh on her bedside table, she turned around, to find Advay beaming to himself with pride.


"How did you know I say these prayers everyday" She stammered

"I know" He said calmly as he began to get off the bed "I have watched you, for a month, every morning" He added.

Chandini looked at him spellbound at the thought that he had been watching her.


"Oh and also watched, how you love watching me" He chuckled.


Chandini fumed, "What ? No", She shot back "I have no idea what you are talking about" She stammered as she got out of the bed, opened her wardrobe and began to fumble with her clothes.


"Hmm, Chandini" Advay called out to her "I need to get to work early, today. I might have to use the bathroom first."


He took his towel and walked past her, while brushing his fingers against her navel on purpose. Chandini clenched her stomach at the sudden rush of adrenaline. She clung on to the shelf as though her entire life depended on it.


He turned around before stepping into the bathroom and said " Could you please take a Suit out for me for today.

He walked into the bath and shut the door.

Chandini, still reeling with the aftermath of his touch, looked after him in confusion.


"What was going on?" she asked herself. "Had he just asked her to choose his clothes" She questioned herself again, just to make sure she had heard him correctly.


She slowly opened his side of the wardrobe and started to fidget with the rows of suits that hung from the soft padded hangers. She finally settled for a Ink blue suit and matched it with a baby blue shirt, and a Navy tie with pink and white stripes. She then opened one of the drawers and took out a blue and pink striped cufflink to go with it, and arranged them all neatly on the bed.


Advay came out of the bathroom. He was in his bathrobe. He continued wiping his wet hair with the towel around his neck.

Chandini couldn't stop herself from staring at him. He looked delectable with water still dripping from his hair against his brow. She involuntarily stood up on her toes and began wiping the water away from his forehead, as Advay smiled at her suggestively.


He took her in his arms and shook his wet hair against her. Chandini flinched as the drops of water hit her skin like shards of glass.


"I ... I have put your ... your suit on the bed" She stammered as she tried to calm her thudding heart.


He glanced towards the bed "Not bad, You do seem to have a good sense of fashion" he smirked, as he began to wipe the drops of water on her lips with his thumb.


Chandini froze at this touch, she felt her limbs turning weak. She wanted to run but her legs wouldn't move. It felt as though every inch of her craved for him to continue. She collapsed against his chest. The heady smell of his aftershave was maddening. She just wanted to stay pressed against him for the rest of her life.


Advay shut his eyes in agony.

"Chandini" He whispered softly. " I am sorry but I am getting late" He sounded apologetic. "I'll be back soon, I promise He tucked her hair behind her ear tenderly". He hated himself for having to leave her aching for him, but today was an important day at work.


Chandini was stunned at herself. "What was wrong with her" She wondered.

She was leaning on his chest clinging on to him, begging him almost to stay.


As she came back to her senses she eventually stepped back with great difficulty. Her cheeks were flushed and she continued to look away from him. She gathered her wits and made her way, slowly into the bathroom with her head held down. "Why did her affect her so much"? She wondered to herself as she looked at her reflection in the mirror. She touched the parting in her hair which was still red with the Sindoor he had applied the previous evening.


"Mrs Chandini Advay Singh Raizada" She whispered to the girl in the mirror as she blushed.



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Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago
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Okay Everyone my the kattos the my Gilehris,

this is the continuation to the story on page 1
I thought i continue on same thread as it makes more sense, however if you suggest otherwise i ll move it to a new thread
okay so what is this story about, TBH even i dont really know what its about

Just lets say the DAY IN THE LIFE OF ADVAY AND CHANDINI and their new found Acceptance of each other.

I didnt have a concept or a plot when i started writing this and just went with the flow. I wrote parts of it on Monday, but owing to the depressing episodes we had, I too a couple of days off and then went back to write the second part on Thursday. Though it was ready on thursday itself, i thought i ll post it over the weekend, 😉

Just wanted all of you to beg me for it , Kaahe ki i am a sadist like that 😆

Just one request people , when you read this story please dont use too much of your brains, I just typed at supersonic speed without giving much thought to language or typos.

If you find anything sounding Phoney please let me know and i will amend, also if you find any TYPOS !! please let me know , i dont know why but spelling mistakes does my head in especially when reading a story.

HMM what else did i want to say.
Oh thank you all for MAKING MY LIFE A HELL by badgering me with a demand for a new FF, 😆
Thanks to you guys the creative keeda is out and having immense fun.

Also as i said there is no concept so read it like a fun post

I tell you i am just dishing waffles over waffles here and so embarrassed with my story telling ability so far 🤢

But nevertheless i will continue writing Kaahe ki i love to TORTURE all of you with my new found creativity HAHAH 🤣

Oh also with this post I AM OFFICIALLY A GOLDIE NOW !!!

Promoted from Newbie to GOLDIE in less than 6 weeks, Fastest promotion maloon padta hai humka toh, in the history of promotions 😆

Thanks to all of you and especially my Gilehris for making this possible 🤗

Cheers, Enjoy and do leave us a comment , 🤗

Good , bad , Meh or otherwise

Cheers, Chitra


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Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago
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Part 1 :
A routine morning prayer, routine bathroom sequence in household of a newly married couple... And you made Chandni and Dev re-live a moment of their happy past. Also, you created a challenge for Advay's brain to work on.

An usual ritual after marriage at home, usual elders gifting Bahu, usual furniture shifting to accommodate guests ... And you created Advay-Chandni's ego clashes, arguments and fake fights that all newly married couples undergo.

But the last sequence is where You created Magic ... where Advay stirs emotions in Chandni, his daring possessiveness to portray his love for her - with a certain disregard for the guests at home (toh? Yeh mera ghar hai), with a mischievous move to have her comb his hair (I totally loved that Yeh Kisne Kiya question), and finally making Chandni wonder the similarities between Dev and Advay by handing her the Uptan powder... THAT was totally a Win Win situation for Dev, Chandni and Advay.

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta


Part 1 :

A routine morning prayer, routine bathroom sequence in household of a newly married couple... And you made Chandni and Dev re-live a moment of their happy past. Also, you created a challenge for Advay's brain to work on.

An usual ritual after marriage at home, usual elders gifting Bahu, usual furniture shifting to accommodate guests ... And you created Advay-Chandni's ego clashes, arguments and fake fights that all newly married couples undergo.

But the last sequence is where You created Magic ... where Advay stirs emotions in Chandni, his daring possessiveness to portray his love for her - with a certain disregard for the guests at home (toh? Yeh mera ghar hai), with a mischievous move to have her comb his hair (I totally loved that Yeh Kisne Kiya question), and finally making Chandni wonder the similarities between Dev and Advay by handing her the Uptan powder... THAT was totally a Win Win situation for Dev, Chandni and Advay.


Omg Shweta ji,

I am honoured to have you say such amazing words, so much so that i am really lost for words now *SIGH*

Trust me when i say this but this story and this post was totally not intended. I was having a chat with one of my friend Jo on a different thread and we were laughing abt how high the door was in Advay's room and were wondering if the CV's can give us something revolving this concept and I happened to write abt it , and didnt want to post as i lacked the confidence to

But i have had so much love and appreciation, that i am over whelmed to the point that i have turned all bashful 😳

But your post is the Cherry on the cake, as you have taken time to write down every single scene and that too with such beauty and eloquence that i am taken aback by your words. Thanks for penning down your incredible comment and honouring me once again.
Dont know about me, but yours is a true TALENT for sure

thank you so much once again, and i hope you keep enjoying the future parts to this story

Thanks
Cheers, Chitra
Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG Chitra you finally updated
Thank you so much
I was waiting for this for a long time
I cannot tell how happy I am
I now have something for the week end
Congrats for the promotion
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a hot passionate intense update this is
Uff I am still fanning myself
This is just unbelievable
This update has so many good moments
Loved the MurShi fight it was so cute
How Advay noticed her from above
And sent Adi to rescue her
And save her from her panic attack
That was so thoughtful of him
And all the evening he kept standing
Without taking off his eyes
She still thinks of Dev and decides to move on
Aww he removed her jhumka in a sensual way
She really must have looked a katto gilehri
Oh how sweet they fight about the side of the bed
I found it cute and he had to give in at last
Uff we get a dori tying scene now how hot
How sweet he gave her clothes to wear
He slept with his arm around her waist aww
And he wrapped her hair on his hand
That was such a sweet gesture too
He asked her to choose his dress too
This is such a wonderful domestic update

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Posted: 8 years ago
This update had the correct amount of passion cuteness sweetness intensity and warmth
They are slowly getting used to each other and observing each others habits
How simple life would it be if there was no revenge factor between them
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Posted: 8 years ago
If possible please continue
Your random scenes are also gold
Trust me

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