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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lovi9
waaah...first of all "no ek rat ki dulhan"...cheeku sudhar gae and the tashan was marvelous...I liked every para advay is fire to she s no less...only chandni can do this 😊 😊 😊 I loved the scene in today's episode plate scene...aakhir toot hi gayi...let's see koi aata ya nii 😕 😕 chandni was looking like peacock clad in that attire...anyway coming to point it was again aaamazing...and my morning again started with this 😛 😛 ...seriously loved it made my morning even better

Yes...Advay ko nani sudhaaregi...khatam hua ek raat ki dulhan ka rant...If he is fire then she is ice who can tame him...Good that my stories help you get rid of your morning blues 😆

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Shivay_ki_loves
Omg it's mind blowing . U amaze me again. U just play with words like as if it's urs. I loved the bold chandini. She never giving up. I could actually feel the lines. I could actually create pictures of them. U r an amazing writer. We want more of it

Thanks a lot Shreya... 😊 U just play with words like as if it's urs. 😆 😃 Bingo 😳 I wrote this scene actually picturising Advini...

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Sangeetha di...U don't know how eagerly I wait for your comment...Honestly, I was never a poetic person but after watching this show I fell in love with Advay's shaayris...I am really happy you liked this unique exchange of words between Advini...I decided to present it as a shaayraana conversation...Our Chandini hit him where it hurts the most with her befitting replies...And at the end I strongly want Advay's ego to break and bending in front of her...and Chandini emerging as a winner... 😊

And its an instant hit, girl ! ITS A SIXER !!! 👏

Although I understand Hindi, I cant get certain Shayri words and their meaning. I do love the fact that you give a translation for the hindi version for "Poetry Dummies" like me 😉 and Non-hindi speakers.

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

And its an instant hit, girl ! ITS A SIXER !!!👏
Although I understand Hindi, I cant get certain Shayri words and their meaning. I do love the fact that you give a translation for the hindi version for "Poetry Dummies" like me 😉and Non-hindi speakers.

Thanks for the compliment di 🤗 As a writer it's my responsibility to make sure that my stories are understandable and hence translation of stories in a common language is a must 😊

Edited by Barunkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Fa13

@Fa13

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Uff Naziaaa...🤗 thanku for such a beautiful OS!

It was an amazinggg OS!

So beautifully u've hve written there Shaayraana conversation Dear...mind blowing.. 👏👏

Just loved it! ❤️

Thanks for the pm..& sorry for the late reply!😳

Edited by Fa13 - 8 years ago

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani
am happy you liked it, Saeeda di... 😊 I too want a scene like this containing these two raging bulls... can u send it to the cv's...flattered and blushing 😳 ❤️

I have no idea either😆... mayb someone can post it other social media like twitter/insta and tag the writer or PH etc?