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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: uma111

Oh ..My

Awesome 👏
You should be in writer's team.


Thanks alot uma😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere

If only she knew Advay was her Dev..*sighs*

CV's will torture us for many more days..I think I would have enjoyed DevNi more than AdvNi.

Beautiful piece of writing..👏


Thank you dear😊

Iam wondering which one we get to see first...
Advay realising chandini loves Dev

Or

Chandni falling for advay and later realises he is non other than her Dev
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Channa_mereyaa

Beautiful write up.though i doubt she will say dev but there can be a possibility .

Keep on writing dear


Thank you😊
Even Iam not sure she is going to take Dev ..
When I saw the segment there is totally shock expression on barun face so I thought may be...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: SEPIDEHh

Thanks you are explaining everything beautifully .



Advay is such a intriguing character.. its interesting to try and put his emotions in words..
Iam glad that u liked it..😊
Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: _Chaverah_

And you are getting better and better with every single post, Mayu.

No, not the imagination part. That has always been there. The way you are articulating your thoughts has really improved and I am really happy to be a witness of this.

Aww... Thank you candy. I lost touch with my writing,bits almost been 5 years since I wrote.. it feels good to be writing again. The encouragement I got here helped me to be better so I should thank you all.🤗

Coming to the post, I dont know how the CVs are gonna shape this entire revelation of Dev-Advay-Dev to Chandni and the knowledge of the same by the former, but the one you've written is a beautiful one.

Though I kinda am sure that neither Advay will know of Chandni's longing for Dev, not will Chandni know that the man she is longing for and angry at, is one and the same.

Thank you again.. yup we have a long wait before all this.. but I have no complaints.

But that being said, it is true that when one is pushed to their most vulnerable of times, he/she succumbs to embrace the one most deepest and important person of their life. It is also true that, when at such vulnerable highest, the person next to you will have subconsciously made his/her place in the deepest crevices of your mind.heart, no matter whether one accepts it or not. The same applies to the one standing and supporting the one who is breaking down. There is something really raw, pure and powerful about such moments ki, both of them connect in ways and depths that cant ever be put into the proper words.

Your understanding of relations and characters is beyond me😳

So, yes, I do believe that, this incident will waver Advay's conceptions of her, if not crumble and clear it all up.
It might be a small step towards one another, but it sure will be a crucial one.

And I for one, loved Advay's conflict you have shown. It stayed pretty close and real to what Advay innately is. (except for the punches, but duh, I loved everything, including the punches!)


Well you must have seen the segment... Everything I wrote is clearly shown in barun expressions... So i think that's how I got them right
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: shibaniana

THIS!!!!

This needs to happen.
A big hug to you for writing this mayu.
In her time of need, Chandni calls on to Dev. And Dev has never left her..


Thank you dear😊

🤗

The equation of advay _ chandini _ Dev is one of a kind..
Of course the Dev in advay can never let anything happen to his chandini😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: shesherkobita

You shoudl be on CV panel ...your writing is that good .


Thank you for your encouragement😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shesherkobita

You shoudl be on CV panel ...your writing is that good .


I agree with this
We would have got a great story then
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mayukatta


I saw the segment..
And seeing all the emotions in barun face inspired me to write this..
Not sure if she is going to take dev's name
I hope we get to see that tomorrow..

Happy to know that loved it .
Thank you priya😊


She may not take his name
But you wrote it so well
You should have been in the CV team
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: uma111

Oh ..My

Awesome 👏
You should be in writer's team.


I agree
She wrote it so well

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