Kasam - Sirf Tum ho SS - Short 5B Updated

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Hi Friends..I am writing five short on Purab Climax track ans what happens at the end of this short to Tanuja - Rishi..Its a Suspense..Emotional..Romantic..Lovable..More on Rishi point of view and his heated conversation..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Grate idea. 👍🏼 .Waiting for first part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow that's really great
I'm waiting dear plz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for ur update.
Plss update soon. The track seems so interesting.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wao superb idea 👍🏼 update first part sooner
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Posted: 8 years ago
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SHOT 1

Rishi:What?? I am coming now to office.

Tanuja:Kya hua Rishi,,

Rishi stares at Tanuja and goes.

Tanuja:Biji..Rishi kyun itni tension mein hain..

Biji:Tension matlo Tanuja..kuch tho kuch kadbad hain..

Rano:iss tanuja nein kuch tho kiya hoga..

Raj:Rano chup karo..

Rishi in office

Mr.Oberio:Mr.Rishi we never thought you will be characterless like this and we dont like to have this project commitment with you.

Rishi:Mr.Oberio there is some confusion..Please Understand i am not characterless and i belong to a well manner family.

Mr.Oberio:I am sorry Rishi we are not ready to proceed further and even my son feel the same.

Rishi:Without allowing me to tell the fact how can you decide..We are in decades in this business and small confusion.

Mr.Oberio:We are not family to self pity and give you time.Each second count for us.

Rishi:I accept we need to be professional..But Phir Bhi...can you give a chance to prove myself.

Mr.Oberio:I am sorry Mr.Rishi Singh Bedi..we have decided to give this deal to another company.

Rishi:Mr.Oberio...

Rishi goes to Home..

Raj:Kya hua puttar.

Rish:Kya hua matlab..Sab aapke pyaari bahu Tanujaji ko jawab degi..

Raj:Matlab..

Rishi:Mr.Oberio ne Project cancel kiye...Aapke pathaa hein kisse ki waje see

Rano:Kisse wajae se..

Rishi:Mrs.Tanuja Rishi singh Bedi ne..

Tanuja is shocked..

Tanuja:Rishi mein kyaa kiya..

Rishi:Tum kya naye kiya..

Tanuja:Tum itni tho mere liye viswaas nayee..

Rishi:Viswaas..Pyaar..tum hare liya kya matlab tanuja..

Tanuja:Rishi mein pune tumae bachaanae keliye aayee..

Rishi:Oh Really..

Tanuja:Rishi please tum gussa matlo..

Rishi:Mein zindagi mein ek galthi kiyee..Tumse bahut pyaar kiye mein...Bahuth baadaa galthi..Mere Pyaar..Mere Viswaas..Mere Kasam..Sab tum thoda Tanuja..Kya zaroorat thee tum pune aayethi..Mein ek sawal poochrahoon...jawab dho..mujhe..

Tanuja:Kya Jawab Rishi..

Rishi:Pyaar ki dusri naam kya hain tumhare liye..

Tanuja:Rishi...

Rishi:Mujhe Jawab chahiyee..

Manpreet , Ahanaa comes there along with Yuvi and Divya..

Ahanaa:Biji kya problem hain..

Biji:Chup chaap..dekho...

Tanuja:Pyaar ki dusraa naam Viswaas hotha hain...

Rishi:Nayeee...dokha hotaa hain..

Tanuja:Rishi tum kya kerheho..

Rishi:Buss tanuja..Tum itni viswaas kartihoon naa

Tanuja:Bilkul Rishi..Kuch shaak hain..

Rishi:Then why the hell you came to Pune if you trust me..Mein sabko bathaathi hoon..Iss Tanujaji nee...mere aur nethra room ko police invite kiyee..arrest kiyee...Issliye Mr.Oberio mere characterless bolaaa..Papaji aap bolo mein characterless hoon..Manpreet tumhare baai characterless hoon..

Manpreet:Baai..aap bahut gussa mein ho..Please calm down baai..

Rishi:Papaji mein abhi nayee bardasht karungaa..

Tanuja:Rishi..Please..Mein kuch Galath nayee kiyaa...

Rishi:Tanuja..tum nayee jaanthi mein iss bees saalo mein kissi halath mein hoon..Mein Ek ladki ko bepanaaa pyaar kiyaa..shaadi kiyaa..wo margay...Phir tum ayee hein..Tumare papa nein..Mere tanu ko maardiyaa..Phir bhi mein tumse bahuth pyaar kiyaa..Tumhare vajase..me sirf..tumare wajase..mein...phele jhese Rishi bangayee..Mein Tumse except naaye kiyaa..Tum mere property ..saaara property...Phir bhi...mere dil kehethaa hain...Mere Tanuja kuch kaaran wajasee..iss taraf...behave kiyaa..But...mein..bahut tolerate kiya tanuja..You have tested my patience..I just cannot tolerate no more..Please get out of my life...Get out i say...

Tanuja:Rishi...

Rishi:I said get out..

Tanuja:Rishi mein jaahongi...kabhi nayeee wapass avoongi...

Biji:Tanuja Rukh betaa..

Raj:Rishi...Tum kyaa kekhriyo puttar..

Rano:Rishi tum iss decision achaa hain..Bahut achaa puttar..iss ladki nein hum purraa..zindagi karab karthi..

Tanuja:Rishi mein jarahoon..

Rishi turns this side and goes to his room with tears in his eyes..


Precap:

Rishi wandering in the night...in the hall.

Manpreet:Rishi baai Tanuja naayee hain..

Yuvi:Rishi tum galthi kiyee..Itnaa Gussa..

Rishi:Manpreet , Yuvi...Mein Bahut Gussa mein hoon..Main..tanuja binaa..nayee resakthee..Mein Tanu bina..zindagi gheethi..Phir Tanuja mere jaan hain..Mere Pyaar..Mere Kasam..Mere wajhooth..Mere Viswaas..Mere Dhosth..hein..Mere ek baath...chaaligayee..Mein jharaahoon..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one please continue.Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the comment friends..

Will update shortly...today itself..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AniSweety

Thanks for the comment friends..

Will update shortly...today itself..



great...will be waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update update soon next short

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