SS||Bad Ass Nutcrackers||Chapter 5 Pg 5||8th Sept

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BAD ASS NUTCRACKERS!

Hello...

I've returned with a small short story, well I am hoping to keep it short.

Hope you'd like it.

I am still yet to catch up with EDKV so no spoilers please 😆

For those who are new to me,

I'd written my first EDKV one shot just over a month ago : OS||CONFESS||

Do give it a shot!

Anyway moving on...


Prologue

"Shravan

I looked up hearing my name and stood seeing Nanaji by the door looking concerned.

"Nanaji... What are you doing all the way out here? I approached him.

"Suman... Suman has been kidnapped he answered.

"What? I clipped in surprise.


Index


Chapter 1 : Scroll down

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1

"Hey! I screamed feeling large hands curling around my waist. "Get off me! I screamed forcefully kicking and struggling.

I am getting kidnapped I registered. What the actual f**k? I am getting kidnapped. I'm boring, I don't get kidnapped!

"I know Karate I yelled. "Oww I screeched when I was launched into a large van and the guys who'd grabbed me pushed me inside further and slammed the door closed.

I straightened and scowled at my captors, "How dare you?

"I really wish we'd gotten paid to deliver a dead item one of the men grumbled narrowing his eyes at me.

"Did you just say you wished I was killed? I screamed.

"Stop yelling the other guy snapped.

"How do you expect me not to throw a hissy fit? You kidnapped me! Do you know who I am? Do you know that I am...

"A drama queen, we figured the guy from the front answered.

"Stop the car and let me go! I won't call the police I gathered myself.

They shared a look between one another then turned to me and laughed.

How could they laugh in such a situation? I am sure they broke every law in the country by now and were going to sent down for a very very long time.

"I don't see why you're finding this funny I crossed my arms. "You'll be losing out on a lot of freedom when you're locked up. You won't be able to have sex anymore, you know that? Sex is like the most important thing after breathing and eating!

"You seem to know a lot one of the guy perused me in amusement.

"Why have you kidnapped me? I asked the question of the hour.

"Once you see our boss, I'm sure you'd understand why you've been kidnapped.

I huffed and glanced out, the windows were blackened which didn't allow me to look outside. I hoped I'd have some view so that I'd know where they're taking me and once I find an opening, I was going to call the police and give them a description of the place.

Why would someone want to kidnap me?

I was sure I haven't yet killed Jason my ultra hot boss who was a dumb douche.

Pearl was fed, she wouldn't want me kidnapped and killed. Probably on the nights I kick her out of my bedroom when I have to take care of myself but other than I let her curl up besides me and sleep.

Ariana was so over the fact that I had made out with Charlie, I was piss drunk that one night and best friend rule was to excuse your best friend for any mistakes when they're drunk.

I can't for the life of me think of why someone would want to kidnap me.


"Hey y... the car jerked to a stop, I screamed and cowered by the seats when I heard gun shots. The doors flung open and my kidnappers climbed down with their guns drawn.

Oh f**k, I'm going to die! I didn't want to die with bullets in me I looked around in a panic for something to hold in front of me and stop bullets from piercing my body.

I worked hard for my body, I couldn't have it ruined with stupid f**king bullets.

I couldn't believe this!

I heard the door slide open on the other side and was hauled out and thrown over someone's shoulder, I'm guessing another kidnapper.

What a shitty luck!

"Let me go! Help! I screamed, I looked over at my previous captors who were curled up on the ground. "Hey you! Kidnap me again I yelled and struggling to free myself once again. I might have been kidnapped, at least the first guys didn't do anything. They weren't perving or planning to rape me, I didn't know about this new kidnapper.

"Hey you! They're taking me away! Call your boss!

I was suddenly jerked over and stood upright in a jolt in front of...

Holy Moly!

"Shravan...

"I didn't waste my bullets on those guys just for you get kidnapped again he leaned down narrowing his eyes.

Why the hell was he mad at me for? I didn't ask to be kidnapped!

"Excuse me

"Shut the f**k up Sumo he cut me off and pulled open the passenger door of his Black Range Rover. I didn't get a chance to climb in, he lifted me up by my waist and planted me in the seat and slammed the door closed.

Shravan turned and spoke to some of his guys, he was a private investigator who covered a whole lot of different areas, he hunted down men who'd skipped bail. He found evidence against cheating spouses and made sure he helped the victim f**k over their partner.

He chased frauds who f**ked over the poor, old and helpless and made them pay in a lot of different ways. I heard one of his punishments was called the cruncher, I didn't ask what it was and didn't want to know. I heard it from his sister, who'd heard it from one of the boys who she crushed on massively.

Ariana, my best friend happened to be the sister of the guy I crushed on.

Shravan Malhotra!

The guy was a hot bad ass who happened to be insanely intense, he also happened to be a complete dick head, to me only of course.

So, I wasn't completely happy that he was my second kidnapper or was he the rescuer?

For some reason, some of my punctuation marks disappeared as I copy and pasted from word... 😵

Hopefully you've enjoyed it... Would love to know your thoughts xx



Edited by --B00KW0RM-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A brand new badass story! Welcome Bookworm. I'm already gripped to this one. Great start. Sumo kidnapped by Shravan. Sounds like fun. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My my... I lika like it!
Guns and rangerovers instead of karchi and absaddor...I smell fresh air !!
More badass cuteness in line I'm sure😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Badassness at its best 😎😆
Great start !!!
Update soonish, I'm already loving this ShraMan 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sumo kidnapped and from her kidnappers Shravan kidnapped her or rescued her 🤣 she herself in delimma as we are😆
But liked the SS

Pls continue dear

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha...Sumo and her banter,,choosing between two evils 😆
Mono thought was hilarious 😛
Fun Sumo.,
And,
And,
Shravan is intense,,what else can i ask for! !😳

Most Delightful kidnapping ever! !

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow! Something different.. .
Sumo was kidnapped, Shravan save her..
Really looking forward to this story..


Love
Smita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for the comments! They're very much appreciated and are great motivators. Due to lack of time with working long hours and personal life, I am very sorry for not being able to respond separately... I will try posting an update tomorrow hopefully. I am enjoying writing this couple...
After MG I didn't think I'd enjoy writing for another couple... But ShraMan are definitely inspiration! ❤️ 😳

Chapter 2

"Suman Nanaji looked at me relieved and emotionally as I walked through the door with Shravan closely behind.

"Nanaji... I dramatically rushed over hugging him pretending I really missed him in the last half an hour. I wasn't exactly gone for a long time but oh well if he wanted to shower me with love, who was I to deny my grandfather for loving me too much?

"Shravan, how much do I owe? Nanaji released me and looked over at Shravan. I turned and stared at Shravan who seemed to be looking in our direction but I couldn't tell with those stupid large sunglasses in front of his face.

"Its okay Nanaji, Suman has already paid me for my services Shravan answered.

I paid him? I surely didn't pay him because I ignored him in the car.

"Suman, how many times did I tell you? Let me pay for you, I don't know how long I'd be paying for you Nanaji murmured.

I chuckled uncomfortably and shrugged whilst cursing Shravan.

"Anyway, why don't you rest up now? I'm home, safe and sound I suggested.

"I want to speak to Shravan first, I want to know who took you and why Nanaji answered thoughtfully.

"Nanaji... you've been worrying all this time and you're probably affected by all that stress. Why don't you rest for a while? Shravan is here in town so I'm sure he won't mind coming later on and speaking to you. Or you can even Whatsapp or Viber him?

"I don't live in the devices world like you young uns he grumbled but agreed and headed upstairs.

Once he was gone, I turned around arching my brows and resting my hands on my hips. Universal language: I was starting an argument!

"I paid you?

Shravan looked around and stepped towards me, "You're going to he told me stopping a foot away.

"What? I frowned.

"And I'm going to collect for my very expensive services he continued.

"Hold up I held my hand out. "What are you going on about? I hissed quietly being mindful of Nanaji upstairs.

"You're still yet to pay he informed nonchalantly.

"But you just said...

"I know what I said he cut me off. "This is between you and me he pointed to the space between us, "I saved you from being kidnapped, why should Nanaji pay for the services?

"I wasn't going to let him pay, how much do I owe you?

"If I wanted money Sumo, I could've just gotten that off Nanaji he chuckled, his adam's apple bobbed and he swallowed thickly and leaned down. "You're going to pay differently he smiled as he straightened.

Differently? Hang on a f**king minute...

"I am not having sex with you I hissed.

"That wasn't on my plan for tonight but we can do that he smirked. "Be ready at 7pm he told me and turned walking out the door.

What the f**king f**k just happened?

After I had gathered myself, I stuffed my face with a slice of carrot cake which I was saving for dessert tonight then I pulled out my phone calling Ariana!

Best friend advice needed right now!

"Your brother wants to f**k me I cried out in a panic as soon as she answered.

"Oh ewww! I don't want to know what my brother wants to do Ariana yelled. "Best friend rule Sumo, you don't talk about sex and my brother in the same sentence.

"Did you hear what I said? I countered angrily.

"What happened?

I then explained the kidnapping which she interrupted by screaming and cursing me for not telling her.

"How do you expect me to tell you Ariana? I was kidnapped, guns with the guys. I wasn't exactly thinking about letting you. I was trying to figure out running away without bullets in me I snapped.

"Oh okay, sorry she mumbled. "Carry on

"So, Shravan saved me. Nanaji asked him about the pay and he said I paid

"But you've not paid? Ariana questioned.

"No, he didn't say anything in the car and when I asked him. He said I'm going to pay different and his different is f**king me

"Sumo! Ariana screamed. "No f**king and my brother in same sentence.

"Sorry... I mumbled. "What should I do? He's coming at 7 to pick me up

"Oh...

"Well? I huffed waiting for a response.

"I dunno she sighed. "Maybe wait and see what happens at 7pm

"I'd be flat on my back unable to tell you because I'd be busy I snapped. "He looks at me with those damn eyes and I want to melt in them.

"Well, remember the time he pissed you off by telling Neil Jaxon that you wet your bed Ariana reminded.

"Oh my God! I so hate your brother I recalled the incident. I had never been so embarrassed. I was so close to getting Neil Jaxon to asking me out but Shravan f**king Malhotra intervened! I wanted Neil's blue eyed babies!

"So remember that when he says like panting melting lines Ariana suggested.

"Okay I nodded in determination. "What if that doesn't work?

"I don't know, think of the all the reasons you hate my brother

"The list is shorter than all the reasons I crush on him... I groaned. "f**k he's so hot I murmured. Who wouldn't love chocolate eyed babies with Shravan Malhotra? And that bad ass attitude makes me want him even more. I very much wanted to f**k Shravan Malhotra but f**king hell I wanted it to mean something than just a f**k! I crushed on the guy since I was 10 years old. And the bas***d stated clearly one day that he saw me as another Ariana.

My shitty luck, I tell you.

And just then it came to me, I was going to remember the time he said I was like Ariana a younger sister!

That was definitely going to dampen my mood and would kill the buzzing excitement in my lady parts!


- If possible, would anyone be able to offer any suggestions as to why my punctuation disappears when copying and pasting... I deleted history, cookies etc from chrome and had changed font on word to see if it would post with them...

I've made it bold but wouldn't have time to do that all the time...

Also I don't send PMs... So I would request you follow or bookmark this thread...

Edited by --B00KW0RM-- - 8 years ago
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Different and refreshing story! !
I love that banner! !
Waiting to read more!

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