~Pain~ Shivika OS: On Separation track

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Loved the shot :-)

This shot has encapsulated their pain, their heartbreak, their love, their necessity, their intensity everything so beautifully.

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome...loved it

you portrayed their emotions,pain beautifully...

The pain of seperation...it was too heartbreaking

eachothers presence is wat they needed

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Separation 💔 and quite sad . They need each other 😭... yur story, Super se bhi Upar 👏 ...

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Beautiful emotional painful...yet magical
Lst part was so perfect... They both got peace in each others embrace
Loved it frm the core of ma heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very painful but beautiful os

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Posted: 9 years ago

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If only this exact thing would happen onscreen!.

Oh the possibilities!

You described their painful emotional turmoil so well.

Honestly, this is one of the best shot I have read here, on the current track,

Well done Writer😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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wow this was wonderful
it was painful to read it though..
but liked it very much

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Originally posted by: ithihaas
Loved the shot :-)
This shot has encapsulated their pain, their heartbreak, their love, their necessity, their intensity everything so beautifully.

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am glad you liked it.. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliantly written..

Originally posted by: lourel24
Outstanding

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Superb

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
Wow 👏

Loved it !!!

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Very painful but beautiful os

Originally posted by: param18
Such a beauty!

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am glad you people liked it..

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