My imagination based on 6 yrs leap part 4

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Tanuja is shown in a modern look.. Looking pataka queen running behind a girl
Tanuja:beta pls kuch kaalo warna mama gussa hoh jaayegi aapse..
Girl(tanvi just imagine):nahi mama mujhe yeh kaana pasand nahi heh aapko pata hena mujhe noodles pasand heh..
Amit(show meh unka naam avinash(imagine)):beta mama koh pareshan mat karo.
Tanuja:avi ek kaam karte heh aaj hum club meh nahi jaayenge..
Tanvi:kyun mama aaj toh saturday har staurday hum club jaayenge naa..
Tanuja:haan agar tum yeh katam karogi tabhi hum jaayenge..
Tanvi:teek heh and complete her break fast..
Tanvi:mama meh aaj aapke saath Bouquet shop chalungi..
Tanuja:beta tum bore hojaogi..
Tanvi:nahi mama mujhe aapke saath rehna heh..
(As per the pics posted by amit i have written this)
Tanuja as usual she goes to her work.. tanvi helped tanuja whole day..
Tanuja:meh bahut lucky hoon ki tum meri beti hoh..
Tanvi:meh aur aapke pati yaani mere papa hum dono buhat lucky heh ki app humare zindagi meh aayi ..
Tanuja remembers something and gets emotional and tears flow from her eys..
Tanvi wipes her tears and says:aapki aakon meh aansoo naa meh dekh sakthi aur nahi mere papa.. Samjhe..
Tanuja:haan samaj gayi meri maa.. Ab chale club jaana hehna..
Tanvi:haan mama
After reaching home they get ready ...
Avinash reached club and waiting for tanuja and tanvi..
Tanuja and tanvi reached club..
Seeing avinash tanvi runs towards him..
Three enters the club..
Inside the club rishi was present ..
Tanuja feels as if rishi was present here..
Tanuja:yeh mujhe kya hoh raha heh delhi meh rishi kaise hoga aur meh uske baare meh kyun sochun.. I hate him.. meh usse pyaar karthi thi ab mere dil meh uskehkiye sirf nafrat heh..
Avinash:kya hua tanuja
Tanuja:kuch nahi..

Breakup song, breakup song
Karde dil ki feeling strong
Saade chaar minute long
Breakup song, breakup song

Break break B B.. Breakup song
Break break B B.. Breakup song

Angrezi chidiya ki khaatir
Desi dil mera tod diya
Maine chhod diya
Usey chhod diya
Uski kaali kartooton ne
Uska bhaanda phod diya
Maine chhod diya
Usey chhod diya
Tanuja sings..
And remembers rishi.. And the morning when she left him..
Dil pe patthar rakh ke
Munh pe makeup kar liya
Oh dil pe patthar rakh ke
Munh pe makeup kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya
Subah savere uth ke maine
Ye sab kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya
Avinash sings..
Humko bin bataye tune
Ye kab kar liya?
Arey humko bin bataye tune
Ye kab kar liya?
Oh tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune break up kar liya
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune breakup kar liya

Tanvi also dance with tanuja and avi

Subah savere uth ke maine
Ye sab kar liya
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune breakup kar liya

B b.. breakup song
Tanuja sings..

Kuch din to rona dhona bumper kiya
Aur phir delete uska number kiya
Aansu jo sookhe seedha parlour gayi
Parlour mein jaake shampoo jamkar kiya

College ki saheliyon se catch-up kar liya
Arey college ki saheliyon se catch-up kar liya
Jinko mill na paayi unko whatsapp kar diya
Tanvi avi aur tanuja ke beech was dancing..
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj maine breakup kar liya
Subah savere uth ke maine ye sab kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj maine breakup kar liya
Avinash sings..

(Badshah)
Look, baby! mujhe lagta hai ki
Jo bhi tune kiya hai wo very very right hai
Bhoot-kaal ko bhool ja ab tu
Aane wala future very very bright hai

Main hoon na baby saath tere
Party sharty honi poori night hai
Mind na karna jo thoda zyada bol doon
Kyunki banda very very tight hai

Usey phone mila aur gaali de
Photo jala ke karde raakh
Saale teri maa ki aankh!

Kalti hua jo saiyan stupid tera
Jeevit hua hai phir se cupid tera
Baasi relationship ka label hata
Duniya ko tu hai available bata

Arey mere soye armaano ko wake up kar diya
Arey mere soye armaano ko wake up kar diya
Ke tere saiyan ji se (aaha!)
Tune breakup kar liya

Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune..
O tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune
breakup kar liya
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune
breakup kar liya

B b.. Breakup song...
Karde dil ki feeling strong...
And tanvi, tanuja, avinash hug each other and behind them rishi was standing them seeing tanuja hugging someone along with a girl who is calling tanuja , mother..
Rishi was completely broke down becoz uski ek galathi ki waja se itna bada sazaa usse milgaya..
Tanvi:u both are best parents inthe world..
Rishi was seeing them and says: kya tanuja itni nafrat karthi heh ki ussne shaadi bhi karli aur bache bhi karli..
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Wow another outstanding ff. [:D/] . Please keep writing like this love ur writing and ur ff.Update soon.
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Yar kya kamal ki imagination hai 👏 your imagination is just outstanding please please continue this
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Its fab 😊 Plz carry on further.
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Niki you are really rocking with your stories. Plss update it soon as I just can't wait to read further.👏👏👏 Will be waiting eagerly for the next part.
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He gets more jealous when avinash hug tanuja.. . He was super angry and was completely drunk...
Avinash :tanuja tum aur tanvi ghar jao.. Mujhe kuch kaam heh..
Both leaves...
Avinash:notices rishi and helps him to sit in a chair and asks aapka naam kya heh .. And says to himself yeh bol raha hoon yeh toh nashe meh heh.. Inhe meh ghar lekar jaana padegaa..
He takes rishi along with him to home..
Tanuja and tanvi reached home nd slept..
Avi takes him to his guest house which next to his house...
Avi comes to meet tanvi but tanvi was slept he caresses her hair..
Tanuja comes behind him and sings:happy birthday to u .. Happy birthday dear avi . happy birthday to u...
Tanvi:happy birthday papa..
Avi:sab koh yaad heh.. aur tum toh soh rahi thi...
Tanvi :nahi papa mama koh patha tha ki aap yahaan aayege isiliye mene aur mama ne yeh natak kiya..
Tanuja:chalo ab yeh cake cut karo..
Par haan usse pehle wish zaroor maangna..
Avi:makes a wish .. Blows the candle and cuts the cake..
Tanvi :papa phele mummy koh cake dho phir mujhe ..
Tanvi takes pics ..
Next day afternoon.. Rishi wakes up :yeh meh kahaan hoon.. and he remembers tanuja with someone..
And starts crying and says: ab mujhe iss duniya meh rehne kaa koi hak nahi... Jis ladki keh jina chatha tha woh tho kisi aur ka hogayi...
He takes the knife and was about to cut his hand avinash comes and saves him
Avi:yeh kya kar rahe hoh... Pagal hoh tum
Rishi:haan uss ladki ne mujhse itna pyaar kiya uske pyaar koh samaj nahi paaya..
Ab woh kisi aur ki hogayi.. And cries.. Ab meh iss duniya meh ek second bhi nahi reha saktha and tries to get knife..
Avi:nahi agar tumara pyaar sacha heh toh woh waapasa aayegi.. Aaj mera birthday toh aaj nujhe tumse ek gift chaiye.. Pls promise karo tum aisa phir se nahi karoge.. tum fresh hohjao aaj shyaam koh party heh aur yeh loh tumari phone aur apne parivaar koh bhi invite karna... And leaves..
Rishi phones home and netra picks up the call:hello
Netra:rishi kahaan hoh tum
Rishi: says everything
Netra:kitni ache log hena hum sab wahaan aarahe heh..
Netra, rano, man, ahana, beeji, raji enters goenka mansion...
Avinash:ji aap
Raj:mera beta i mean rishi koh aape kal raat..
Avinash:haan ji woh ready hoh raha heh..
Tanuja:avinash kahaan hoh tum...
Rano:yeh awaaz kahin suna heh..
Avinash:ji yeh meri wife heh... Buhat achi heh...
Vanshika(avinah mom):haan meri bahu nahi beti heh...
Pls aap andar aayeh... All. Enters mansion
Netra:mom yeh log toh humse zyaada rich heh...
Rano:hum bhi itni hi rich the..
Rishi joins bedi family
Rano:beta tum teek hona.
Rishi:hmm
Avinash comes to center of the stage..
He picks up a mike... And sings.. (Imagine the same from original song )
Main daalun taal pe Bhangra
Tu bhi gidda paa le
Chal aisa rang jamaa de hum
Ke bane sabhi matwaale
Tanuja was wearing a long gown.. Looking beautiful.. (Same steps wich priyanka did)
Mann kahe ki main le aaun
Chaand aur taare saare
Inn haathon par main chaand rakhun
Iss maang mein bhar doon taare
Everyone is shocked to see sandy..
And rishi gets teary eyed seeing tanuja
Sandy sings.. (Same steps)

Hello! Hello! tu floor pe kab hai aayi
Ye lo, ye lo, badi solid masti chaayi
Hello! Hello! too much hai tumne lagayi
Ye lo, ye lo, control karo mere bhai

Avinash along with tanuja sings..

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
koi dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan (x2)
Tanuja asks avi to bring mom and dad
Dad sings..
Ye nain matakka tera mujhe bada tadpaave
Tu dekhe to ajj vi dilbar kudiye
teer sa ek chal jaave
Aahaa.. Aahaa..
Kar de bin piye sharabi, chehra tera gulaabi
Koi kyun na yamla ban jaave jo itni ho betaabi
And tanuja was standing near rishi and av pulls her for dance
(Same steps did by farhan)
Hello! Hello! dil dil se connect karna
Ye lo, ye lo, ye baatein direct karna

Whole goenka family dance..

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan

(Oye.. oye marjana oye..)

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan
Goenkas men dances...
Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak main to
Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak
Main kabootar phaseya ki hor koi
Phase vi na haay phase vi na
Phase vi na haay phase vi na (x2)

Chana chanak tera pan dunga nak main to
(x4)

Main kabootar faseya ki
hor koi phase vi na.. (repeat)
Avinash sings
Ye baat na maine jaani
Kyun itni khush hai diwaani
Tu mujhko aisi kahaani samjha de, samjha de..
Tanuja sings..
Ye baat hai sabne chaahi
Mile janmon ka humraahi
Yahaan huaa hai kuch aisa hi
Samjhe na samjhe na o ho..
Avinash bro abi sings..
Ab main jaana keh rahi ho kya fasaana ho ho...
Tanuja sings and remembers rishi

Pyaar karne se bhi mushqil hai nibhaana ho ho
Avinash dadi sings..
Hello! Hello! don't mind mera yeh kehna
Ye lo, ye lo, zara mere touch mein rehna
Tanuja and avi dances along with tanvi .. Tanuja aur avi ke beech tanvi thi
A lady to another lady:iss ladki koh dehkar koi keh saktha heh ki ek bachi ki maa heh..
Another lady:haan aur yeh buhat lucky heh ki isse itni achi pati aur saas mili heh..
Bedi family hears this and gets shocked .. Rishi was fully broke down..
Beeji:meri bachi kitni khush heh yahaan kisi bhi nazr naa lage..

Everyone dance..

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
koi dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan

O haaye...

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
to dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan

Raat badi hai mastaani ee ee..

Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
to dilbar jaani kar le gallan gooniyan

o marjaana oye...
And finally avinash cuts the cake..
Vanshika:avinash pehle apni patni koh cake kilaana ..
Tanuja:mom..
Vanshika:avinash cake kilaao..
Tanvi:woh toh kal raat hi sab hogaya heh..
Tanvi shows the pictures to everyone..
Rishi: tanuja kitni khush hena..
Beeji:ahana insab se boldena agar inke waja se phir se meri bachi koh koi takleef mili toh mera mara hua muh hi dekhenge..
Rishi:beeji..
Beeji:meh tumse baat nahi kar rahi hoon... Hamara rishta toh tabhi toot gaya jab meri bachi too gayi thi...
Sandy:tanuja ab chaltha hoon..
Tanuja: chachaji par ruk jaye naa..
Sandy:nahi beta mujhe kuch kaam heh muhhe jaana hoga.. Teek heh chaltha hoo..
Tanuja:apna kyal rakna..
Sandy leaves..
Avinash:arre meh toh bhul gaya ..
Tanuja:kya??
Avinash:woh kal raat mujhe wk ladka mipa woh buhat drunk tha issliye ghar lekar aagaya..
Tanuja:acha ab woh kaise heh teek hena
Woh...
Avi:haan teek heh uska pura parivaar yahan par shamil heh.. Uska naam kuch r se start hotha heh..
Tanuja: ravi..
Avi:nahi..
Tanuja: ranveer
Avi:nahi...
Tanuja:rohit..
Avi:nahi.. Uska naam buhat acha heh..
Tanuja:slowly rishi..
Avi:haan rishi ..
Tanuja: kya rishi singh bedi
Avi:tumhe uska naam kaise patha heh..
Tanuja:iss naam se buhat purana rishtha heh..
Avi:kaisa ristha..
Someone calls avi and he leaves..
Tanuja:rishi singh bedi.. Is insaan ki waja se meh itni badal gayi ... Is insaan ki waja se meri zindagi badal gayi.. Aur
From behind
Beeji:aur us insaan se tum buhat pyaar karthi hoh..
Rishi comes..
Tanuja :without seeing them says nahi uss insaan se meh nafrat karthi hoon...
She wipes her tears and leaves..
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Love the update.Tanuja is Very happy with him but hope Tanshi unite soon.
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Buhat achi update thi love it please update soon
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Wating for update of this ff.Update this also
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I have changed avi name to abi jaisa show meh heh aur tanvi kaa naam natasha...
Tanuja:ek minute mujhe aisa kyun laga ki beeji ne mujhse baat ki ...meh bhi naa woh yahaan kaise aa sakthi heh...
On the other side ..
Rishi:cries and ssays..tanuja tum aise kaise mujhe bulkar kisi aur ke saath apni zindagi meh aage badsakthi hoh...ek naar bhi mere baare meh nahi socha...
Netra:woh kyun aisa sochegi rishi usse toh sirf paise hi chaiyeh naa...itne saalon meh tumne sirf uske baare meh socha ...jisne tumne chod diya aur mene sirf tumare baare meh socha paise nahi...and leaves...
Rano:sunniye ji kya yeh wahi tanuja heh ...mujhe yakin nahi hoh raha heh...
Raj: haan yeh wahi tanuja heh par yeh badal gayi sirf rishi ki waja se..par meri beti khush heh aur ab meh apni beti zindagi meh dard nahi deksaktha aur woh bhi mere bete ki waja se...toh bilkul bhi nahi...
On the side...
Tanuja:natasha pls beta buhat late hogaya heh tumhe ab sojao..
Natasha:mom kitni achi party heh aur pls mujhe ab nahi sona heh
Tanuja:lekin...
Abi:lekin wekin kuch nahi meri princess jo chaathi heh wahi hoga samjhe mrs tanuja abishek khuraana...
Aur mere princes koh aur kya chaiyeh...
Natasha:ek jaadu ki japhi...grom my mom and dad ..
And hugs them...
Rishi waa seeing all this and gets angry...
Abi :he takes natasha and holds tanuja hand ...and says ladys and gentle men may i have ur attention pls...meh aaj buhat khush hoon aaj first reason aaj mera birthday heh second reason ki mere paas ek complete family heh...ek buhat hi achi patni aur ek princess..
Third reason is mene mumbai ki sabse bade business property koh kareeda heh...any guesses??
Mene bedis property koh kareeda heh...
Tanuja was shocked ...
Abi:arre raj ji pls aage aaye naa...
Tanuja turns and gets emotional seeing raj...and in low voice:bahuji...
And tears flow from her eyes...
Tanuja notices that everyone is present in the party...
Raj:abi yeh loh property ki ppapers...
Tanuja:sees rishi and gets angry...
Tanuja: bahuji kaise hoh aap...
Raj:meh teek hoon puttar tu kaisi heh tujhe khush dekar meh aaj khush hoon...
Tanuja:natasha yahaan aana...
Tanuja:beta inse aashirwaas loh...
Natasha takes blessings...
Natasha:mom yeh kon heh yeh aapki papa heh...
Tanuja:haan aur tum jao...
Raj:beta yeh tumaari beti heh...apni beti...
Bedis were hearing this including rishi...
Tanuja: haan yeh meri beti heh...natasha..
Raj:kya tum puraani baaton koh bulgayi...kya tum rishi koh bhi...
Tanuja:bahuji ab Natasha aur abi hi mere duniyaa heh aur meh inse buhat pyaar karthi hoon ...kuch log koh sirf insult karna aata heh aur abi mujhse buhat pyaar kartha heh ..woh muj par vishwaas kartha heh..aur yahi baat rishi ki toh mere zindagi ki meh uska exit kabkaa hoh chuka heh...tanuja sees rishi...angrily and goes ..
Raj:tumari waja se rishu yeh sab hohaya heh ...tumne toh kabhi bhi tanuja se pyaar nahi kiya ...kyunki pyaar kaa dusra naam vishwaas hotha heh aur tumne us bachi par kabhi bbhi vishwaas nahi kiya...
Raj leaves...
After the party

Abi:raj ji pls buhat raat hogayi aap sab yahaan humaare sath ruk jaaye ...
Raj:beta hum yahaan kaise...
Abi:pls kya meh aapka beta nahi hoon...
Raj:haan tu mere puttar hi tho heh...
Abi:toh aapko apne bete ki baat nahi maanenge...
Raj:teek heh beta ..hum yahi ruk jaayenge ..
Everyone goes to their rooms...
At last ..
Abi:rishi yeh heh tumaare room ...aur pls be comfortable ..
Rishi:waise tum apni patni se buhat oyaar karthe hoh naa..
Abi:haan patni se yaad aaya mere queen aur princess wait kar rahe heh..good night..sweet dreams ...
Abi leaves ..

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