FF:Ocean Of Love. Epilogue, pg 125

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hai guysšŸ˜›,

Was having an idea in my mind for quite some time so just thought why not write an FF. I am telling you in the begining only that I am not a very good writer and if you guys don't find it interesting I can stop it and not bore you guys anymore. I hope I will live up to your expectations and entertain you.

I am inspired by all the wonderful writers in the forum, truly each one of you are very talented and come up with very unique ideas to entertain us.

Soory if there are mistakes and do let me know how you guys feel about this FF. Good or bad criticism are always welcomed.

Ok.. now I will introduce the characters and will add more if need.

Hope you guys will

šŸ˜›ENJOYšŸ˜›

OCEAN OF LOVE

Jai Walia: He is 25 years old, young, tall, handsome, arrogant,full of life. He finished his MBA with much struggle, was never interested in studies and business, if the pressure from his parents weren't there he would have never finished his studies. Is a very intelligent person but never put his talent in anything.Life to Jai Walia meant maasti and girls. He never really worked hard in his life always got what he wanted and being the rich and favourite in the family got away with every thing preety quickly. Has a very bad temper and can hurt any one in a moment of outburst. Loves his family and can do anything to please them. Ocassionally went to the office just to please his dad, just thought that siting in the office the whole day and working was the most boring thing that one can do in life. Never believed in love , marriage or God thought that that was all silly and was happy the way he was. Can see him with in all the hot and happening clubs showing off his new girlfriend, changes girls like he chsnges clothes.

Uday Walia: Jai Walia's dad. The president of Walia Group of Industeries. Had nothing when he got out of the unversity with his MBA degree but with his hardwork,determination and the love of his life, his wife he build the whole Walia empire. Is a kind, loving and honest man, but is always worried about his son's future.

Krishna Walia: Jai Walia's mom. A housewife, a loving and caring wife and mother. Her whole world revolved around her husband and kids. Is also worried about her son and his future. Thinks that he may become more serious once he gets married.

Rano Walia: Jai Walia's sister. The apple of every one's eye, especially Jai. She is 19 years old and is in her first year of college and wants to become an architectural engineer. Always first in class and loves her family a lot.

Bani Dixit: A sweet inocent and ambigious girl. Very devotional and caring. From a middle class family. She has a limp when she walks, was a perfect child when she was small but got it because her polio was not treated in time.She is 23 years old. Finished her B.Sc dregree and has been looking for a good job with preety good pay for the past two years. She is currently working in a textile showroom and her work is to feed all the sales and stock information in the computer. Loves her family a lot and works really hard to maintain her family.

Pushkar Dixit: Bani's brother. Very much attached to his sister and can do anything for her. He is 21 years old and he is in his final year of architectural engineering. works very hard in college because he knows that he can't afford to be careless.

Nishikanth Dixit: Bani's father. He is alcoholic ever since his wife died whom he loved dearly. Never took the responsibility of the house and Bani had to struggle a lot because of that.

Jigyasa Bali: Krishna Walia's second sister. Married and has two kids. Knows very well how to irritate people. Likes to show off and doesn't like if anybody has something better than her. Lives next to sister(KW) so is mostly at their house.

Aditya Bali: Married to Jigyasa. Uday Walia's close friend. he is the vice president of WGC. A fun-living guy.

Sahil Bali: Jigyasa and Aditya's son. He is 19 years old. A fun guy and loves sports.

Anu Bali: Sahil's sister. She is 18 years old. A lovely little girl.

Shobana kapoor (Maasi): Krishna Walia's elder sister. Lives in her sister's house. Love her sister's kids like her own.

Tell me if you like it or not, your comments will have a great affect on my writing. Will start chapter one if I get good response or I can stop if you guys find it boring.

Note: I don't know anything about business and medical stuff so please bear with me.

Melonie😃

Chp1,pg1

Chp2,pg3

Chp3,pg5

Chp4,pg7

Chp5,pg8

Chp6,pg9

Chp7,pg10

Chp8,pg13

Chp9,pg14

Chp10,pg16

Chp11A&B,pg 19

Chp11C,pg 21

Chp11D,pg23

Chp12,pg25

Chp13,pg26

Chp14,pg28

Chp15,pg30

Chp16,pg32

Chp17,pg33

Chp18,pg36

Chp19,pg37

Chp 30,pg65

Chp 31, pg67

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Chp 47, pg 105

Chp 48, pg 107

Chp 49, pg 110

Chp 50, pg 113

Chp 51, pg115

Chp 51A, pg118

Chp 52B, pg122

Epilogue, pg125

Thankyou for reading😃

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saaania thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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its great....plz continue soon...will wait 4 ur update..looks really interesting!!!

thxx
Sania
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: saaania

its great....plz continue soon...will wait 4 ur update..looks really interesting!!!

thxx
Sania

Thanks dear😃. will surely update😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls continue...bani limps?due to polio???????
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: davia389

pls continue...bani limps?due to polio???????
davia

Ya Bani limps, she didn't get proper treatment when she was small so that why, I hope that made sense 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great introduction cant wait to read more! Love the name of the ff too! Please continue soon!
Kripa.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab intros to the characters
really looking foward to the update!
im sure u'll do great! i mean reading the intro i can tell!
lolz!
can't wait fer the first update!!!

continue soon

maddi 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: loranlee4u

fab intros to the characters
really looking foward to the update!
im sure u'll do great! i mean reading the intro i can tell!
lolz!
can't wait fer the first update!!!

continue soon

maddi 😳

Thanks dear😳. Will post it soon😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys thank you for the comments. Really appreciate them. Hope you will enjoy reading.

Chapter 1 šŸ˜›

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As the bells started to ring from the pooja room and filling the whole house with light we can hear the loud blast of music coming from upstairs. Krishna Walia who just finished her morning prayers looking quite beautiful in her light green sari, her mangalsutra and two diamond bangles in her hand took the tray which had (a cup of coffee, news paper and two juices) from the servant's hand and made her way to her husband. Her husband Uday who just got of the shower took the coffee and news paper and smiled at his lovely wife. She then made her way to her daughter's room who was pacing in her room with her text book wearing a cute jean's pant and a light pink top, and who might have not slept the whole night because she is having an examination in physics today and was panicking even though she was very well prepared with her material…Mom who had turned the music on and that too so loudly in the morning, I am sure it is bhaiya he must be excising with that music on, can you please tell him to turn the dam thing off and not make me forget all that I revised. Krishna just smiled at her daughter gave her the juice and made her way to her son's room.
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Jai..Jai...Jaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…....can you turn that thing off, Rano is eating my head. Mom what I can't hear you.
Now we see a well built man sweating and breathing quite heavily wearing a pair of sport's shorts and a white Tee looking quite impressed with his muscles and lifting the bars.
Krishna (sarcastic tone and bringing his juice towards him): Make it little more louder then you will hear it. Makes her way to the music system and turns it off.
Jai (grumpy): Mom why did you turn it off, you know I like to exercise hearing to music.
Krishna: But do you have to put it on so loud.
Jai (wiping the sweat off and placing the bar down and drinking the juice): It is at least better than your bell and mom when you listen to music it should be in full blast. He dashes to the bathroom before his mother comes after him for making fun of her bell.
Krishna (smiles): Clears the mess on his bed (clothes every where and the towel) and makes her way to the kitchen to know how the breakfast preparations are going on.

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Here in the Dixit residence we can see Bani wearing a light pink salwar with thin silver boarders and small flower print, hurriedly limping out of the house so that she doesn't miss her bus. When she reaches the bus stop the bus already starts to leave she makes her way as quickly as she can towards the bus so that she doesn't miss it.

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Hope you guys liked it.. 😳 will make it interesting. Please do leave your comments good or bad 😃 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
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saving spot šŸ˜†

okay back!šŸ˜†

OMG its a fab. beginin... lolz... Jai... hes soo ... CUTEEEEEE... well in manly words... hes HOT! šŸ˜†

very cute beginin... cant wait to read about the dixits... lolz!

continue soon hun!

okay g2g bye!😳

maddi

Edited by loranlee4u - 18 years ago

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