awwww sweety that was such a cute ending
i just loved the ending it was beatifully ended!
i hope u write another fanfic!
-love
tarah
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awwww sweety that was such a cute ending
i just loved the ending it was beatifully ended!
i hope u write another fanfic!
-love
tarah
😳
Haila!
jaani i loved it!!......Thanks Yaar😃.
they became one!!.....me was so shy writing that part, I should have probably taken your help😳.
i soooo loved it aww jai is a
me loved it! awesome! ……..Thanks dear😊…….
now cant say wens the next update! ……..I guess not😆😳😉
Originally posted by: ejazanita soooooooooooooooooo waitin …….Sorry for the delay yaar. yaar aab to post kardo.................. chal iss baat pe tujhe ek gana suna deti hu …..Wow I love songs …… "intehaa ho gayi..........intezaar ki.............. aayi nah kuch khabar...............teri update ki................ hai tujhe ye khabar.................bewafaah hum nahi............... phir vajah kya hui..............teri late update ki.................... " now see i hav dedicatated this song to you so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update yaar cant wait…….. OMG I was really rolling😆😆😆…..Nice substitution you made……..😆😆😳 hey Mel, tx 4 longgggggggg n wonderful update …….Oh no problem😃…..finally you said I gave you guys a Loooong update😳.. that was such a lovely update …….Thanks dear😃…… humm so finally Jai ko akal to aayi …….I guess that's right😆😳…….. i knew it Bani wud ask that "special gift" frm Jai as it seems she was findin hard to control it yaar aakhir Jai he,to koi bhi control nahi kar sakta ……I don't have anything to say😳😉…… btw did u just END this FF? …..Yup I did…..No belans and all😭…..It has been up for over a year and half, I think😆……. im upset with you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,it was such a nice FF tn why did you end this???????????????/……Arre yaar, It has to end one day na😳……. plzzzzzzzzzzzz if u havnt end this tn come up with the next part soon..........I am sorry😭…….It has ended😭 n if hav ended this FF tn come up with new FF................................I don't know yaar, I don't think I will get time to write another one😭…… if you dnt hav any idea tn tell me i hav some idea i can give you n you can start on that as im currently busy with my 2 FFs so cant even start the new1 bt if you want i can give you idea n u can wrk on it just let me knw …..That is very sweet of you😃. I have ideas and all the only problem is time.. bye n tc…..U2😃…….. Hi Melonie
I have been a silent reader throughout this ff not only I love this ff but my mom also loves it. Oh wow, nice to know that😃.
The both of us like the storyline as it portrated a different type of Bani. All we have to say is u are one of the best…..Oh dear I am very humbled by your comment😳. Glad to know you guys liked it😃.
awwwwwwww it was so cute
loved reading all the parts of this ff ……Thanks for the comment yaar😳, Glad you liked it😃….
waiting for epilogue…..I will try😃…..
Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2
Hi Mel, ….Hi Nimmie 😊
I enjoyed your writing very much and the ending was thoughful & sweet…….Thanks for the comment yaar😳. Glad you liked it😃.
Nimmie, Malaysia
awesome ending
loved it……..Thanks yaar😃……
mel-bel...yeh kya...ending...the end...finish...finito... ..aww. ..i will miss this ff...i was finally getting caught up and keeping up and now you go and end it... …..Well it's been over an year now and I felt it was better I ended it😕😆….well what can i say...u r the writer ……. Now I don't know what you say😳
then ending was beautiful...the mandir scene with JB was so touching...jai finally surrendering to his feelings for his wife...then the brithday surprise.Glad to know you liked the scenes😳..and the sari she wore...i loved it...now i want one...i have a weakness for sari's... ….Not only you even me love saris😉😳, except that I wear it only in my house. I don't step out with a sari😆…..and the last bit...haila... ...june 19th baby...woo hoo...that was just beautiful... ….Thanks yaar, me was maha shy writing it😳😳😳…..
loved this ff from beginning to end yaar.Thanks yaar, glad you liked it😃..hope you do write another one soon….I don't know, lets see😊.
JAZ .....Mel-bel.
Originally posted by: davia389
D…..Still waiting yaar😳…..
Originally posted by: culgal86
hey mel.....................
lovely ending.......................Thanks dear😃……
Originally posted by: ofcourse
Hey Mel, that was an awesome ending..A perfect ending to a perfect story.. Oh thanks yaar😳…..
I am very sad that it has ended, but anyway good things does come to an end eventually……Exactly😉😊….
JBs feelings were very clearly portrayed..
Can we have an epilogue?....I will try😃…..Also, it will be nice to see you start one more FF..Your writing is amazing..I don't know, lets see…..Will surely miss "Ocean of Love"…..Me too😭…..
Rama
Originally posted by: momtajbegum1
Hey
awww it was a really lovely ending …..Thanks dear😃…..
i hope u will do an epilogue …..I will try😊…..
going to miss reading this ff ….Aww….it had to end one day😳…….
Taj
Great ending!!! ….Thanks dear😃…..
JB were ...
Hey see ya soon ……I don't know about that😳.
Originally posted by: Pooja_fren
Hey Mel
Thanks for it
It was beautiful
Loved it. ….Thanks for the comment yaar, glad you liked it😃😳…..
Bt i am very sad u didnt mention my name in the earlier list.
Not Fair ……Oh I am so sorry yaar, I usually do check, but may be it slipped out...Once again sorry😳🤗…..
Will be missing it. Aww…..it had to end na😳…..
Great ending. ……Thanks dear😃…….
Jai singing for bani on guitar. today I was listenning to that song & for the first time I thought what if JAi sings this for Banni. I wknow it own't happen in kasam Se but how about in one of the ffs. …..Oh wow, really happy to know that😃……
You fullfilled my wish. Thank you…..Oh dear, glad you liked it😳…
Beautiful ending. ….Thanks yaar 😳…..
Originally posted by: ridhijai
loved it. Mel
finally Jai and Bani's search for love ended with finding each others love...their ocean of love ...awesome …Thanks for the comment yaar, glad you liked it😳😃……
Originally posted by: nir_jaanu
i loved it. Thank you😃……
but can i ask u for a favor.
can u please..
write an epi..
please please pretty please….I will surely try😳…….
Originally posted by: khushboo2006
A wonderful ending to a beautiful FF……Thanks dear😃…… Hope you will come up with another one soon……I don't know, lets see😳…… Thanks .....Welcome😊
Originally posted by: phool527
hey mel.. great part yaar.Thanks dear😃…. i hope we r getting an epilogue…..I will surely try😳….. u noe i ahem ahem want to see how many jr.JW and BW we get to see really…Oh I see, urmmm😆😉….. lol.. u made me cry yaar.. t was soo sweet…..Oh thanks dear, glad you liked it😳….thank god jai realised his feelings.. awwwnnn.. it was adorable.. i am gonna miss this FF though.. but u noe an epilogue wont hurt.. heheheh…….I will surely try😳…..
Originally posted by: *saakshi_fan*
awwww sweety that was such a cute ending….Thanks dear😃…..
i just loved the ending it was beatifully ended!....Thank you, glad you liked it😳…..
i hope u write another fanfic!....I don't know, lets see😃…..
-love
Tarah……Take care……Mel😳….
Once again all I have to say is a big Thank-You 😃 .I really enjoyes reading all the comments 😃 😃 😃 . Really appreciate you guys taking the time to comment 😃 😳 .
I know some of you asked for an epilouge, I will surely try and write one😳😊.
🤗
Take Care
Mel.
Hey Mel ......Hey Piku
I wanted to stay hats of to you for writing and wonderful ff called ocean of love, where you have this two people from different backgrounds, with hate, relationship who get married, and they slowly become friends and friendship turns into love. ....Thankyou for the comment yaar. Glad you liked it😃. Really humbled by your words😳😳😊.
I am sorry for not commenting when you were writing/continuing your ff,.....Oh no worries at all😃.... but i was reading slowly, as this ff was recommended to me by jiggu and guli.....My big thanks to Jiggu and Guli🤗
I liked how you added pictures, into your reading ...Aww thanks dear, me also love picts😆😳.
at last jai and bani became one and i am waiting for an epilogue from you....I am writing one, will post shortly😃
Thank you all for the comments, really appreciate them 😃 . I guess IF is really slow today .
Epilogue
Days, weeks, months and years passed by and many things changed in Walia Mansion. Bringing home the sweet memories of Manali Bani and Jai were soon blessed with a beautiful baby girl. Maasi had died shortly after their return, so Nachiket also came and stayed in WM lending his hand in their business.He soon got married to a girl named Purva. And after all these years Walia Mansion was again lit up for a wedding ceremony.
***
Jai and Bani Walia stood hand in hand receiving and greeting guests and family members. Walia Mansion was shining like a second moon. The whole environment was beautifully decorated with elaborate carpets, rose and jasmine flowers, small festive lights and gold and red color everywhere. It was the wedding of Rano Walia daughter of Late Uday Walia and Krishna Walia. This was also going to be the biggest celebration they had after the death of their parents. Even though Rano had insisted on having something small Jai and Bani went out of their way and made it an occasion to remember for a lifetime.
The exotic smell of the incense and beautiful melody of Indian music flooded the room creating a refreshing and pure atmosphere. The wedding mandap was decorated with ethnic mirror work and satin cloth.
As the pundit started chanting the hymes Bani moved away from Jai to see how Rano was getting ready.
***
As Bani walked in the bedroom she saw Rano sitting in front of the mirror looking very beautiful in her wedding ghagra. It was a sandal color ghagra highlighted with pink cutwork border, embellished with sequins, stones and zardosi work in floral design. The dupatta was in green with stones and zari work on it.
Rano's Outfit:
"Kissi ki nazaar na laghe tume" Bani said putting a small dot of kajal behind her ears. She looked at Rano who was looking a little lost and sad. Knowing her thoughts she asked "You are missing mummy and daddyji right" Rano looked up and nodded. "Come with me" Bani said carefully making her stand up so that her dress doesn't get out of place. She walked Rano to the garlanded portrait of a smiling Krishna and Uday.
"See they are right here smiling at their little gudia" Rano looked at the photo and tears started swelling up her eyes….
"Na….don't cry Rano, how will they feel seeing their daughter cry on her wedding night….hmmmm…" Bani asked wiping her tears.
"I am sure they are watching us from above there and sending you their blessing" Rano hugged Bani and gently cried. Bani lovingly rubbed her back, she very well knew how it felt to not have your parents when something so important is happening in your life. After all she had also gone through the same experience.
"Now no more crying…" Bani said breaking apart.
"Mama….this came off" a little girls voice came. Bani looked behind Rano and saw her little girl Krishna fidgeting with the small dories of her blouse.
"Come her I will tie it for you" Bani said smiling at her. The little girl came running in to her mothers arm. Turing her around she tied them up for her and pulled up her lehenga which was falling down. Getting her dress fixed she kissed Bani then slightly tucked at Rano's dupatta as Rano bend down she kissed her also and immediately ran out.
***
Jai went around the hall personally thanking everyone for coming and also making sure they were comfortable. He looked at the mandap and saw Pushkar sitting there with his face covered with the sehra. He smiled remembering the moment when Pushkar announced to the family that he and Rano loved each other. Even though the family got small clues that something was cooking between Rano and Pushkar they remained quite till he told them. He still remembered how shaky Pushkar became when he had jokingly refused to give consent to their wedding. But in the end he was glad that Rano had chosen a life partner like Pushkar. He was a loving and efficient man who worked hard to accomplish his goals in life. Maybe that's why he now had his own company which was running very successfully.
Bani along with Jignyasa slowly walked Rano towards the mandap. Bani smiled at Jai as they walked past him. Making her properly sit next to Pushkar Bani went and joined Jai.
Immediately their little girl ran towards them and raised her hands indicating to be picked up. Pulling her chubby cheeks Jai picked her up in his arms.
The couple exchanged garlands and Rano shyly smiled at Pushkar as they sat back down for the other rituals to be completed.
Pushkar's Outfit:
After few minutes it was time for the kanyadam. As per Jai's request Aditya and Jignyasa stepped forward for the ceremony. Bani saw Jai's eyes getting moist as they gave away Rano's hand into Pushkar's. She squeezed his hand and Jai felt immensely better and happy for having her by his side. After tying Rano's dupatta and Pushkar's stole together they started taking the Saat Pheras.
Getting seated back down Pushkar put the Mangalsutra around Rano's neck followed by filling her maang with Sindoor. Everyone threw flowers at them as the ceremony ended. Krishna also did the same, as the flowers in her hand finished she picked some from the floor and started throwing at them again.
***
The bidai became quite a tearful event. Jai stood in the corner watching Rano and Pushkar taking everyone's blessing. He had to admit that it was really hard seeing Rano go from their home. He had never even imagined that his parents wouldn't be there for Rano's wedding. Everything had happened so fast that he was in total denial that their parents had passed away. He still remembered being in the accident spot where his father's car was crushed like a can. The blood stains, his father's broken watch, their almost burnt bodies he shuddered as the thoughts came back as fresh wounds.
"Jai….Jai" Bani called out shaking her husband's arm slightly.
"Haan…"
"Woh…..Rano is asking for you, she wants to meet you"
"I don't know Bani if I will be able to let her go"
"She had to get married one day or the other……. and she not going very far away from us, when ever we want we can met her" Jai nodded his head and went along with Bani.
***
Seeing Jai Rano ran towards him and hugged him tight…. "bhaiyya" she cried on his chest….Jai soothingly rubbed her back. Breaking apart he led her to the car where Pushkar was standing.
"Take care of her" Jai said in an almost cracked voice. "Always" Pushkar said smiling, and then helped Rano get into the car. Bani also went along with them so that Rano's proper welcoming could be done.
***
After all the guests left Jai carried a sleeping Krishna to her room. Gently laying her on the bed he changed her into her night suit. He was surprised that she didn't make a fuss today for not reading her favorite bedtime story. He gently caressed her hairs……Except for his nose all other features on her face was Bani's. She also had the same softness in her eyes as her mother. Pulling her pink blanket up he sat next to her and watched her sleep peacefully. She was definitely one of the most precious things he had in his life. Her sweet talks and mischievous acts always made his day joyful. Kissing her on the forehead he switched off the light and left.
***
Walia Mansion had become dead silent when Bani returned from Pushkar's house. Peeking into her daughter's room she saw her sleeping peacefully. Smiling she closed the door and went to her bedroom.
Her foot was aching from all the standing she did from morning. While removing her jewelry one by one she felt a pair of arm snake her waist. Looking into the mirror she saw Jai smiling at her. Contently she leaned back more into his body.
"Tired" he asked rubbing her arms.
"Little bit" she said.
"Jaiiiiiiii" she screamed as her lifted her and walked towards their bed. "Ssshhhh" you want to wake up everyone" he grinned. Gently putting her down the bed he lifted her legs and placed them on his lap.
"Wh….what are you doing….no….you shouldn't touch my feet" she protested.
"You and your thinking" he teased. Not listening to her he gently pressed her feet. Even though she didn't like the idea of her husband touching her feet she did really feel better. She loving caressed his cheeks….. "Feeling better now" he asked. Nodding her head she moved her legs away from his lap.
Changing into her night dress she snuggled closer to Jai.
"The house has become so empty now that Rano has also gone" Jai said wrapping his arms around her.
"hmmm"
"I hope mummy and papa are happy"
"Of course they are and also very proud of their son" she replied facing him.
"Thank you for coming into my life Bani" he said gently pecking her lips…… "OUCH" she suddenly cried holding her stomach.
"Bani……you ok" Jai asked immediately sitting up.
"Yes I am….it's the baby" she replied giggling. Taking his hand he led them to where the baby had kicked. Feeling his father's presence the baby kicked again making Jai's lips erupt into a smile. "I love U beta" he said kissing her growing tummy.
Pulling the comforter up he kissed Bani on the forehead and lied down holding her close to his heart forever.
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Ok friends there you got an epilogue also 😆 😳 . Thank you for all the comments and support 🤗 . And please do comment good or bad 😃 .