AdNi OS : Advay's MusicAllies 1 - Laal Ishq || 1.7.17

*exhales* wow your writing is amazing, it was so descriptive that i felt so immersed in the story, i was hooked on each and every single word, loved the way you detailed advay's internal conflict, his love and pain,i felt that burning desire from him towards chandni. also pretty great that it lead into the mandir promo, i'll take it as canon until its proven otherwise😆

This is spectacular! 👏 You're too good at writing Candywa. The song along with the words you used and the feelings imparted make this OS amazing <3

Ahhhmazinggg C! Love this OS! Thank you for the translations as well I had no idea of the meaning behind the song till today. It perfectly matches Advay's and Chandni's feeings

That was just spectacular.

Originally posted by: bila_a

*exhales* wow your writing is amazing, it was so descriptive that i felt so immersed in the story, i was hooked on each and every single word, loved the way you detailed advay's internal conflict, his love and pain,i felt that burning desire from him towards chandni. also pretty great that it lead into the mandir promo, i'll take it as canon until its proven otherwise😆

also i appreciate the shower and shirtless descriptions of advay as well.😳

keep up the writing, look forward to more from you.

Originally posted by: .MyriadOfHues.

This is spectacular! 👏 You're too good at writing Candywa. The song along with the words you used and the feelings imparted make this OS amazing <3

Waiting to read a looot more from you 🤗

@Candy baby it's amazing the magic you weave through your words.. smooth like silk , intense like thunder and beautiful like rain. ☢️

Originally posted by: noorie_

Ahhhmazinggg C! Love this OS! Thank you for the translations as well I had no idea of the meaning behind the song till today. It perfectly matches Advay's and Chandni's feeings

Advay loves to hate Chandni and you've described his thoughts and feelings to the T.

Keep them coming!

Originally posted by: Lady_Macbeth

@Candy baby it's amazing the magic you weave through your words.. smooth like silk , intense like thunder and beautiful like rain. ☢️

Please gimme. .okay. .I mean give us more !