Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18

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Fantasy meaning of my real name

@Fantasy-ka-Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

HI dearies, This is ur Fantasy ka love or kalpana..come back with next stories...i hope everyone like this story same way u all love with Marriage at first sight😳😳😳

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A girl sitting in sofa with sad face..she thinking seriously..her face expression shown how much she feel bad for something.

20's age lady : what happened my princess ,why u sad

girl: bhabhi..i did mistake

bhabhi: what u did it, tell me clearly

girl: oh i slapped one man but he not his mistake..with guilty voice

bhabhi: why u slapped him

girl: today i went to temple..outside of temple i am buying pooja item suddenly some one pinch my waist..i turned and slapped him

bhabhi: he pinched u ,so u slapped ..why u r guilty ..with angry face.

girl: but he not pinched me..

bhabhi: what he is not then who misbehaved with u..

girl: i dont know ...

bhabhi: dont confuse me

girl: i slapped him...after he run out the place..

some children come infront of me shout how dare u slap my friend..he didnt pinch u..that bad uncle only pinched ur waist not my friend..

bhabhi: stop ...friend, uncle...mean u slapped that man whose is younger than u..

girl: no bhabhi...he is not look like younger than me..but he look like prince charm,handsome body,sparkling eyes...with dreamy face..but he so innocent..he called me didi..with irritating face

bhabhi: kya...with shocked expression..he called u di..with burst her laughed

girl: bhahi, dont laugh ,i already feel sad he call me didi..

after i slapped ,he carrying his own cheek...said dadi,di slapped me...with moist eyes.. and run out..

bhabhi:ur dulhan raja calling u di...

girl: bhabhi..he is not my dulhan raja with angry face..( in heart happy hearing my dulhan raja)

bhabhi: i understood u not sad for slapped him but u sad because he called u ,di...right once again laughed loudly...

girl went out inside murmuring: bhabhi teasing me so much...tomorrow first i asking sry and mainly tell him...iam not his sister...with irritating face..

CHARACTER SKETCH & PART 1 soon😉😉😉

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 7 years ago

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Fantasy meaning of my real name

@Fantasy-ka-Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

INDEX

part 1 & 2 -page 7

part 2 & 4 -page 14

PART 5- pg 22

PART 6

PART 7-PG 40

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 7 years ago

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Fantasy meaning of my real name

@Fantasy-ka-Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

Character sketch

Jalal uddin Mohammed: he is 24 yrs old..he so innocent,nave like child.but not special child ( disabled person)..he is world around only his dadimaa.he is growing man but dont know about creul world.in his small age his parents died in accident. After his parents died ,every property take care by dadi'sister son he scared his badi papa and badi maa.he love her sister( badipapa 's daughter) and his friend bubblu,chutki etc..(only children..)

( dont laugh guys..really Jalal innocent character😆😆😆 )

Hamida Banu Mohammed: she is old lady..after her son and daughter in law died she handover every property to her sister 's son..now that decision only worried about Jalal future..he want Jalal marry with good and brave girl..

Gabir: badipapa of Jalal.he want rule Mohammed empire with full power unfortunately everything under Jalal name.

Noor : badimaa of Jalal .same character like his husband.she have one son and daughter.

Adham: he is bad guy..,flirty and worst person even he did not care about his own sister..

Samira: she is lovely girl.she love Jalal more than herself.she only save Jalal from her parents beating.she want Jalal marry with brave girl..

Jodha family

Jodha bharmal: she is 21 yrs old..abroad return.she is brave,good heart person.she love her family.now waiting for her dulhan raja

mohinder and rano bharmal: mohinder is business man.he handled some Mohammed business also.he is kindness person and rano is sweet mother.

sujamal and simar bharmal:sujamal is protective brother and helping his father business and simar is lovely daughter in law and friendly bhabhi of Jodha.

Harman: best friend of Jodha..

upcoming parts u all know about every character fully..i will add some more also...

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
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congo for another story on Akdha Forum 😃

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Pooja

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Posted: 8 years ago

Conjooo jiii For Maasoom Pati Akdha version 😛
Akdha fans will definitely love it ... like me as MAaneet version 😛 😉

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Fantasy meaning of my real name

@Fantasy-ka-Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel.Pooja
Conjooo jiii For Maasoom Pati Akdha version 😛
Akdha fans will definitely love it ... like me as MAaneet version 😛 😉

Thank u ji 😳😳😳

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
congo for another story on Akdha Forum 😃

🤣 what a Prologue 🤣 Jo's Prince calling her Didi 🤣 and her Bhabhi teasing her 🤣 But Y I feel this concept to be like Prince 😲

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome start

Continue soon 😊

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Fantasy meaning of my real name

@Fantasy-ka-Love

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
🤣 what a Prologue 🤣 Jo's Prince calling her Didi 🤣 and her Bhabhi teasing her 🤣 But Y I feel this concept to be like Prince 😲

No vrindu, this is not prince story 😳

dont worry 😛