ViTharv OS- The Sujata Family!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another ViTharv OS! ❤️

Please no rotten tomatoes for the small part. I just wanted to portray a happy Sujata family, their bonding and their life. 😳

This might be my last OS on ViTharv! 💔This is how I always imagined ViTharv after marriage, engaging in banters, enjoying and stealing moments.

ViTharv OS- The Sujata Family!


Atharv returned from work so see his family, immersed in the kitchen. Vividha worked only in the mornings, afternoon she would be back home, before her two naughty, mischievous kids would be back from school. Sujata chachi had told Vividha not to worry for Madhav and Khushi, but Vividha didn't want to burden Sujata chachi in this age. Sujata chachi was a wonderful grandmom, she loved these two beyond anything, pampered them and even sometimes scolded them when they were wrong. But Vividha always felt that it was her time to relax, take the much-needed rest and be comfortable in her old age, she had suffered enough in life, faced enough difficulties.


Vividha saw Sujata chachi in the kitchen making laddoos, Khushi's favourite. Vividha hugged chachi from back.

Sujata: "Ye lo, tum bhi khaa lo... as she fed her a morsel to taste.


Vividha: "Bahut acha hai...par maine aapse kaha na...aap kyun itna kaam karti hai?


Sujata: "Yeh kaam thodi hota hai...Khushi ko bahut pasand hai...


Vividha: "Okay...as you say. Yeh dono shaitaan aaye ki nai?


Sujata: "Haan, kapde badal rahe hai...phir pure ghar main kudenge aur daudenge...


Vividha: "Jayiye, aur thoda aaram karo...shaam hote hi aapko aur pareshan karenge...


Sujata left the kitchen, leaving all the unfinished chores for Vividha to complete.
Atharv who was listening to this entire conversation, had a huge grin on his face. How much did the woman he loved, cared for him, his kids and his mother.


Vividha: "Kya soch rahe ho? Aaj itni jaldi kaise...kaam nahi hai...ya phir meri yaad aagayi? she questioned him raising an eyebrow.


Atharv: "Aap kitna khayal rakhti hai sab ka...khaas karke meri maa ka... Vividha smacked him hard.


Vividha: "Tumhaari maa...meri kuch nai hai...


Listening to their banters, Sujata walked in the living room to see them running behind each others.


Sujata: "Tum logon ke bache hai abhi, aur tum log bachon ki tarah ladh rahe ho...


Vividha: "Chachi, ye keh raha hai ki aap sirf uski maa hai...ab main maroongi nai to kya karoongi...


Sujata twisted his ear, and the poor guy winced in pain.



Atharv: "Acha maaf karde...kya maa tu har baat uski side leti hai...

Sujata: "Chup kar...kitna tang karta hai usko..."


Atharv: "Ajeeb family hai meri...koi meri side pe nai hai..."


Sujata smacked him and left the husband and wife to their chores and their usual banters.


Vividha: "Ab to batao, itni jadli kyun aaye ho?"


Atharv: "Aaj dono bachon ke circus jaane ka plan hai...aap chalengi?"


Vividha: "Why not? Par ek minute, ye plan kab bana?"


Atharv: "Surprise tha...Khushi aur Madhav bahut zid kar rahe the...main aur kya karta?"


Vividha: "Bachon ko bighad ke rakhoge...weekdays pe ye sab..."


Vividha was about to say something, but the kids attacked Atharv and were screaming and excited. Vividha smiled, seeing their two, bundle of joys enjoying the moments of life, with the man who mattered, their father. Atharv, the name that mattered to her, her lover, her best friend, her husband and the father to her kids. Atharv helped them in the car, as Vividha was busy packing some drinks and snacks for these three monkeys.



As Atharv, Vividha and two kids drove away, as Sujata waved them a good bye. Sujata was content. Her son had found the right girl, whose love was like a devotion. Her son had wonderful children. What else could a mother ask for? She retired for the night.



Atharv and Vividha came late night, picking up Madhav and Khushi in their arms, the kids fast asleep. The kids enjoyed, enjoyed every moment, they laughed, played and shopped too. As Vividha tucked her kids in, kissing them a good night, Atharv engulfed her. Vividha silently thanked her God. As they took steps back towards their room, destiny smiled at its two beautiful children laughing in happiness.



I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳


Positive criticism welcome!

Love,

Mayu

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Pagalpinky thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohhh this was sooo sweet
Lovely
I love receiving your messages in the morning with beautiful vitharv scenes you portray through your writing
Even if the show stops, please don't stop writing
You are amazing
Thanks for creating this wonderful vitharv memory
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. This is really nice.
shouldn't stop writing you know. Even after the show ends do keep writing. If not on ViTharv, something. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will read and edit this tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Ohhh this was sooo sweet
Lovely
I love receiving your messages in the morning with beautiful vitharv scenes you portray through your writing
Even if the show stops, please don't stop writing
You are amazing
Thanks for creating this wonderful vitharv memory



Pinky🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Such simple scenes, thats all we wanted to see. Nothing grand or OTT.

It depends many things, if a thought inspires me I shall continue writing. 😳

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: fusilli

Wow. This is really nice.
shouldn't stop writing you know. Even after the show ends do keep writing. If not on ViTharv, something. :)


Thankyou so much🤗

I shall try to keep writing, I will definitely. 😳

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishtha

I will read and edit this tomorrow


Shall be waiting Nish baby😆

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗🤗
Amazing & beautiful once again.
I love this amazing Sujata family. I wish if we could to get see this on screen.

I will miss Vitharv & ajmer house.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey jottie hope 2 see u in Vikku s new shows foroum
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry Sory Sorry Sorry Sorry Mayuuu !!
I am sooo late !! Actually I saw this but the was busy so didn't get the time to read and after that I forgot also :(

But then what can I say !! It is just beyond beautiful !! What the show didn't give us . You gives us by writing beautiful OS
The way is sooo beautiful ! And as always I didn't feel like I am reading !! All the scenes just came into mind as I was reading...and yeah I really loved that line when atharv said kaisi family hai meri , koi mere side nahi letha...it actually happens with him :D and the love and care that vividha showed to Sujatha was also really beautiful !


I am gonna really miss your OS :(

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