ADVINI OS - CHANDINI KI DUVIDHA (Ehsaas Series) Pg 1 Up! - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy


Haan wohi to mujhe chahiye

😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Pyaar se daatna...hayeee I am eagerly waiting for today's episode...


Me too waiting Nazia for the episode
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aaj ek aur Ehsaas kahani milega na ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Aaj ek aur Ehsaas kahani milega na ?

Chandini ka ehsaas milega thodi der mei 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Chandini ka ehsaas milega thodi der mei 😉


Theek hai hum intezaar karenge 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing os, loved it. 👏
Thank for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing os, loved it. 👏
Thank for pm.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS!
Loved it!
Beautifully u've penned her dilemma!👏👍🏼
Thanks for the pm.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani



Baate karte ho paheliyo mei
Tum samajh nahi aate
Naa jaan saku mai
Tum kya ho chahte

Wow... That's so apt for this situation..
Exactly the question in her mind

Karte ho shabdo ke waar
Naa jaane kya hai takraar
Jab bhi puchu koi seedha sawaal
Machaate ho bawaal

Ha ha.. the line is funny😆

Bol hai ukhde ukhde
Lagte ho berukhe
Rehte ho khafa khafa
Dard dete ho jaise koi tohfa

Aww... That's so intense dear..
I think this is my fav out of all..

Teri aakhe hai samandar
Chhupaye hai raaz andar
Dekhke tera haal
Ho jaati hu behaal

I read the first lines can't move further...
His eyes... ( Sigh )

Tere badle ki leher
Dhaaye mujhpe keher
Tu lage dishaheen neher
Karna chahu teri peher


Very good one.. I like the depth in this..

Hai tu rakhshak
Yaa hai bhakshak
Hai tu kaali raat
Yaa hai su prabhaat

The confusion..
If what exactly he is..
Even he himself doesn't know... beautiful

Pehle todte ho
Fir khud jodte ho
Naa dete ho paas aane
Naa dete ho door jaane
Pehle todte ho
This brings the while essence of the show..
This says everything about this story..
Well done.. to capture all that in just four lines..


Teri nafrat hai beintehaa
Nahi hoti yeh bewajah
Tere waqt se churaakar ek lamha
Jaankar rahungi woh wajah

I have my moment...
The way you included this in to the verse..
Just outstanding..
This says how much thought you put into writing this lines

Tu hai ek maaya
Tere hai anek roop
Tu hai chhaya
Toh kabhi dhoop

Simply apt...

Kaisi yeh uljhan
Jiski tu hai suljhan
Meri duvidhaao ka naa koi hisaab
Kab milenge mere jawaab?

And you concluded it with the question everyone has on their minds right now..
How and when she will get the answers..

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Here is the 11th OS of Ehsaas Series.

Hope you all like it. Please hit like and comment. Happy Reading.

Loads of Love,
Nazia😊


I love your ehsaas series dear..
I think I read each and every one of them..
And all a beautiful..
Keep them coming.

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