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Posted: 8 years ago
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Author's Note: This is my first time writing about this beautiful couple.. Hopefully I don't butcher it.. Enjoy and feel free to leave comments even the negative one šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜›



Mehrya: Suhagraat 101


Chapter 1:



Mehek had forcefully entered his home.. Shaurya Khanna's home. How dare she?! I had asked her if she wanted money for her mother's recipe book.. But HELL NO!! She had to show her true colors.. Bloody middle class kahin ke.. Paise ka parda jo par gaya hai isse.. Shaurya secretly thought as he was looking at her.
Mehek was brushing her hair looking into the mirror. She knew her Khadoos Kumar was looking at her.. More like gazing at her beauty, she laughed at her last comment at the back of her mind.
"Shaurya oh Shaurya tum ne mujhe mandap par toh chaur diya lekin bhool gayi ke mein purane delhi se aaye hoon.. Bachpan se parathe kahe hain mein ne.. Itne aisane se toh mein tumhe mujhko bhoolne nahin doon ge". Mehek thought intensively as she met Shaurya's glare with equal force.

"Dekh kya rahe ho" shaurya asked snickering at mehek.

"Apne dear husband ko, itna toh hak hai na mujhko... Pati dev" Mehek smirked at Shaurya.

"w-wo-Wohh" shaurya stuttered shocked at her last statement.. His mind searched for a witty remark to no avail.. His wife had beaten him.. Wait what?! She isn't my wife.. Well not fully at least.

"Kya hua.. Sharmaa gaye kya?! Abhi toh shaadi ki hai.. Abhi se wife ke control mein aa gaye ho.. Chalo acha hai apne jaga ka aisaas toh hai" mehek said casually aproaching her hubby.. promptly laying on the bed winking at him..

"Hey, hey.. calm down kuch aise nahin hai.. Apne laalchi dreams abhi puree nahin hoye hain.. Tohri aur mainat karne pare ge.." Shaurya said laying down beside her..

Both were laying on their sides.. Staring at one another.

"Shaurya Khanna ke wife banhna hai na.. Toh tik hai.. Kuch dena bhi parega" shaurya smirked knowing how she would react..

He slowly moved towards her direction.. Waiting for mehek to freak out.. But she didn't.. She stood her ground. Like she was ready to counter against him..

"Maza aaye ga" he thought smiling at her.

"Haan, haan mujhe pata hai.. Kuch dena parega.. Arre main already de chuke hoon.." Mehek smiled

Shaurya choked.. He was astonished by her words. Delhi 6 wali was not a virgin.. Before he could continue with his thoughts. Mehek continued with her statement..

"...Mein toh already ghar ko chaur aaye Hoon.. Ab is se zyada aur kya doon?!" Mehek questioned knowing full well what Shaurya was thinking..

Mehek wasn't as dumb as Shaurya thought her to be.. She was actually quite clever, more so than shaurya..

Shaurya let out a sigh.. Thanking God she was still innocent.. Maano ya na maano hai toh yeh Bahut innocent and cute. CUTE?!? GOD!! WHAT AM I THINKING.. ABHI GHAR MEIN AAYE HAI AUR ABHI SE KAALA JAADU SHURU..? AUR KAB SE MUJHE ISS KE VIRGINITY SE PROBLEM HAI.. I DONT CARE.. SHE CAN DO WHATEVER SHE WANTS.. -but... NO BUTS SHAURYA KHANNA!!

Shaurya kept fighting his thoughts; his turmoil within him.

Before he had a chance to say something.. Someone knocked at their door..

TO BE CONTINUED...



Z: PHEWWW!!! How'd I do? I'm kind of amazed because I really don't speak "hindi/urdu".. Hope I only made small errors and not idiotic ones lol.. Is it good? Comment down below if I should continue


Chapter 2: Page 3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4862146&TPN=3

Chapter 3: Page 6 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4862146&TPN=6

Chapter 4: Page 10 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4862146&TPN=10




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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Congratulations on your very first post my dear šŸ‘
Good start, and very beautifully written 😊
Was short,sweet and simple and I loved it 😳
You don't speak Hindi but you wrote the dialogues very well,good job!
It was good to see Shaurya stuttering in front of Mehek ..I want to see him doing the same in the showšŸ˜†
Thank you and please continue soon ā­ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was wonderful, can't wait to read more. Welcome to the forum šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Firstly Welcome to ZKM family zavia ..šŸ¤—
And what a way to start your journey here ..
It's a great story loved this funny and bold MS and SK bechara confused as always šŸ˜›

And Great efforts you don't know Hindi and mostly you have used Hindi dilougesšŸ‘šŸ¼

I didn't understand your title 101 ..as in ?? 🤣
I guess I need to control my gutter Mind ..

Yahan toh ek suhaag raat ke liye fans tars rahy Hai 😃

Do Continue soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjh30

Congratulations on your very first post my dear šŸ‘
Good start, and very beautifully written 😊
Was short,sweet and simple and I loved it 😳
You don't speak Hindi but you wrote the dialogues very well,good job!
It was good to see Shaurya stuttering in front of Mehek ..I want to see him doing the same in the showšŸ˜†
Thank you and please continue soon ā­ļø


Thank you so much!! Yess, shaurya needs to know who's boss aka mehek!! šŸ˜†ā¤ļø
I will update soon
zavia thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: fizzyfairy

That was wonderful, can't wait to read more. Welcome to the forum šŸ¤—


Ahhh 😳 thank you!! Can't wait for many more stories ahead..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Firstly Welcome to ZKM family zavia ..šŸ¤—

And what a way to start your journey here ..
It's a great story loved this funny and bold MS and SK bechara confused as always šŸ˜›

And Great efforts you don't know Hindi and mostly you have used Hindi dilougesšŸ‘šŸ¼

I didn't understand your title 101 ..as in ?? 🤣
I guess I need to control my gutter Mind ..

Yahan toh ek suhaag raat ke liye fans tars rahy Hai 😃

Do Continue soon😊


I feel so welcomed!! You guys are so sweet!! šŸ˜­šŸ˜›šŸ˜Š.. Haha Same!! Fans toh tarse ge na we love mehrya.. They need to have more love scenes In my opinion! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
I love it when shaurya is confused and mehek is bold..just like you said. I wanna give mehek the upper hand bc Mehek is a diva and they need to show that in the show!! šŸ˜†
Shaurya who?!? GO MEHEK!! šŸ˜›

P.S. I love them both šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First welcome to forum.
1st post FF .
When I saw title suhagrath my gutter mind activated.
Nice plot.
Good to see bold Mehek and confused shaurya.
Waiting for next update.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjh30

Congratulations on your very first post my dear šŸ‘
Good start, and very beautifully written 😊
Was short,sweet and simple and I loved it 😳
You don't speak Hindi but you wrote the dialogues very well,good job!
It was good to see Shaurya stuttering in front of Mehek ..I want to see him doing the same in the showšŸ˜†
Thank you and please continue soon ā­ļø


Sanjh your posts decreasing day by day. What is happening from 40k to 17k now😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice starting dear.
Like to read tashan wali story
It will be interesting read Shaurya's inner thoughts about Mehek.

Vinu

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