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Anya Riasha Singh

@RKDEWAANA

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Posted: 8 years ago

I wana see dolly masi husband chintu ji🤣 guys can u imagine if SK grew up with them he would be chewing paan and call Mehek, Mehek madam or memsaab🤣 having one cloth around his neck and a red dot, rather than with ISK they would have met at the daaba she worked at...

And would have told her Sasura pyaar hogaya type dialogues🤣 And would have followed her around on his bicycle

Edited by RKDEWAANA - 8 years ago

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Parud7

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Posted: 8 years ago

I have already said please write an os on this funny storym u have magic in ur hands. I truelly admit its so hilarious 🤣

I m already imaging

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Anya Riasha Singh

@RKDEWAANA

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Parud7
I have already said please write an os on this funny storym u have magic in ur hands. I truelly admit its so hilarious 🤣
I m already imaging

Lol Harry Di

He would have been spoilt with Dolly masi as he was with Karuna ma because his lala for her. So lala🤣would be a gunda without a suit, He would be just as stubborn and only was able to finish 8th grade because they did not have money. He would go order tea and drink it with his gunda friends, and would wana marry MS but she would be like🤣i wana learn how to be a famous chef i dont wana get married now and he will be like you can be the famous chef in my house😉all in broken english🤣

He will be like you will be very famoos as Saurya Khanna's vife🤣 Tip Taap

And then when Mehek married him Dolly would make her do weird prayers and all because she would have been manglik(of course) and then keep trying to break them up. And make them sign die-vorse papers but Saurya was too clever for her and kept catching her out.

Edited by RKDEWAANA - 8 years ago

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Parud7

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RKDEWAANA

Lol Harry Di
He would have been spoilt with Dolly masi as he was with Karuna ma because his lala for her. So lala🤣would be a gunda without a suit he would go order tea and drink it with his gunda friends, and would wana marry MS but she would be like🤣i wana learn how to be a famous chef i dont wana get married now and he will be like you can be the famous chef in my house😉all in broken english🤣
He will be like you will be very famoos as Saurya Khanna's vife🤣 Tip Taap

Please don't call me harry di call me harry only I'm like u a student

Lol lol haha tip taap

Yr please write an os on this. I'm laughing so hard now if u write a proper one I ll definitely get mad 🤣

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Anya Riasha Singh

@RKDEWAANA

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Parud7

Please don't call me harry di call me harry only I'm like u a student
Lol lol haha tip taap
Yr please write an os on this. I'm laughing so hard now if u write a proper one I ll definitely get mad 🤣

Ok just Harry i am Anya nice to meet you

I dont know if i can🤣coz i keep laughing myself thinking of KV playing Saurya🤣

In love with his Mehek Madam

BTW

I added a little more back story to my second comment😆

Edited by RKDEWAANA - 8 years ago

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

too funny 🤣 if you do decide to write a story on this it will be funny and awesome ⭐️ different concept 😆

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Anya Riasha Singh

@RKDEWAANA

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

I wrote this just for Harry.

Hehe.

So, it's more of a scene rather than an actual story.

So here goes.

Sorry for my pathetic hindi in advance I understand hindi but I am not good with writing it down.

Saurya and Mehek Madam.

Meeting.

Shaurya leaned back on the hard-wooden bench he sat on.

"Khana laona Awara He said taking of his specs and placing them in the V of his long orange Kurtha.

Awara walked back, without any food, Shaurya's eyes narrowed was he trying his patients. His mood always soured when he did not get to eat on time.

"Bhaiya, they said there is some new cook there. She is taking longer to make the food, so it will be ready in an hour or so Awara, always paid for his food, while the others all looked after his other little needs. He ran the city, well if you were on his good side he treated you well, if you were on his bad side, he treated you badly. That was his principals Shivji ki kasam.

"Chai lekar ao aur ek packet biskoots He said, Awara nodded and quickly went away.

He saw a fair skinned, girl, with large round eyes that reminded him of buttons Dolly Masi sewed on Chintu Mosa's coats and long balack hair, come out of the kitchen and with a huge spoon.

{}{}{}

Mehek felt incredibly warm, she looked up at the sky, why was it the first day on her job, so hot?

She turned around and saw a guy that looked like a usual trouble maker seated there.

He was staring at her.

"Stop staring at me She said, after looking around, there was no one else outside. He smirked.

"Pyaar se dekrahti madam He said to her, Mehek rolled her eyes. If it was legal she would have hit him with her spoon. That would have sent all his confidence down the drain. She hated these cheap types.

His lackey brought him some tea and sipped it loudly, Mehek's nose wrinkled ew. He took one of his biscuits and dunked the entire thing inside.

"Chaiyeh? He asked her, Mehek shook her head and looked away.

When he was done. He stood up, she noticed from the side of her eye. He said something to his lackey and walked slowly towards her. Mehek squared her shoulders, if he said anything weird all she would do was slap him.

"Ek question pooch sakta hoon? Mehek nodded, he had short black hair that curled out of place and looked as if it had never seen the light of a brush ever, he had a thick beard, yet extremely dark, small, pretty eyes.

"Kya?

"Shadi karogi mujse? He asked her as if he was doing her the biggest favour on earth, as if he was giving her the greatest honour known to mankind, smugly, he had paan in his mouth. That's why his lips were so red.

"Uhm no thank you She said, plainly without thinking, his eyes widened almost as if he thought she would have said yes.

"Kyu? He asked.

"I want to be a famous chef someday Mehek lied, well it was true but, she just did not want to marry him.

"Shef voh kya hai?

"It's English for a cook

"Cook, I know

"Ok

"Shadi karo mujse, aur banegi cook mera ghar ka He said to her simply. Mehek exhaled and then went back into the kitchen and pretended to be busy. He followed her and stood behind the counter, she could feel him watching her.

"I want to be a famous chef She emphasized the word famous, his lackey whispered something into his ear.

"You will be very famoos as Saurya Khanna's vife...Tip Taap He said in complete broken English.

"I don't think so

"Abhi kya bola He asked his lackey again, who whispered to him.

"Yeh kaisi bolungi nahi, Uski paas itna himath nahi hai. Madam ji ek baath suno, Kiski ke paas himath nahi mujse na bolne ki. Aur meri adat nahi hai nah sune ka. Saurya naam hain mera. Tu mera saath shadi karogi, aur meri ghar ki shef banogi He said. And spat his paan and started to walk away. Mehek shook her head what a sanki.

{}{}{}

"Bhaiya, Bhabi seems a little too western for you Awara told him, What western? She only spoke a little English. Dolly Masi held out a stainless-steel cup of water to him.

"Mera raja beta mera lala She said and patted his cheek. Dolly masi loved him more than anyone on earth. Well soon his daaba vali Madam ji would love him too. He would just have to palan everything properly. {misspelled as Saurya speaks in weird English, Hin-glish}

"You will have to do something very big to win her over... Awara whispered to him, when dolly masi went into the kitchen.

"Oye Lala when will you bring me a bride, who can look after this whole house, then I can just rest Dolly masi said loudly.

"Teri bahu jaldi si aapko milaongi He said, Dolly Masi poked her head out of the kitchen her eyes lit up.

"Lala, sach? He nodded and she started banging dishes in the kitchen, Nani woke up from her bed and came into the room.

"Have you gone mad Dolly what you are making so much noise for?

"Arey amma, Lala said he found me a daughter in law Nani's face lit up as well.

"Kaisi dikti?

"Pari jaisi...

They both sighed excitedly, while only Awara looked worriedly at Shaurya.

"Bhaiya agar na pati toh?

"Ee bath hoi nahi sakta, Saurya naam hai mera. Pyaar toh voh sirf merko hi karunga He said and picked the cup up and held it away from his mouth and poured the water straight down his throat.

THE END.

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice ⭐️ I can just imagine KV in this version of SK 😆 and Masi her behavior upon learning that she may get a bahu/slave 😆

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Parud7

@Parud7

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RKDEWAANA
I wrote this just for Harry.

Hehe.

So, it's more of a scene rather than an actual story.

So here goes.

Sorry for my pathetic hindi in advance I understand hindi but I am not good with writing it down.

Saurya and Mehek Madam.

Meeting.

Shaurya leaned back on the hard-wooden bench he sat on.

"Khana laona Awara He said taking of his specs and placing them in the V of his long orange Kurtha.

Awara walked back, without any food, Shaurya's eyes narrowed was he trying his patients. His mood always soured when he did not get to eat on time.

"Bhaiya, they said there is some new cook there. She is taking longer to make the food, so it will be ready in an hour or so Awara, always paid for his food, while the others all looked after his other little needs. He ran the city, well if you were on his good side he treated you well, if you were on his bad side, he treated you badly. That was his principals Shivji ki kasam.

"Chai lekar ao aur ek packet biskoots He said, Awara nodded and quickly went away.

He saw a fair skinned, girl, with large round eyes that reminded him of buttons Dolly Masi sewed on Chintu Mosa's coats and long balack hair, come out of the kitchen and with a huge spoon.

{}{}{}

Mehek felt incredibly warm, she looked up at the sky, why was it the first day on her job, so hot?

She turned around and saw a guy that looked like a usual trouble maker seated there.

He was staring at her.

"Stop staring at me She said, after looking around, there was no one else outside. He smirked.

"Pyaar se dekrahti madam He said to her, Mehek rolled her eyes. If it was legal she would have hit him with her spoon. That would have sent all his confidence down the drain. She hated these cheap types.

His lackey brought him some tea and sipped it loudly, Mehek's nose wrinkled ew. He took one of his biscuits and dunked the entire thing inside.

"Chaiyeh? He asked her, Mehek shook her head and looked away.

When he was done. He stood up, she noticed from the side of her eye. He said something to his lackey and walked slowly towards her. Mehek squared her shoulders, if he said anything weird all she would do was slap him.

"Ek question pooch sakta hoon? Mehek nodded, he had short black hair that curled out of place and looked as if it had never seen the light of a brush ever, he had a thick beard, yet extremely dark, small, pretty eyes.

"Kya?

"Shadi karogi mujse? He asked her as if he was doing her the biggest favour on earth, as if he was giving her the greatest honour known to mankind, smugly, he had paan in his mouth. That's why his lips were so red.

"Uhm no thank you She said, plainly without thinking, his eyes widened almost as if he thought she would have said yes.

"Kyu? He asked.

"I want to be a famous chef someday Mehek lied, well it was true but, she just did not want to marry him.

"Shef voh kya hai?

"It's English for a cook

"Cook, I know

"Ok

"Shadi karo mujse, aur banegi cook mera ghar ka He said to her simply. Mehek exhaled and then went back into the kitchen and pretended to be busy. He followed her and stood behind the counter, she could feel him watching her.

"I want to be a famous chef She emphasized the word famous, his lackey whispered something into his ear.

"You will be very famoos as Saurya Khanna's vife...Tip Taap He said in complete broken English.

"I don't think so

"Abhi kya bola He asked his lackey again, who whispered to him.

"Yeh kaisi bolungi nahi, Uski paas itna himath nahi hai. Madam ji ek baath suno, Kiski ke paas himath nahi mujse na bolne ki. Aur meri adat nahi hai nah sune ka. Saurya naam hain mera. Tu mera saath shadi karogi, aur meri ghar ki shef banogi He said. And spat his paan and started to walk away. Mehek shook her head what a sanki.

{}{}{}

"Bhaiya, Bhabi seems a little too western for you Awara told him, What western? She only spoke a little English. Dolly Masi held out a stainless-steel cup of water to him.

"Mera raja beta mera lala She said and patted his cheek. Dolly masi loved him more than anyone on earth. Well soon his daaba vali Madam ji would love him too. He would just have to palan everything properly. {misspelled as Saurya speaks in weird English, Hin-glish}

"You will have to do something very big to win her over... Awara whispered to him, when dolly masi went into the kitchen.

"Oye Lala when will you bring me a bride, who can look after this whole house, then I can just rest Dolly masi said loudly.

"Teri bahu jaldi si aapko milaongi He said, Dolly Masi poked her head out of the kitchen her eyes lit up.

"Lala, sach? He nodded and she started banging dishes in the kitchen, Nani woke up from her bed and came into the room.

"Have you gone mad Dolly what you are making so much noise for?

"Arey amma, Lala said he found me a daughter in law Nani's face lit up as well.

"Kaisi dikti?

"Pari jaisi...

They both sighed excitedly, while only Awara looked worriedly at Shaurya.

"Bhaiya agar na pati toh?

"Ee bath hoi nahi sakta, Saurya naam hai mera. Pyaar toh voh sirf merko hi karunga He said and picked the cup up and held it away from his mouth and poured the water straight down his throat.

THE END.

Omg haha this lalla is too hilarious...I'm laughing so hard bechari mehak...aise namune se shadi krti...zindagi ki aisi tesi ho jaati 🤣

He thinks like king of a state 🤣 and eating paan I'm just imagining how he looks ohhh so weird...I like his arrogant look our sk that's great

Thank u anya darling u wrote it for me...its my pleasure 😊

I wish u luck for ur project...god bless u n keep writing good stuffs

I'm waiting ur naina thag lenge update...after parallel I read that it's very interesting 😊

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: RKDEWAANA

I wrote this just for Harry. 

Hehe.

So, it's more of a scene rather than
an actual story.

So here goes.

Sorry for my pathetic hindi in
advance I understand hindi but I am not good with writing it down.



Saurya and Mehek Madam.

Meeting.

Shaurya leaned back on the hard-wooden
bench he sat on.

"Khana laona Awara He said taking of
his specs and placing them in the V of his long orange Kurtha. 

Awara walked back, without any food,
Shaurya's eyes narrowed was he trying his patients. His mood always soured when
he did not get to eat on time. 

"Bhaiya, they said there is some new
cook there. She is taking longer to make the food, so it will be ready in an
hour or so Awara, always paid for his food, while the others all looked after
his other little needs. He ran the city, well if you were on his good side he
treated you well, if you were on his bad side, he treated you badly. That was
his principals Shivji ki kasam. 

"Chai lekar ao aur ek packet biskoots
He said, Awara nodded and quickly went away.

He saw a fair skinned, girl, with
large round eyes that reminded him of buttons Dolly Masi sewed on Chintu Mosa's
coats and long balack hair, come out of the kitchen and with a huge spoon. 

{}{}{}

Mehek felt incredibly warm, she
looked up at the sky, why was it the first day on her job, so hot?

She turned around and saw a guy that
looked like a usual trouble maker seated there. 

He was staring at her.

"Stop staring at me She said, after
looking around, there was no one else outside. He smirked.

"Pyaar se dekrahti madam He said to
her, Mehek rolled her eyes. If it was legal she would have hit him with her
spoon. That would have sent all his confidence down the drain. She hated these
cheap types.

His lackey brought him some tea and
sipped it loudly, Mehek's nose wrinkled ew. He took one of his biscuits and
dunked the entire thing inside. 

"Chaiyeh? He asked her, Mehek shook
her head and looked away. 

When he was done. He stood up, she
noticed from the side of her eye. He said something to his lackey and walked
slowly towards her. Mehek squared her shoulders, if he said anything weird all
she would do was slap him.

"Ek question pooch sakta hoon? Mehek
nodded, he had short black hair that curled out of place and looked as if it
had never seen the light of a brush ever, he had a thick beard, yet extremely
dark, small, pretty eyes.

"Kya?

"Shadi karogi mujse? He asked her as
if he was doing her the biggest favour on earth, as if he was giving her the
greatest honour known to mankind, smugly, he had paan in his mouth. That's why
his lips were so red. 

"Uhm no thank you She said, plainly
without thinking, his eyes widened almost as if he thought she would have said
yes.

"Kyu? He asked.

"I want to be a famous chef someday
Mehek lied, well it was true but, she just did not want to marry him.

"Shef voh kya hai?

"It's English for a cook

"Cook, I know

"Ok

"Shadi karo mujse, aur banegi cook
mera ghar ka He said to her simply. Mehek exhaled and then went back into the
kitchen and pretended to be busy. He followed her and stood behind the counter,
she could feel him watching her.

"I want to be a famous chef She
emphasized the word famous, his lackey whispered something into his ear.

"You will be very famoos as Saurya
Khanna's vife...Tip Taap He said in complete broken English.

"I don't think so

"Abhi kya bola He asked his lackey
again, who whispered to him. 

"Yeh kaisi bolungi nahi, Uski paas
itna himath nahi hai. Madam ji ek baath suno, Kiski ke paas himath nahi mujse
na bolne ki. Aur meri adat nahi hai nah sune ka. Saurya naam hain mera. Tu mera
saath shadi karogi, aur meri ghar ki shef banogi He said. And spat his paan
and started to walk away. Mehek shook her head what a sanki.



{}{}{}

"Bhaiya, Bhabi seems a little too
western for you Awara told him, What western? She only spoke a little English.
Dolly Masi held out a stainless-steel cup of water to him.

"Mera raja beta mera lala She said
and patted his cheek. Dolly masi loved him more than anyone on earth. Well soon
his daaba vali Madam ji would love him too. He would just have to palan
everything properly. {misspelled as Saurya speaks in weird English, Hin-glish}

"You will have to do something very
big to win her over... Awara whispered to him, when dolly masi went into the
kitchen.

"Oye Lala when will you bring me a bride,
who can look after this whole house, then I can just rest Dolly masi said
loudly.

"Teri bahu jaldi si aapko milaongi
He said, Dolly Masi poked her head out of the kitchen her eyes lit up.

"Lala, sach? He nodded and she
started banging dishes in the kitchen, Nani woke up from her bed and came into
the room.

"Have you gone mad Dolly what you are
making so much noise for?

"Arey amma, Lala said he found me a
daughter in law Nani's face lit up as well.

"Kaisi dikti?

"Pari jaisi...

They both sighed excitedly, while
only Awara looked worriedly at Shaurya.

"Bhaiya agar na pati toh?

"Ee bath hoi nahi sakta, Saurya naam
hai mera. Pyaar toh voh sirf merko hi karunga He said and picked the cup up and held it away from his mouth and
poured the water straight down his throat.

THE END.

I am scared,what if this turns to be the future story of ZKM??? After new promo...anything can happen here...!omg!what if this is their slightly different love story!! 🤣

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