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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahaha same here Jaya.. since night my mind is filled with so many thoughtsđŸ€Ł
Waiting for yours and hope I can pen down mine also 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What i wrote i dont know?Dont scold me for my English.
I feel like i am the most luckiest person in the world.Today i am going to fulfill my dream .I am going to achieve the greatest achievement of my life.I achieved everything in my life what I dreamed for but I should admit for nothing I craved this much as I craved for her.she is no less than an achievement for me.when that chunari caught fire she was hell frightened .Even though I wanted to marry her and make her mine ASAP but I asked her decision as I don't want her to feel suffocating because of my love and I don't want her to feel I am dominating her in every aspect.Then I asked her if she wants to marry me right now then I will ,if she wants to marry me sometime later then I will wait for her.I told her I am completing the wedding rituals for her happiness but according to me she is my wife for this life ,if possible then for next life too.Then she decided to marry me ASAP so that she can face hurdles in her life as Mrs.shaurya Khanna .I felt proud of myself and I can't choose an apt word to express my happiness.

Within an hour the love of my life will be mine forever and no one can snatch her away from me.I want to protect her as a shield from threatening dangers she is going to face in her life because the world is full of demons.Then I came to know bitter truth of my painful past because of that munjal ."Truth never hides for long". I was completely shattered and I felt like I lost my soul in dense dark forest.My mom told me nothing happened to anyone in that accident but still it haunted me in my dreams.Then Mehek entered my life.she occupied my thoughts,my mind and my soul unknowingly.Even when I was faking my love I didn't know how she occupied my thoughts.I tried to throw her away from my house and my life how hard i tried but i couldn't.Then that haunted dream vanished from my dreams and memories. Now i accepted her wholeheartedly and wanted to claim her mine but i couldnt. First thing i wanted to do was to tell her the truth but my mom stopped me from doing it by warning me the fearful consequences. I know no girl on earth can forgive the person responsible for her parents death.what she will do when she will come to know her husband was the murderer of her parents?



That's it .I dont know when i will update next part as my house is full of guests.If its nice then i will try to update. Dont scold me for its length.Lazy people cant type or write long.
Edited by Heaven2hell - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Jaya mujhe emotional kar diya tum 😭
Meri bhai oops hamari bhai ka har ek emotion bahut achi tarah se likha tu ne 👏

Very well written buddy 😉
Please continue😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehryalove

Jaya mujhe emotional kar diya tum 😭

Meri bhai oops hamari bhai ka har ek emotion bahut achi tarah se likha tu ne 👏

Very well written buddy 😉
Please continue😃


Thanks my buddy.It seems u r back.From yesterday i am sad for my bhai .i cant do anything. Now what happens next in show no one knows.So i came up with my thought.If possible i will try to update by evening .Guests will leave by evening but not sure.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Thanks my buddy.It seems u r back.From yesterday i am sad for my bhai .i cant do anything. Now what happens next in show no one knows.So i came up with my thought.If possible i will try to update by evening .Guests will leave by evening but not sure.

Yeah main bhi bahut sad hoon bhai aur bhabhi dono keliye. Bhai abb confusion mein hai agar woh Sach bathaya toh bhabhi ko kojayega nahi bathaya toh apne aap ko koyega it's very difficult for bhai. Agar bhabhi ko Sach patah chalega toh kya hogi kya woh apna pati ko maaf kar payegi ya uss ko chod kar chali jayegi, bhabhi ko bahut mushkil hoga apni parents ka kaatil ( anjaane mein hi Sahi) ko maaf karna. Hope for the best and good. It's Okk guests hai kaise karogi Kal update kar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Enjoyed reading your take on this track.
Shaurya's fear of losing Mehek is evident here.. đŸ„ș

Jaya.. I trust you with the quick update on this story đŸ€Ł


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Enjoyed reading your take on this track.

Shaurya's fear of losing Mehek is evident here.. đŸ„ș

Jaya.. I trust you with the quick update on this story đŸ€Ł


Dont trust me di.I am a trust breaker.I am completely broken like my bhai😭 because of that ST😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaar har koi emotional wala epi ke baad emotional stories likha ja raha hai...😭
I'm feeling bad for my poor bhai...
How happy he as happy and excited for his marriage with love of his life...
But how his world shattered after knowing the truth..
Yeah wala Shaurya will tell her the truth kya ? đŸ˜Č


For the rest of the parts...jaya !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written jaya ..
Emotional part was just 👏
Poor Bhai..I'm felling bad for him..ST😡😡
Please continue soon

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