Imagine this...#second thoughts ( advay on overhearing phone convo)

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
Amazing loved it so much.

Hi sona..

Thanks a lot dear😊

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Today we will know if CVs heard us

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hailly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Amazing post, loved it.
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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Today we will know if CVs heard us

I hope CVS choose Advay to be on the other end. They need it. The moments like we had on Friday which are barely there aren't enough for normal audience to emphasize with dev.if they can't see Dev in him they are missing a crucial piece of the story.

We need flashbacks, monologue based on his confusion. As much as barun sobti emotes pain through expressions we still need actual dialogue to understand better.

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing post, loved it.
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Hello haily...

Thankyou dear...

No need to thank for pm.😊

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errrm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Lovely piece, and very true to the essence of Advay's character! I guess years of resentment and pain cannot be undone in one go, and it will take several moments of self-doubt and second thoughts to gradually chip away at the walls that he has erected around his heart, in order for Dev to eventually emerge. Very well written 👏

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: errrm
Lovely piece, and very true to the essence of Advay's character! I guess years of resentment and pain cannot be undone in one go, and it will take several moments of self-doubt and second thoughts to gradually chip away at the walls that he has erected around his heart, in order for Dev to eventually emerge. Very well written 👏

Thank you Anu. Glad to know you liked it.

It set out to write a scene but ended but with inner conflict.

I just thought I would give a picture of advay's thinking before creating a scene. But once I put myself in his position. I can't just move further.

The emotions I felt are so confusing. It's like Iam my trying to justify both advay and Dev . I just wrote down my emotions raw and unedited. May be that's why it sat well with the character😳

Lovely to see you comment on my thread dear😊

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Once Indrani comes to Mumbai
Again Chandni will start her bhakti in full force
She may even want to go visit her daily

Well i that no we have time before this happens..

Indrani will come back in picture... Before than CVS will take us Dreamland high above..

And then indrani will come and push us right down back to reality

I expect we get some adnilicious episodes now...😃

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mayukatta

I hope CVS choose Advay to be on the other end. They need it. The moments like we had on Friday which are barely there aren't enough for normal audience to emphasize with dev.if they can't see Dev in him they are missing a crucial piece of the story.

We need flashbacks, monologue based on his confusion. As much as barun sobti emotes pain through expressions we still need actual dialogue to understand better.

From the update he came in at the end
But Dev was there in the episode later

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Well i that no we have time before this happens..
Indrani will come back in picture... Before than CVS will take us Dreamland high above..
And then indrani will come and push us right down back to reality
I expect we get some adnilicious episodes now...😃

Yes CVs may give us some dreamy scenes
And then BAM Indrani will come and crash us