Of Crimes and Punishments (PriVeer OS)- Page 4

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

Wow.. awesome this one is ⭐️

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Oh gosh.. You are on a PriVeer-Roll!

I think you managed very well to show us PriVeer connecting emotionally by using the perfect words. I could totally visualize scene by scene. This woman who was everything to him and nobody to her had left an immense impact on both of them and led him her way. Two broken souls to help each other become whole again.

Prinku comparing Jhanvi's drinking problems to Ranchero being drunk was insightful. Omkara sending the invitation and dedication in art was such a nice touch to the story.

Pandey thoughts were also good 😊 assumptions and confusions.

For me it was not sad or emotional. Just beautiful.

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Goodness hon, This was brilliant👏
So intense and hauntingly beautiful❤️
These 2 sure have sparked, inspired and taken your writing to another fantastic level😃⭐️
Take care

Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome!

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Its amazing...
Lovely OS

Ah so beautiful! Amazing.
So well portrayed that it left me a bit teary with the pain of these two.
You have such amazing writing skills! So detailed you write Twerps! Brilliant.
Loved this one.

Cheers
-Harshada

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Ah so beautiful! Amazing.
So well portrayed that it left me a bit teary with the pain of these two.
You have such amazing writing skills! So detailed you write Twerps! Brilliant.
Loved this one.

Cheers
-Harshada

Twerps, I can't believe I hadn't commented on this one! 😲

Though the good thing is, I got a chance to reread it! ❤️

Ah, Randhawa! 💔 The man holds so much pain in his heart, and the way you have portrayed his state at the beginning of the OS really makes my heart go out to him. And further, the way you explored PriVeer's pain through Omkara's paintings was absolutely brilliant! Without having him actually present, you crafted the artist perfectly. And the question that Randhawa poses, Where was room for such pain in the lives of the Oberois? Omkara has put his talent and skills to such good use by reading both Randhawa and Priyanka and putting their pain on canvas. And then, the entire interaction between PriVeer was pure love ❤️, total angst galore! And the setting, so vividly penned I could visualise it.

Isn't it strange that despite no real interactions before this one, Priyanka and Ranveer could both understand each other perfectly in this moment. Absolutely loved it!

And I found Pandey to be real cute! The way the old man pitied his sahib for falling into the clutches of unrequited love. 😆

Would love to read more shots from you because I just can't get enough of your writing! 🤗

Cheers,
Sarce

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Twerps, I can't believe I hadn't commented on this one! 😲

Though the good thing is, I got a chance to reread it! ❤️

Ah, Randhawa! 💔 The man holds so much pain in his heart, and the way you have portrayed his state at the beginning of the OS really makes my heart go out to him. And further, the way you explored PriVeer's pain through Omkara's paintings was absolutely brilliant! Without having him actually present, you crafted the artist perfectly. And the question that Randhawa poses, Where was room for such pain in the lives of the Oberois? Omkara has put his talent and skills to such good use by reading both Randhawa and Priyanka and putting their pain on canvas. And then, the entire interaction between PriVeer was pure love ❤️, total angst galore! And the setting, so vividly penned I could visualise it.

Isn't it strange that despite no real interactions before this one, Priyanka and Ranveer could both understand each other perfectly in this moment. Absolutely loved it!

And I found Pandey to be real cute! The way the old man pitied his sahib for falling into the clutches of unrequited love. 😆

Would love to read more shots from you because I just can't get enough of your writing! 🤗

Cheers,
Sarce