||Ruhaani Ishq Mein Jo Fanaa Ho Chuka|| MehRyaSS Compltd Pg57 5/Sep/17

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Dear Friends,
Posting my new FF on MehRya. This FF is with super natural background, an area I never touched. Frankly speaking I have no idea where this story will lead to. It all started with funny discussions me, Thabs, Shams and Harry had in my earlier FF thread for "Ajab Si Kahani Hamari". So this FF is dedicated to them πŸ˜† - Thabs 😊, Shams 😊and Harry 😊.
@ Shams : Thanks for suggesting the title.

Do post your comments / feedback.
Best Regards,
Kashish


PROLOGUE

"Kiss !!!! Kiss !!!! Kiss!!!!", the group cheered much to Mehek's chagrin. "Hey Devi Mayya, Kahan bhas gayi mein. Coz of Sonal's stupid plans I am suffering now", Mehek was annoyed. She had recently joined the new college and Sonal was her only friend there. When Sonal invited her for a camp trip to nearby woods , never in her wild dreams she imagined that it will be infected with guys. Mehek's shy , introvert nature kept her from mingling with crowd however Sonal encouraged and supported her always. The one night camp would have been fun if she was not stalked by Ajay Parmar. At first it was sweet but soon he became a nuisance. Now while playing spin the bottle, she has to kiss that pervert.


Rohit, Sonal's fiance was ready with his mobile to capture everything, while others too were eager to have fun at her expense. Only Sonal gazed at her helplessly, feeling sympathetic to her plight. As Ajay came near, on a whim Sonal shouted, "Mehek run!". Mehek briskly pushed him and ran into the woods. "Dude don't leave her. Get her", Rohit yelled. Ajay regained his footing and darted behind her.

Mehek ran faster with all her might when she heard Rohit's words. She didn't realise that she lost her woolen shawl behind. She stumbled on a small rock, fell and rolled down. Her while tank top was smeared with dirt now and her body pained at many places. When she lifted her head, she found a lone house surrounded by picket fence. It didn't look inhabited and she took the risk of jumping over its fence. She dashed to the door which was ajar. She went inside and closed it behind. She sat down near the closest window pulling her knees closer to her chest, looking out for Ajay and his friends.

Ajay, Rohit, Sonal and some friends were searching for Mehek. "Kahin uss bhoot bangalow ke pass toh nahi gayi?", someone suggested. "Then no need to search for her anymore. Tomorrow her body will be found ", Rohit told cruelly. "Rohit, how could you?", Sonal almost wept. "It's your fault. You made her run. Now bear consequences". They searched for her but had to retrieve to camp as it was getting darker.

Mehek might have dozed off. She felt cold breeze freezing her skin and opened her eyes. She saw a dark figure and screamed. "Relax. I am not gonna hurt you", a male voice assured her. "You are trespassing . Are you lost?", he asked earnestly. For a second she felt his eyes were gleaming but as she shone torch of her mobile on him, he looked normal. Well, normal may be an incorrect word to describe him, he was extremely handsome. Her phone abruptly stopped working, pushing her back to darkness. But he lit a candle and saved her from further scare. "I... We were in a camp nearby. I got lost. I saw this house and came in. Sorry to barge in like this", she tried to explain. "That's a beautiful ring. Who is the lucky guy?", he asked her. She looked at her left hand confusingly , "Oh, it is nothing. I got it today morning while exploring the woods. It was so pretty that I couldn't leave it". "And without thinking you wore it on your ring finger. It could belong to a jilted lover or betrayed husband. You may be bound to him unknowingly", he stated. "What ??? Are you serious?", she exclaimed. "Nope, I was joking", he smiled. His smiled enriched beauty of his face a thousand times. How she wished, it was him whom she was supposed to kiss. "I am Mehek Sharma. Do you live here?", she asked. "No, I just came here, out of blue to save you", he humoured. She smiled timidly. Something was definitly odd about him yet she wasn't afraid. "Let me take you back to the camp", he offered to help.

As they came out of the house, she was shivering. He took off his woolen coat and placed it over her. "Thanks", she said. "I am sorry to have caused you so much trouble. Some people in camp were playing silly jokes on me and I ran to escape. I am new to this place so got lost", she explained. "I guessed it. People who know these woods will never wander around at this hour. I must say you are pretty brave", he told her. "Are there lots of wild animals here?", she asked. "Hardly any", he answered. "Then criminals or anti-socials?" she asked. He shook his head and smirked. "Evil spirits. These woods are infamous for them", he explained. "Are you serious?", she was startled. He didn't answer but just pointed her camp and said, "There. Few more meters and you will reach your friends". "Oh, thanks", she was about to leave but he stopped her, "Mehek, my coat". "Oh , sure. thanks again,... I didn't get your name", she asked. "I am Shaurya. Shaurya Khanna", he replied. She felt diffident to move ahead but he kept his hand on her shoulder, "Don't worry, I will stay here until you are safely inside your friend's tent". May be reflex, she quickly hugged him. She observed his body to be extremely cold. She felt guilty to have made him walk through cold woods without protection of any warm clothes. As she withdrew, tears made way through her cheeks. "There, there. You are a brave girl. If you need me anytime, I will be there for you", he consoled her by wiping her tears. She looked at him puzzled. "Just hold the ring and wish to see me. I will be with you", he said. "Really?", she asked. He laughed, "No , silly. I was just joking. How could you even imagine it to be true? Give me your number, we will stay in touch". "My phone is not working else I would have given call to your number", she was sad. "Just tell me your number. I am good at remembering numbers". She told him her number and slowly walked away. Whenever she turned , she found him at the same spot. Finally she crawled into Sonal's tent and then looked out. He was gone. She looked at her phone and it was working now.

Somewhere in deep darkness, he held his coat close to his face. He savoured her scent, it felt like bliss, his own brand of drug. "At last, I found her. My wait has come to an end"

Ishq Kehta Hai Mujhe Ek Baar Kar Ke Dekh;

Tumhein Maut Se Na Milwa Diya To Mera Naam Badal Dena!

[ Courtsey : a touching shayari found via Google Search ]

Chapter 1 Page 10

Chapter 2 Page 16

Chapter 3 Page 21

Chapter 4 Page 26

Chapter 5 Page 29

Chapter 6 Page 32

Chapter 7 Page 37

Chapter 8 Page 50

Chapter 9 Page 57 (Completed)


Edited by KashishJ - 8 years ago


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Heli84 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES
Yepiii !! Me first πŸ˜›

UNRES

Prologue Seems Very Interesting..
Loved It ❀️

Hayee!! Shaurya bhoot Hei yahan..bada Pyara Bhoot hei πŸ˜†

Mujhe Yeh padte padte The Beauty & The Beast , Twilight , and PKYEK ki Mixed felling aarahi thi..

Ajay..😑 Sambhal ja Beta..warna Bhoot aajayega πŸ˜†

The Title is Beautiful 😳

Eagerly Waiting For the First Chapter πŸ˜›


P.S. Congratulations & Best Of Luck with this new FF πŸ‘πŸΌ ⭐️


Edited by Heli84 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res

Lol sahi waqt par net ne dhoka de diya 😑 2nd ho gayi

Unres
Congrats for ur new ff

Looks interesting di
Love the prologue
Yeh shaurya kahi bhoot toh nhi 🀣
Uff yeh ajay...i hate this bandar πŸ˜†
Bechari mehak kahi bhoot se toh pala nhi pada 🀣


Kahani kaise unfold hoti hai dekhne ke liye ...I'm eagerly waiting for the update di πŸ˜›
Edited by Mehryan - 9 years ago
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No mein first hunn..zara upar toh dekh πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehryan

res

Lol sahi waqt par net ne dhoka de diya 😑 2nd ho gayi


Huuhaaa πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Impressive Kashish... I m glad tht u decided to write a new story on MehRya. To b honest, I m nt very fond of supernatural romance but with u as a writer n Mehrya as the romantic couple, I ll surely read it... I know it's going to be worth reading!!!
Ll wait for ur Pms... Love ya!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story line😊
Waiting for 1 chapter
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Opps late to Res
CONGRATS Kashish and best of luck for the new FFπŸ₯³

Wowww Wowww iam so happy that you finally decided to start writing the new FF ...waisy iam not found of horror or supernatural stories unlike my hubby and kids ...but here I trust you and I know you are gonna make it interesting😳


Looks like this bhooth have good sense of humourπŸ˜† waiting for the love story to unfold as she already weared the ring in her hand πŸ˜ƒ inviting the unwanted guest in her life

But I guess this bhooth is less harmful than those monkey who was trying to kiss her ..Ajay parmar 😑😑

Waiting for the next part Kash... update soon😳

Apni Rooh Tere Jism Mein Chodh Aaye Hai ..!!
Gaaly Milna Toh Bas Ek Bahana Tha ..!!😈

Edited by Shamrouz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start kashish πŸ‘
Prologue is so interesting ..i can see Story going to be superb ..loved it..

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello ...Kashish...I have to say this story has really trapped me in its charm!
Now I am just waiting to read more..
And I don't know why ...the last part made me think of Twilight and Edward..!😳
I still remember the days when boys in our school will come and say to girls about how their ' smell is like a drug..like their own personal brand of Heroin'. It was the most used lines by boys when the film was released and it still have the charm..I just read about the coldness felt a mystery and a mention about smell and drugs and i started ranting..lol i am still ranting πŸ˜†
What I meant to say was..Interesting concept..I love..mystery..supernatural..and I am addicted to this story by reading the prologue!
Waiting for the Story to unfold..
Jiya πŸ˜›

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