Humari mulakaat-part 9 updated pg 13 (18/12/17)

My hands are shaking Shreya...

This is fantabulous . Loved to bits .

This was freaking awsome...So many emotions in one part...

Wow...

Awesome update please update soon 😊

Shreya.. I m dying to read next chapter...

Originally posted by: vu1998

My hands are shaking Shreya...

What was this?? Freaking awesome... I'll rate it 6 stars out of five...

<font color="#0000cc">First of all congratulations buddy for your new FF...🥳All the best wishes dear...</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Let me start.. Yipee we have Nishu here.. Love you for that.</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Gaurav Deewan.. He seems to be a helping hand for Avni...</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Avni's condition.. My God.. Very well written there..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">The flashback was heart wrenching... I couldn't believe it was Neil Khanna.. But still..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Avni poor soul.. 5 years.. That's not easy.. And your words made the reader understand that... Actually it's not easy at all..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">I could imagine everything except Neil's behavior in Flashback.. It's because I have a different image imprinted on my mind... But I m sure.. He'll mend his mistakes...</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Overall an awesome chapter..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Beautiful start...</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Super exciting..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">But I m super duper excited for next chapter.. Write that soon.. Then I'll write a poetic comment for you..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">And Yeah! Their last encounter it stopped my breathing yaar...</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Loved it.. Wanna see Nishu Bonding with his real dad..</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Write that soonish</font>

Oh my god, vihu thank you so much...

Thank you, thank you, thank you

Vidz asked for a Nishu here and I loved him so much that I couldn't deny the lovely request. I'm so glad that you liked my writing about Avni's situation because 5 years is a long time as you said and i didnt think my writing could convey that much pain, so thank you... it was tough to write Neil Khanna saying those things he couldn't take back though he quickly realised what he'd done, i just hope i was able to convey his anger and her helplessness in the situation. I'm so glad you liked it amd your waiting for the next update, I'll do that today, please check it out. A poetic comment! I'm looking forward to it but for me this is just as poetic and lovely and sweet because its made me so happy and encouraged to write the next part. I will definitely show their bonding soon... and vihu, not all is as it seems
Okay at that note, thank you so much... all of this means so much more than o am capable to write in an comment, thank you

Lots of love

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

This is fantabulous . Loved to bits .

So Neil doubted her having an affair and both separated. The whole scene was such painful . You have beautifully penned it .

She has a son too . And now it's gonna be hardest for Neil to live in the house .

Nishan is her's and Neil's child ?

Nice storyline .

Thank you so much, I remember you saying you wanted a seperation track so this is for you my friend. Thank you so much, it was difficult to write Neil saying those things realistically but i was just trying to convey both their pain, and the extent of his anger and I'm so so so so glad you think I've done that because i didnt think i could. Yes its neil and avni's son, yeah i will try to show his pain at him in the house if i can. Im so glad you liked the storyline, thank you so much. And please if your interested, check out my new ff which is the fresh retelling of their love story- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4890797 and please show your love and support if you like it.