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Mysterious Eyes




"I am sorry."


Her apologetic eyes lifted to meet his surprised ones, when she repeated her words for the third time.


"For what, you are apologizing? You have had committed so many sins that it's a little confusing for me. Mind enlightening me?"


There he replied, with his usual smirk that later filled up his eyes with an insane rage, she couldn't understand. Since the time she had met him, he had been mentioning the same thing in different ways. What have I caused him?


A wound that can never heal.


Knowing her questions wouldn't get their answers... not at least from him, she preferred ignoring them. "Is it paining too much?"


"It has and it does hurt a lot... a lot more you can imagine Ms. Chandani Narayan Vashishtha." His gaze never leaving her sight, and her, never catching his.


Bandage fell down from her hands when he suddenly grabbed her arm. "Why did you do that? To me?"


She winced in pain, trying to free her hand from his grip. Sliding his finger underneath her chin, his voice that had held anger earlier softened when he again asked, "Kyu kiya?"


She looked in his eyes those were mysterious like always, hiding an universe of secrets in them, dying to scream that they had a story to tell... his story.


She felt an insane urge rising within her to do anything it would take to calm his burning soul that was reflecting its image in his eyes.


"Jaan bujhke nahi kiya. If only had I known that it would hurt you, I would have never stepped on that way." Surprised with her own words, she ran from there when his hold loosened on her arm.


Advay clenched his fist, staring at her retreating back. I know real you Chandani. I won't fall in trap of your innocent face again. Apne kiye ki keemat to tumhe chukani hi padegi. He muttered as anger overpowered him again, banging his hand on the wall to let out his frustration.


Chandani shut the door of her room, resting her back against it. What has happened to me back there? What did I say and why did I say? Why does he always make me feel like I have snatched him from something that I shouldn't have? Why do I feel, that the story his eyes are hiding include me as well? Have I really done I anything that shouldn't have? I just hope, that I am not the reason behind that pain I saw in his eyes today. She placed her palm on her heart that was beating frantically against her chest.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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yayyy Im first and its amazing and pls continue soon. I would love to read further. thank u for this.
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U have very well depected the agony and the hurt asr is going thru👏. Loved reading it. Pls continue.
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Loved your OS based on the precap. While chandni is referring to the physical hurt she has just inflicted, Advay is talking about the hurt when she betrayed him 16 years ago.
Keep writing more. 😊
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wow! Liked it. Chandni will soon try to figure it out.
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This is beautiful!
You write so beautifully, I could picturize such a scene already.

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Amazing. You are beautiful at emotion potrayal.
Kudos to you
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Originally posted by: melihoney

yayyy Im first and its amazing and pls continue soon. I would love to read further. thank u for this.




Hey Honey ❤️ Thank you so much, for being first one to drop in and for this lovely comment. I am glad you liked this shot and oh more than that, I am thrilled that you are willing to read more to this but this is one shot dear and hence there won't be any continuation to this. I am so sorry. Thank you.


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Originally posted by: CrazyabtTV

U have very well depected the agony and the hurt asr is going thru👏. Loved reading it. Pls continue.




Hey dear, thank you so much ❤️ If you feel so, then that is such a beautiful complement for me. Like I have mentioned in my reply to one comment earlier, as this is a one shot, there won't be any continuation but knowing that you wanted to read more, gives me a lovely feeling.

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Originally posted by: barsha_dash

Loved your OS based on the precap. While chandni is referring to the physical hurt she has just inflicted, Advay is talking about the hurt when she betrayed him 16 years ago.
Keep writing more. 😊




Thank you so much ❤️ I am glad you had a nice time reading this. That's right. Chandani is yet confused here. I hopefully will. Thank you.

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