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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

INDEX

#1 Together Forever (Page 1){Venai}

#2 I Need You.. [Part1](Page 3){Ranya}

Characters

Prabhas as Jai Anantaneni

Anushka as Vennela Akula

[Couple name - Venai]

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Prabhas as Ranganath Vemuri (Arvi,RV)

Anushka as Maya Dasari

[Couple name - Ranya]

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Posted: 8 years ago

Together Forever

A day did not pass by in his life without her thoughts...''HE LOVES HER''...he still does...''HE WISHES TO BE WITH HER,EVEN IF IT IS FOR A DAY''...something which he has been yearning for the past 10 years without her...her absence had created a void in his life...a void which could never be filled...

Her condition was no different...she longed for him,for his presence...all these years of separation had brought her even more closer to him...she didn't know whether her heart was right in loving him...even if it was wrong..she had no control over it...they had known each other since they were children...they bonded over the years , they didn't realize when it changed into something more beautiful...they had become one even before realizing it...it was impossible for her to erase all the memories with him...she had loved him deeply and she still does.

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''Vennela Jai'' ----she carved on the tree,her lips curved in a sad smile.

''Isn't it beautiful Jai??'' Vennela asked excitedly with tears in her eyes which threatened to spill.

''It is...just like our love'' he moved forward and enclosed her in his arms...completely absorbing the feeling of her warmth against his body...she pulled him more closer to her...she wasn't ready to leave him as yet...tears cascaded down their cheeks...they weren't ready to live without each other...but they had to.

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She stood infront of that very tree she had carved their names 10 years back...she moved her fingers over the weathered letters of his name.

''Jai...'' her lips mumbled as a lone tear made way through her cheek.

Her mind wandered off to his thoughts again...''how is he, is he alright??''her heart questioned.She turned to walk away, only to stop midway...her breath hitched in her throat,her eyes locked with his...the man whom she deeply loved stood infront of her...Her Jai...everything felt soo surreal to her...

Jai stood rooted to his spot,he couldn't believe his eyes...he couldn't believe His Vennela was standing there,just a step away from him...In all these years he never thought he would meet her again...and at this very place where they parted ways.

They couldn't contain the happy tears that gushed out.They smiled at each other.

''You're here...'' he spoke softly to himself.

''hmm..'' she nodded happily assuring him that she is indeed there.

They took small steps towards each other...recollecting all their memories of togetherness.

''You have grown old Jai'' she chuckled with tears spilling through her eyes.

''And look at you, with all these wrinkles on your forehead Vennela.''

Vennela closed her eyes savouring the feel of her name that fell through his lips.She opened her eyes to see him staring at her intently.She looked away unable to bear the intensity in his eyes.Jai smacked himself with guilt.

''I am sorry...I should have realized that...''

''You don't have to feel sorry Jai...I am equally responsible for it'' She said looking at the vast blue sea that lay beneath.

They faced the blue vastness together.An unfulfilfilled wish took rebirth in their in heart. It was unsaid...but their hearts knew each others wishes.They took slow steps towards the sea , cherishing each second of their togetherness.He held out his hand for her,she looked into his eyes,it was conveying a mixed emotion.. happiness of being close to her and also the uncertainty whether this was correct.She was confused but let go, she wasn't ready to leave this chance to be with him.Not receiving a response from her, Jai was about to withdraw his hand when she held it tightly with her finger.He gave her a smile and she returned it.

They walked over the tanned golden sands, holding each other close.The sun was slowly beginning to set,cool breeze blew over them,the sound of the waves pierced through the silence.

Jai motioned her to sit facing the setting sun,and sat over the sands.

''Where is our fate taking us Jai??Isn't it satisfied by separating us...that it decided to put us through this again??'' She spoke as she looped her arm around his and rested her head over his shoulder.

''I don't have an answer to it...''

''Jai have you ever regretted lovin...''

''I DON'T REGRET LOVING YOU...I NEVER DID !!'' He yelled as he got up.She got up along with him,fresh tears spilled over the dried streaks on her cheeks.He held her face ever so gently.

'I have never regretted loving you Vennela...and I will never.I can never even think of regretting the moments we shared together...Never !!'' He said meeting her eyes, conveying that he meant everything what he said.

''I don't know if this is a mistake now...I love you..''

''I love you too...''

She couldn't let go off her emotions and hugged him tightly.His hands wrapped around her instantly,her hands clutched the back of his shirt,while he bore his face into her hairs.They stood there relishing the synchronizing of their heartbeats.

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Fate had separated them.Circumstances forced them to become to become a wife / husband to other people.The same fate gave them children in their forced relationship.They never cursed their fate, sometimes things are meant to end like this.Their love for each other never ended and they knew it never will..that was enough for them to live through.They left each other with the promise to be together in their next life.

---THE END---

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda
Vaaammmooo.. 😡

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Aaradhaya1688

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

This was heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time

Loved it

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
This was heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time
Loved it

thank u soo much for ur kind words😳😳

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bahubalifan

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Very well written Keerthana !! 👏👏
Your words have conveyed their emotions perfectly!!!!! Felt like the scene was happening right infront of my eyes.. keep up the fabulous work !!!!!👍🏼

However

I don't like this plot one bit !!!!!!!! 😡😡😡 What is that stupid fate that separated them ??? I want to know !! After marriage to different people and becoming parents to kids they can't forget each other still living in their memories isn't it cheating ?? They are neither true to themselves nor to their spouses !! How unfair. I don't feel pity instead I feel like murdering them !!! Either they marry each other or stay single all their life, I don't mind but don't marry another person and then blame fate or circumstances. They don't have rights to ruin someone else's life ! This is not Jai n Vennela, they wouldn't have left each other for any reason. She was waiting for him cancelling all her marriage proposals and he rejected the love of Manasa as he truly loved Vennela these two soulmates marrying some other person ??? I don't buy this !!!

Sorry for the rant ! 😛 I am already upset by Bb2 tragedy Amara dead and Deva a widow so I can't take another one. Loved your writing, it's beautiful but not the story. If it was one with a happy ending I would have enjoyed it. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Very well written Keerthana !! 👏👏 Thanx a lot dii😳😳

Your words have conveyed their emotions perfectly!!!!! Felt like the scene was happening right infront of my eyes.. keep up the fabulous work !!!!!👍🏼 I am humbled😳😳

However I did see this coming but wasn't sure it would be you or someone else dii

I don't like this plot one bit !!!!!!!! 😡😡😡 I understand ur anger ..

What is that stupid fate that separated them ??? Fates plays games which is out of our human understanding...

I want to know !! After marriage to different people and becoming parents to kids they can't forget each other still living in their memories isn't it cheating ?? This was exactly the reason I was apprehensive of posting this shot...not every actions are justifiable...but that never means they are completely wrong

They are neither true to themselves nor to their spouses !! I think the fault lies in my inability to express their feelings through my words...

How unfair. I don't feel pity instead I feel like murdering them !!! Either they marry each other or stay single all their life, I don't mind but don't marry another person and then blame fate or circumstances.To explain what led them into marrying other people and what all they went through,i would have needed a writing space of 3 updates..which was never my intention at the first place..i cant / I wont put my readers through a story where the leads ultimately don't have a happy ending

They don't have rights to ruin someone else's life ! they didn't...

This is not Jai n Vennela, they wouldn't have left each other for any reason. She was waiting for him cancelling all her marriage proposals and he rejected the love of Manasa as he truly loved Vennela these two soulmates marrying some other person ??? I don't buy this !!! that was in the movie...my jai and vennela have different characterisations according to the plot I set for them...in my ff jai and vennela is again different.(as the story develops u can see it for urself dii)...this is a fiction born out of my imagination,and that is why the difference is there😊

Sorry for the rant ! 😛 u don't have to be dii😊

I am already upset by Bb2 tragedy Amara dead and Deva a widow so I can't take another one.i understand that too...

Loved your writing, it's beautiful but not the story. If it was one with a happy ending I would have enjoyed it. 😊soo I think I will have to write one with a happy ending to please u dii...hmm...lemme see😛