A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#471

welcome back! thanks 4 da pm! fab emotional update! superbly written! Geet consoles Maansi! Maansi see Maan! Geet reveals 2 Maansi that Maan is her dad! Maansi upset n asks Maan where he was wen she needed him! Maansi faints! Rahul worried! Maan assures him! he wants 2 speak 2 Rahul! Geet recalls the past! Maan wanted 2 name his daughter Maansi! update soon! Hope ur daughter is feeling better!

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#472

nice update
geet revealed maansi dat maan is her papa
seeing maan n maansi together as father n daughter geet was guilty for d situation ...where maansi was comolaining her papa n maan was angry on geet n all r worried for maansi's condition

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27nita

@27nita

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#473

Maansi is a victim of acid attack...

People who are responsible for this kind of crime should not be given corporal punishment but kept alive and treat each part of their body with their own medicine ...

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27nita

@27nita

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Maansi is a kid at heart

I even love chocolate...

Cool relation with her brother

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#475

thanx fr pm

maansi complains hr mom about wat kidnapper said and she get hyper about she doesn't have father geet told hr maan sir is hr papa she was shocked next moments she was happy but she again remember wat ppl said to hr she get emotional start complaining like kid but get hyper y now he came wen she ...

rahul want to ask hr wat happened but maan stopped him and took him with him and told geet to b with hr till he b back than she can go to OH

geet remember their past how happy they were she feeling guilty fr taking wrong decision but maan also should have tab on hr bz she's his wife

na milta pr aghr pata rakha hota tou apne bachoun ka pata hota or mana leta woh tou sharmindagi ki waja se na a saki

maan ko tou pata tha woh wrong decision hai phir thori or koshish karta kabbie tou maan jati ab zara blame geet pr k woh chali gai

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Great part 9 update. Maan and everyone is so hurt by Geets actions and don't blame maan or anyone in household to treat her like nobody. Please give me password for part 10 it was good update

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#477

No comment = no access to next part

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Chandrika varshney

@chandrikaVARSH

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#478

sorry 4 lat comment i read jr nine part superb update maan bring back maanvi dadi is very angry on geet she did not want to enter her but maan said she can live here as mother of his children and he did not want sepreate them pls send pw of part ten

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#479

lovely update
mansi got to know her father
maan won't forgive geet easily
past lovely

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caller123

@caller123

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#480

Hey this is a very beautiful story. Loved it. Loved the way Mansi facing the society though she's a acid victim. This story really touched me. I was searching for a different story to read your topic for the story grabbed me and chapters I read so far (up to chapter 8) glued me to the story too.

Thank you for contributing this lovely story.